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Max sighed. "Lorelai, I'm sorry, I really am. I wish I could change time I never would have-"
Lorelai crossed her arms. "Well, you can't", Lorelai interuppted.
"Dammit Lorelai, you are so stubborn!", Max yelled, raising his fist.
"Don't you dare touch me Max, I will end our mairrage right now!", she threatened.
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Max slapped Lorelai across the face and grabbed her arms tightly, pinning her against the wall and kissing her fiercely on the lips.
"M-max...stop", Lorelai got out while Mas kissing her, now sucking on her neck even more fiercely.
"STOP!", she yelled, tears running down her face, he was really starting to hurt her now.
Max moved his mouth to her face and bit her ear. "If you're going to leave me, at least let me fuck you one last time, Lorelai", he whispered.
Lorelai's eyes grew wide in astonishment, Max never spoke to her like this before. He grabbed her arms tightly once again and pushed her on top of the bed. He didn't get any further because the door swung open.
"Leave her alone, Max!"
Max turned his head to see Luke come into the apartment. Luke walked over to him and punched him square in the face.
"What the hell is wrong with you!", Luke yelled, getting ready to punch him again.
"Stop!", Lorelai yelled. Both men turned their heads towards her. "Just...stop, Luke, he's not even worth it", she said, tears running down her cheeks.
Luke nodded. "Get out", he said. Max didn't react.
"I said get out!", Luke yelled. "Get out of my apartment, out of my diner, just get the hell out!", Luke yelled.
Max hurried towards the door, afraid of what Luke would do to him if he didn't leave.
"Max, wait", Lorelai called. Max turned around and Lorelai reached into her pocket grabbing her wedding ring. She looked at it for a moment and shook her head and then shoved it at him.
Max bent down and picked up. "Bye, Lorelai", he said before shutting the door.
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The entire diner was so quiet that Lorelai and Luke both heard the bells above the door chime as Max left.
As soon as she heard this she broke down sobbing. Luke went over to her and wrapped his arms around her.
"I-I told myself I wouldn't cry about this a-anymore", Lorelai choked out through tears.
"Shh", Luke soothed. "It's okay to cry".
"Why did he ch-cheat on me? W-was I not pretty enought o-or smart enought or-", Lorelai stuttered.
"Shh, Lorelai, he's just an asole", Luke interuppted. "You are all those things and more. It's Max's loss".
Lorelai pulled out of Luke's embrace and took a deep breath. "I-I'm fine, it's just hard to believe, you know?", Lorelai said.
"Um, this is going to sound really stupid but, that was a rhetorcal question, right?", Luke asked.
Lorelai smiled weakly and just nodded. She sighed. "Look at me, crying all over you. I got your shirt wet", she said, feeling bad.
"Hey, don't worry about it, It's not a big deal", Luke replied.
"Sorry you had to be here to witness my breakdown", Lorelai said.
"Yeah well, what are friends for?"
Lorelai smiled. "Yeah, what are friends for", she repeated quietly.
Okay, I know it was short andvery stupidbut I'm having bad writer's block. I just feel so...unmotivated, blame it on the season finale. Anyway, if you could give me some ideas, I'd really appreciate it. Please review...