~{ AUTHOR'S NOTE }~

(Extremely Important Please read the whole AN;))

Note after Update: My deepest apologies! It's been brought to my attention by XenoLicifer-san, my stories lacked a lot of standard at the beginning. But I've tried my best to solve most of the problems. I was inexperienced and blinded by excitement!

My writing improved in the future chapters! Know I did make rookie mistakes, you may even find my Naruto OOC but believe me, he isn't going to be one of those almighty beings. This story has him pretty strong but not God-like.

I do not like the notion of a plain story with no credible characters to any of my characters and treating them like an object.

I updated very fast in the starting but neglected quality over quantity. I recently read a forum of authors where most mistakes a author could make were pointed out to me. I took them to heart and I really wish to deliver the best of the content to my limited followers.

I am well aware I didn't update for a month but I haven't abandoned this story, period! My only work this first weeks after realisation were of extreme self-doubt and I faced severe lack of motivation to write.

Most common problems:

My character is too perfect!...

So guys I don't know if it is true! I could have an author bias. But I'll try to make him relatable.

I'll avoid cliches' as much as I can. But sometimes I may beautify a cliche' and not make it boring for you guys!

Second, harem! So guys You could say every story that has harem are very hard to write. I take the challenge on! I'll not have a plain harem where girls will just fawn over Naruto. Some things look uncharacteristic for the cannon girls but they aren't fallen for the protagonist just until now!

I'll list off the names of Harem girls I've revealed:

Seliah - She is sealed. She was around six when she last interacted with Naruto. So, no way she loves him. He is the only person left from her past now though. We will see development in future.

Ultear: I know she blushed and acted differently in the arc I showcased her but its because she was a little girl who never interacted with a guy before in her life. Naruto infact was her only friend and important person besides her mother who she now resents.

Angel: She does like him a bit due to his consideration for her dream but to be honest she doesn't love him. I am a mature person and I know kids don't know love, especially slaves who struggle for survival. They simply don't have any such thoughts. Although, she has a crush on him like Erza had on Jellal in the Tower of heaven. The current situation stands where she is probably a dark mage and Naruto and her won't have a lovey dovey reunion.

Erza: She does admire him but it isn't love. Honestly though, I am trying my hardest for every girl to be into character and still fall for my MC. Even the original authors make the relationship forced like Jerza. When I saw Jellal was paired up with Erza I got the whole SasuSaku vibe. TBH I hate this pairing, she loves a guy who killed her friend in front of her! Who traumatised her for most of her life. I mean c'mon!

I read this on that minipa something trope story! I was enlightened by the fact! How much wrong I've been doing stuff lately.I know you guys, I cannot avoid every mistake. It's impossible. But I'll try my best to make naruto's growth, power and character believable.

So basically Erza admires him now! She doesn't realise anything! or any other girl for that matter! They aren't adults to understand their feelings! So get over this, My harem Is going to be unique. Not just slutty girls dreaming over Naruto. That would be toxic.

Hisui: It's really clear! He is her friend! Now she is around four years younger than him, so it is pretty obvious both don't even think about such things.

Kagura: Basically zero interaction. But I needed her introduced early on because of a future plan of mine...

So basically in present no girl understands or even knows how or what they feel for the MC. The MC himself isn't one for that type of love and I'm not making him a pervert. Also, if you don't know this Naruto like the cannon one is alone here, he needs friends desperately and that's clearly shown in the next chapter...

This Harem will develop over time with a slow-burn and many fun things will happen. That's the fun in writing and reading, you don't know what's going on.

Every girl has a problem, their character growth and their realisation for their love as well.

You may find this a bit like a spoiler but a recent comment made it clear! One of the comment was about some pokegirl or something.

So dude nice joke! But I wish to say that if it was over how I am writing then you made me realise. I just was making Naruto roam earthland and the plot wasn't moving forward. I've corrected my mistakes then! I hope you all react to this afterwards, I need to know what you think bout this!

Third problem bashing, I don't think this is a bash fic. I personally believe characters can act a bit edgy and rude at times so it isn't bash. Remember, Naruto was ignored in his village by the people, it wasn't a torment like people like it to be.

The Mary Sue part, I agree to that! That was the point that drew me in. I have portrayed Naruto as perfect but that won't be happening. At first he was a kid, so no sue part there, Itachi was a genius so you can't tell me that he cannot be that strong at that age. Although the higher maturity and righteousness are some points I thought of and then I edited a whole chapter to match the new set of qualities Naruto would have.

He will be grey but not dark and super violent like in Dragonslayer. Other things, you could tell me through reviews.

Also I got the response for Lucy. Now I wish to know about Cana. I know I am asking a lot but I promise this is the last time. Know I am not going to make everything instantaneous, so it may take a lot time but that is what it will be worth reading.

So the question: Do you want Cana to be in the Harem?

My dear readers, through this story I seek to improve myself, my content and also the standard for the content of FF. I know I cannot do it single handedly but atleast through minimising my mistakes, I could make a great story for us!

I'll correct all the chapters up until now and update them in the next 24hrs! Then next chapter will be updated.

I am sorry again I made you read such boring rant but if you care even a little about this whole thing leave a review about your opinion on this change in my writing.

You must've noticed my improvement in writing atleast...I am putting my best effort into this. Your support is appreciated!

[ If you've just skipped the AN I request that you read it! It is highly important that you read it to further enjoy the future chapters!]

I hope you like my decision and support my vision for this fiction!

Next Chapter 9: The Tenshi Incident!

Ja Ne!