Ok. Im copying this from my quizilla page. Please review and give me some constructive criticism. The chapters will be longer when I start actually writing the rest of the story. I've only got a couple chaps done, and half a page on is a full page on quizilla.

"HAVING FUN."

Sora and Yuriko turn around to see...

Kisho(bet u didnt c that coming)lol

Two heartless appeared out of nowhere, and grabed them both, holding their hands behind them, so there keyblades were out of use.

(kisho's words are in CAPITALS)

"HA, I FINALLY FOUND YOU SORA."

Kisho slowly put a knife to soras neck.

"NOW I WANT YOU TO BEG FOR MERCEY."

"Never, your father deserved what he got."

"DONT SAY SUCH THINGS TO ME YOU WRETCH."

He held the knife high over soras head.

oh no, im going to die!

Sora closed his eyes waiting for pain to consume him, But it didnt. He slowly opened them, and saw that Yuriko had taken the wound in her arm. and she was still fighting.

"Yuriko!"

Her eyes were tearing as she looked at sora.

"Master Sora, you have to run, I promised to protect you, and I will not go back on it now."

"But Yuriko I..." sora was cut off.

"Go now! your staying here will only put us both in danger. I will come find you, I promise."

With that said, Sora cut a time slip with his keyblade, and then walked into it with one last quick glance at the battle. Yoriko sure could take a punch.

:..UNKNOWN PLACE..:

"Sora Wake up." That's a familiar voice, wait no it couldn't be

Sora slowly opened his eyes

yes I was Right

"Riku! I found you."

"Well, actually sora, i found you."

"Oh, haha, i guess your right."

Sora slowly remembered Yuriko.

"Oh no! Yuriko."

"Who?"

"She is the one who saved me from kisho."

"Wait, who's kisho"

Sora started telling Riku about everything that happened from when kairi was there, to the part that he left in the darkness thing.

"Kairi! How is she doing?"

"She misses you alot, I promised I'd Bring you back, and I guess I can now!"

Suddenly there was another time portal, Riku grabbed his sword and jumped in front of sora, protecting him.

Yuriko slowly staggered out of it, and fell on the ground

"He got away..." Her Voice faded as she passed out.

She was beaten up pretty badly.

"Yuriko, she's alive!"

Sora tried to get up, But was too weak form using so much power on the keyblade portal thing.

"Stay there." Riku threatened.

He gently picked yuriko up and took her into the next room. He layed her down on his bed. It was the only place he could put her. He then treated her wounds and left the room.

"Hows, Yuriko!"

"Calm sown sora, she's just sleeping. You should get some rest to."

With that, Riku layed down on the couch and fell asleep.

Sora fell asleep shortly after him.

:..Around 2:00am..:

"CRASH"

"What?" Riku jumped out of bed, his sword out.

He looked around the room and saw nothing. being very quiet, he walked silently over to the door to the next room, and slowly looked inside, hearing a deep voice. He stood there and listened.

"SO YOU'RE THE PROTECTOR OF THE KEYBLADE MASTER."

"You couldn't be any more right."

Yuriko's thoughtsI have to get my key blade, concentrate. It worked!

Rikus POV

Im standing here at the door, watching and listening to there conversation, at least sora's still asleep!

"WOAH! she has a keyblade".

Normal POV

"Back off, or i'll kill you, I will never allow you to kill master sora!"

Riku's ThoughtsMaster, why did she call him, master?

"OH NO YOU WONT, YOUR MUCH TOO WEAK FROM OUR LAST BATTLE."

Yuriko's Thoughtsoh no! hes right.

Kisho roughly wrapped his arms around yurikos waist. He pulled her face close to his.

"HOW ABOUT A GOOD BYE KISS."

"Get away from me." But yuriko was too weak to push him off. Just when Kisho's lips were about to touch Yuriko's, Riku jumped in.

"Dont touch her!"

"SHUTE, I'LL JUST HAVE TO KILL YOU LATER"

Kisho cut a time portal and went through it.

Yuriko was lying on the floor hurt.

"Are you o-k."

Riku ran over and picked her up, and held her in his arms. She looked up at him with her beautiful Brown eyes and said," Thank you, I owe you my life."

Riku blushed, but then tried to hide it. He layed her back on the bed.

"umm...uh...your welcome, but you don't owe me anything."

"Yes I do, I know! I'll protect you too, What is your name?"

"uhh... It's Riku."

Master Riku, I am here to serve you."

Then Yuriko slowly drifted off to sleep.

Riku just walked back into the other room and layed down on the couch. He stayed up thinking about Yuriko. There was something about her that he just couldnt get out of his mind.

Finally, He fell asleep, wondering what the next day was going to be like.