A/N. I made the story longer so people could tell me if my story was good or not.
Disclaimer: I do not own rurouni kenshin
Chapter 2
Death?
He was careless that day. He was told the enemy was strong, but Battosai was ignorant. He jumped the enemy. Battosai was getting sloppy, he automatically thought that his target was as good as dead.
An ego can be your worst enemy. It can cost you your life.
The target was as quick and sly as a fox. He read Battosai's every move. He did attacks that Battosai had never heard of, much less seen.
Beads of perspiration were seen on both attackers' faces. Neither one was letting up. On and on the battle raged, from sun up to sun down.
Battosai felt he was losing, or at least getting weaker. His enemy must have felt it too, for his attacks got stronger and stronger. At last, Battosai felt him lose his grip on his sword. The sword landed on the ground, next to his opponent.
The glee of victory on his opponents face as he plunged the sword deep, deep, into Battosai's side. Pain. Worst than anything he ever felt, rang out inside of him. He felt the sword inside of him, destroying everything in its path.
Then a female's voice rang out! Calling the name Enishi. Enishi, his target, his victim, and his murderer?
Falling to his knees, Battosai glanced up. The world was spinning, and he felt himself collide with the ground. The woman, her face pale, but her hair darker than the very night that was surrounding them. She glanced down at him. Battosai was losing conciseness. Her hair and face was mixing into the darkness. Black surrounded him, all around. The pain fading, along with the females face. Gone. Into the swirling black darkness.
A/N. Ok, I think that was long enough? Reviews please! I think this chapter was a little dark, but im not sure.