Ok, keep in mind that this is my very first story on fanfiction and I hope I do ok, so I need tons of feedback!
"Can we go any faster?" I asked quietly, hugging Rob tighter and putting my cheek against his leather jacket. He looked back and gave me his signature smirk and went faster. He gave my hand a squeeze and I could feel his heart beating. We were on out was to Chick's biker bar on our first official date with each other since I told my parents about us. My dad was cool with it, but my mom threw a complete hissy fit. (not in front of Rob, thank the lord) My dad and I spent 2 weeks trying to convince her that he was a really great guy and that I was in good hands with him there. As you can see, she gave in and here we are.
He helped me off the bike when we got there and he gragged me and gave me a kiss. he smiled into my mouth and heldme like that for a while. Man I love his kisses!When he pulled back, he winked at me and opened the door for me. We walked into Chick's hand in hand and sat down as Chick (the owner) came running over. "What's the hurry Chick? Uh oh… is something wrong?" I said, worriedly. He said "jess… there's someone here to see you and it's an emergency. I've been trying to reach you but…" he trailed off. "oh my god, what's wrong?' Rob asked him hurriedly. Chick said "come with me and stay quiet!" he pulled us into the back room with him.
On the was I heard Rob mumbled under his breath "I can't even get through one date with you without you without drama" and I looked back and gave his hand a squeeze, saying sorry without speaking or stopping.
When we walked into the room I saw what the problem was. It was horrifying! The shape was sitting in the chair in shambles and softly crying. "Jess, I need your help" the shape croaked.
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