Episode 1, More Brutal Than Ever!
The scene opens in space with two astronauts fixing a satellite, which had the words "TDR, TDAS, TDPI" crossed out, the only one not crossed out was "TDB"
Chris(voice-over): We were on a toxic island, we went back to all our stars...
A light from the satellite glowed green, the two astronauts gave a thumbs up towards the camera, but a few seconds later the satellite broke up and the two astronauts looked down in disappointment.
Chris(voice-over): And this season right where we left off...
The camera landed on the ground and came down from the sky to show Chris on a dock near an island.
Chris: On Pahkithew Island!
The island had changed a bit, apart from the new pier near the beach, with a sign that said "Camp Pahkithew"
Chris: I'm Chris McLeane, and as you can see the island has changed a lot, now called Camp Pahkithew, I name it, anyway, we are in a new season and with a new cast, who will fight for the well-known prize of...UN ...A MILLION DOLLARS!
A sound of elices was heard from afar
Chris: Speaking of which, here they come now!
A military helicopter appeared in the sky
Chris: Meet the new stars, let's start with the men, meet Ferb
The plane door opened to reveal a boy with black light skin and curly black hair, brown eyes, a purple t-shirt and blue jeans.
Ferb: Umm, hello?...
Ferb said before Chef in his army suit pushed him out of the helicopter, Ferb screamed before falling into the water.
Chris: Cool, this is Jude
The Chef approached the entrance holding a boy with pale skin and hazel eyes, messy red hair, he was wearing an orange and yellow sweater, brown pants and white sneakers, he was also wearing glasses, he was holding a book
Jude: Let me finish this chapter...
Chef ignored him and released him, dropping and screaming before landing in the water.
Chris: The troublemaker, Kerdan
A black boy with brown eyes and black hair, wearing a blue shirt, white jeans, green socks, red shoes, was currently holding on to the entrance of the helicopter while Chef pushed him trying to throw him off
Kerdan: You can't beat me, McLean!
Chef managed to push him out and make him fall into the water
Chris: The self-proclaimed heir to Sterling Electronics Inc, Vincent
A white caucasian boy, with blue eyes and a black slicked back hairdo, wearing a black suit and pants, white T-shirt, black leggings, red tie, appeared at the entrance of the helicopter
Vicent: Don't bother, I'll jump myself
Vincent jumped neatly out of the helicopter and into the water.
Chris: Here's Maxime
A pale-skinned boy with deep blue eyes, dreamy-style hair that goes down to around the back of his neck, pale and bright blonde, he was wearing a dark green t-shirt, a faded image of a turtle on the front, a pair of dark khaki pants, which have clearly been mended repeatedly. An old, stained pair of heavy brown slippers stood looking down on the water
Maxime: Is it safe to fall from this height?...
Maxime asked before being kicked by Chef and falling into the water.
Chris: This is Sol
An African American boy, with black eyes and black hair, wearing a yellow tank top, black basketball shorts, and white sneakers came out of the doorway and looked at the others.
Sol: That's not a jump, this is a jump, look...
Before Sol jumped, Chef kicked him making him fall into the water.
Chris: And the wrestler, and he's Latino, Lucas
A boy with pale skin, brown eyes, short black hair, wearing blue professional wrestling tights, black shorts with "Blue Chaos" written on them, white boots with a "BC" on them, and a blue and white wrestling mask, he walked out. on the way out right on the shore
Lucas: Alright, it's my time, aqui voy, aqui voy, aqui vo...
Before jumping, Chef kicked him in the butt causing him to fall into the water, Chris laughed
Chris: And now to the ladies, meet Destiny
A Caucasian girl with black eyes and black hair stepped out of the doorway, wearing a pink dress with one sleeve, spade earrings, a heart-shaped necklace, and red go-go boots.
Destiny: Rock n Rule!
Destiny screamed before jumping out of the helicopter and falling into the water.
Chris: The obviously cheerful, Lilly
A white girl with long brown hair and eyes came out the doorway, she was wearing a gray zipperless hoodie over a purple and white t-shirt, blue jeans, white socks and gray shoes, the girl sighed emotionlessly.
Lilly: Life is meaningless.
Lilly leaned far enough to the edge to fall into the water without any emotion.
Chris: The rebel and gang leader, Lacey
A girl with pale ivory skin with long blonde hair and black eyes, wearing a black headscarf, black skull-patterned blouse, black fingerless leather gloves, armless blue jean vest, gray skinny pants, and black boots, walked out. the exit, Chef tried to push her out of the helicopter
Lacey: Hey, don't touch me!
Lacey told Chef before he pushed her off the helicopter and into the water.
Chris: The little strange girl, Kristine
A girl with light blue eyes, with light tan skin, long, spiky, jet black hair came out the exit, long, spiky, jet black, came out the exit, wearing a black t-shirt with little neon pink and green skulls on it glow in the dark and ripped dark gray leather pants
Kristine: I smell (sniffs) FREEDOM!
Kristine happily jumped hands up out of the helicopter and into the water
Chris: A girl who is Cody's cousin, Debbie
A white girl with a bit of a tan came out, she had straight, choppy, auburn hair that reaches halfway down her neck, she was wearing a blue jean jacket, orange tank top showing a bit of cleavage, long periwinkle jeans, long orange socks and red boots with white laces
Debbie: Say something mean about him, and I swear I'll...
Before finishing his threat, Chef pushes her out of the helicopter, falling into the water.
Chris: From the western foreign continent, Sakura
A pale white girl with Asian features, pink eyes came out at the exit, with short black hair that reaches her shoulders in a lock, she has a pale pink streak in the middle of her hair, she was wearing a mini dress pastel pink lolita, has separate long flared sleeves, a ruched midsection and a circle skirt at the bottom, a white headband and yellow flats
Sakura: Greetings everyone
Sakura salutes before jumping into the water.
Chris: And the crazy girl, Billie
A fair-skinned, blonde girl with blue eyes came out the door, wearing a yellow t-shirt that said "Club Loco!", a short light green skirt, green socks, and a combination of yellow and green sneakers.
Billie: CANNON BALL!
Billie jumped out of the helicopter, the rest of the participants who were in the water swam away until she fell into the water causing a big splash, the camera goes to Chris
Chris: Man, this season is going to get crazy, just like these guys, this whole thing here on...Total...Drama...Brutal-er!
Intro
The participants had swum to shore to rest and dry off.
Dessie: Chris will pay for this...
Lucas: Same here, this mask shrinks if it gets soaked.
Kerdan: Hey, masked man, why are you wearing that?
Lucas: Nadie te pregunto
Kerdan: Um, what?
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Lucas: Being here helps me in two things, one, can I get more contracts for fights, and two, will I get a good looking girl, acaso no soy guapo?
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Kerdan: Alright, so far so good, we were thrown from a helicopter and I'm surrounded by several crazy people, cool right?
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Jude was on the ground without his glasses searching the ground disoriented
Jude: Oh, my glasses, where are they?
Vincent helped Jude up and gave him his glasses.
Vincent: Here you go, friend.
Jude: Wow, um, thanks.
Jude said as he put on his glasses
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Vincent: My father taught me that you have to be very courteous with people, but from now on, I'll be the lonely boy, it's my policy
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Destiny: It's great to be here, we're finally here, we're legends now
Lacey rolled her eyes.
Lacey: Sure, launching from a helicopter makes us legends.
Lilly: Why? What case do you have? In the end he will leave you alone for the rest of your life
Destiny: Um, what?
Lilly sighed sadly.
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Lilly: Being in this confessional is so...lonely, it's so cold, it seems like I'm going to get sick and then I'm going to die.
Lilly sighed
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Ferb: Don't worry guys, when we get to the cabins, the fun will start
Lacey: Say it for yourself.
The speakers of a nearby tree turned on
Chris(over PA): Greetings newbies, meet me in the woods following the path
The participants saw a path through the forest
Chris(over PA): Run to the end, but remember, there are rules, and the only one is..."Don't disturb the animals in the forest"
Jude swallowed.
Jude: Don't disturb them?
Ferb: Hmm, this sounds familiar.
Nebbie: That's right, I must have heard this somewhere
Chris(over PA): I repeat...DON'T...DISTURB...THE ANIMALS...understood?
Kerdan: Pff, sure, we don't want to bother vegans either
Kerdan said mockingly and Ferb smiled agreeing with him
Chris(on PA): A loud sound can make them wild, like this...
A loud horn sound was heard throughout the forest which made the participants cover their ears, after the horn went off a loud roar was heard in the forest, some trees fell and several laser beams shot into the sky, the participants were shocked by this
Lucas: Santa madre de Dios!
Maxime: Don't panic, there's only one thing to do...RUN!
The participants ran screaming towards the path
After a few minutes, everyone had reached the end of the trail where they stopped to catch their breath.
Sol: Ha, I got there first
Sakura: No, I got there first.
Sol: Who says?
Chris: Me!
Chris said as he and Chef approached the campers
Chris: Welcome to Pahkithew Island, anything to declare?
Lucas: What the hell was that thing in the woods?!
Jude: I'm sure there weren't any animals in the book that shot lasers!
Chris: Don't worry, that will be cleared up later, but first, who wants chips?
Ferb: Oh, me!
Chef threw a bag of chips at him, Ferb opened it eagerly, when he took a handful of chips and ate them he suddenly spit them out pulling out a blue card
Ferb: What the... a blue potato?
Chris: The team members will be determined randomly, Ferb, on the right, you're on the blue team.
Ferb shrugged and went to stand to the right as he continued to eat his chips
Chef tossed another bag in Kerdan's direction, who crushed it, tearing the bag and revealing an orange card, before he took it, Lacey grabbed it away from him.
Kerdan: Hey, that's mine!
Lacey: And I took it first!
Both began to fight for the card
Chris: Enough, plus we only had thirteen bags, so you both are on the orange team, over to the left.
They both walked to the right while staring at each other
Chef threw more bags at Lilly, Jude, Billie and Vincent, who opened and took out their card.
Chris: Lilly and Vincent, to the orange, Jude and Billie, to the blue
Chef threw a bag at Lucas, who, taking the card, released it in pain.
Lucas: Oh, I cut myself!
Chris: You'll fix it soon, towards the blue
Lucas walked to the right while moaning in pain.
The Chef threw more bags at the others
Chris: Sakura, Destiny and Maxime, orange team, Debbie, Sol and Kristine, blue team
All the aforementioned met their respective teams
Chris: If you don't like being with the people on your team, don't worry, in case you get expelled, if you have this it will be very helpful.
Chris showed a wooden invincibility idol
Chris: The McLean idol of Invincibility is back!
The campers stared in amazement at the figure
Chris: Whoever gets it will be more powerful than you can imagine.
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Kerdan: That statuette is mine
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Lucas: I have eagle eyes, I will find her very quickly
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Lacey: Now this got interesting.
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Chris: Ok, time to name the teams
Lucas: Team Chaotic!
Billie: Team Madness!
Sol: Team Victory!
Nebbie: Don't say that, you'll give us bad luck!
Chris: Hush! The names have already been chosen by yours truly, orange team, now they will be known as...The Artificial Fishes!
An orange logo appeared on the screen, where there was an orange fish with a toy grain
The team blanked out for their name
Kerdan: Pff, what a stupid name
Lacey: I agree.
Destiny: I think it's colm
Chris: Now, blue team, you guys will be... The Robotic Bears!
A blue logo appeared on the screen, where there was a robotic-looking blue bear
The team shared strange looks
Ferb: Um, why are there so many references to robots?
The same roar from before was heard again, alarming the campers.
Jude: It's the monster!
A blue bird came out of a bush looking at the campers
Kerdan: Pff, it's just a little bird
Destiny, Debbie and Sakura looked at the little bird tenderly, before the bird looked at a flying butterfly and shot lasers through its eyes burning the butterfly, all the campers gasped in shock.
Kerdan: WHAT THE F*CK?!
Destiny: OH MY GOD!
Lucas: Santa madre, que rayos?!
Chris: See, Pahkithew Island had something similar happen to Wawanakwa Island during Revenge Of The Island.
Those who saw that season panicked
Kerdan: Don't tell me what!...
Chris: Nope, the island has no toxic waste, we are past that stage, in case you don't remember, Pahkithew Island is almost artificial.
Jude: An artificial island?!
Chris: Yep, and maybe you should have watched that season before you came here.
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Lucas: Those of us who didn't see Pahkithew Island are damned, including me.
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Chris: The most violent robots are out in the woods, when it comes to security here, there is a shelter where the cabins are.
Maxime: And what are we waiting for?! Let's go from here!
Chris: Well, we will go to the shelter, not without first making a challenge, who will win? And who will survive? find out after the cut
Commercial Break
The campers are shown lined up in their teams, in front Chris, Chef and some interns were there at the entrance of a large tunnel.
Chris: Welcome to your worst nightmare!
Lucas: That's not scary, it's just a big tunnel
Chris: You know what characterized the fourth season, well welcome to your first challenge...The Toxic Challenge!
Most are nervous about this.
Chris: The toxic waste is toxic, and everything it touches...is toxic.
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Kerdan: More toxic than Gwuncan, I don't think so.
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Chris: We don't have any toxic waste, but thanks to the biology department, we were able to create something like that.
The interns with gloves rolled a metal box with a biohazard symbol, the Chef with tweezers took something out of the box and it was a marshmallow that glowed green, he showed it to the campers
Chris: The Toxic Marshmallow from Loserdoom!
Campers were shocked to see its bright green light
Chris: Believe me when I tell you that no one wanted to touch this bad boy.
Billie: I want to touch it...
Billie murmured being the only one excited
Chef: And I assure you that you did not want to touch his friends
The campers saw that the tunnel had a lot of more toxic marshmallows lying on the floor of the tunnel.
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Bilie: Yep, I want to touch them
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Chris: The challenge is simple, you will have to run through the tunnel while avoiding the marshmallows, at the end of the tunnel you will find the shelter that is the finish line, the first team with all its members there wins, and the last one will have to send a member home, you have 1 minute to strategize, starting now
The teams begin to gather
Sakura: Alright guys, it's all teamwork, don't separate for a second
Kerdan: And be with this girl, never
Kerdan said pointing to Lacey, she got upset
Lacey: Same for him, maybe we don't need it, I'll win for our team
Kerdan: There are obstacles, what do you want to do, yell at them?
Lacey: I can get there faster than you.
Kerdan: Ha, I doubt that
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Kerdan: Ok, this is my plan, surely all Total Drama strategists get very "villainous", but this time it will be different, I will break the status quo of this, but if there is no bad guy besides the bossy girl, maybe he's a good villain
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Lacey: I'm on a team of losers, I'm only doing it since I need the money, for my gang at home who are watching this, don't touch my motorcycle or they'll take it out on me
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Sol: Very well, this will be my plan, you guys in the back and me in the front
Debbie: Hey, we all have to be together to win, remember?
Sol: Silence, I have to concentrate, Cody's cousin says
Debbie got a little mad and tried to hit him.
Lucas: Okay, guys, let's just be careful not to touch those marshmallow, todo estara bien
Sun: English, please
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Lucas: Estupido
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Sol: If someone is going to arrive first, that will be me
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Debbie: The jock better watch out and not talk bad about "him."
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Chris: Time's up, now everyone to your positions
The teams lined up at the tunnel entrance
Kerdan: I'm going to crush you at the finish line
Lacey: We'll see about that.
Maxime: Umm, guys, don't we have to be together?
Chris: Attention players! Another little detail, the race will be in the dark.
Chris pressed a button, and the light in the tunnel went out, showing the toxic marshmallows as the only illumination that glowed dangerously.
Jude: I want to go home...
Jude murmured swallowing hard.
Chris: On your marks...
Jude looked at Debbie.
Jude: So you're Cody's cousin?
Debbie: If you say something mean of him, I'll smash you to pieces.
Jude: W-what?
Debbie looked at him with a smile showing her sharp teeth, Jude gulped nervously.
Chris: Get set...
Most were in running form, preparing for the final signal, as Lacey and Kerdan gave each other one last glare.
Chris: GO!
All the campers shot towards the tunnel, Billie managed to cross everyone effortlessly
Billie: I HAVE TO TOUCH THEM!
Billie jumped towards the marshmallows, falling to the ground and hugged them tenderly, just before various parts of her skin became inflamed from contact with them, she screamed in pain while the other campers looked at her shuddering as they continued to run
The campers started running while dodging the marshmallows, people like Vincent, Sakura and Lacey managed to dodge perfectly, but Kristine accidentally stepped on one, swelling her foot.
Kristin: Ow!
Debbie helped Kristine move.
Debbie: Come on!
Lilly was walking slowly without any emotion
Sakura: Girl, start running!
Lilly sighed
Lilly: What's the point of running, in the end we'll end up losing...
Sakura grabbed Lilly's hand and ran with her
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Sakura: God, what's wrong with that girl? I get it though, I would act like this if my stepmom was around
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Sol and Debbie, carrying Kristine, they getting ahead of the others
Lucas: Guys, we're falling behind, wait! ...
Just Lucas stepped on a marshmallow swelling his foot
Lucas: AH, QUESO CON GALLETAS!
Lucas, trying to take it off, fell towards more marshmallows, thus swelling his butt
Lucas: H*JUEPUTA, MI TRASERO!
Jude and Ferb looked at him wincing in pain.
Lacey and Kerdan had reached a part where there were no marshmallows on the ground, they were in the lead.
Kerdan: Only that you can run?
Lacey: I'm warming up...
Just a toxic marshmallow flew over them
Kerdan: What the...?!
They both looked up the tunnel, where on the second floor interns were throwing toxic marshmallows, wearing gloves for safety.
One of those marshmallows fell on Kerdan's shoulder, which swelled up, he tried to remove it, but when he did, his hand also swelled up.
Lacey: Ha, that hurts! ...
Just a marshmallow fell on his ankles, causing him to fall and his ankle swell
Lacey: Ah!
Vincent managed to run past her, Lacey got up and ran again trying to catch up with him and Kerdan.
The other campers also reached this part
Jude: I'm scared!
Ferb: Don't worry, everything will be fine...
He had accidentally stepped on a marshmallow causing it to catch fire and fall to the ground.
Jude: OH NO!
Jude tried to run but several marshmallows hit his face causing it to swell up, making him scream very loudly from the pain, an intern used a slingshot to throw a marshmallow at him that just fell into his mouth, after a few seconds Jude swelled up completely looking like a ball and began to roll, the intern and another who was next to him bumped their fists smiling
Lacey and Kerdan were ahead, Lacey laughed when she got through it, but then gasped when they reached a part where there were marshmallows hanging from the ceiling, she accidentally touched one causing her other ankle to swell and she started running on tiptoes
Lacey: Ow! Ow! Ow! Ow!
Kerdan came running as he became more inflamed, he and Lacey managed to see a light at the end of the tunnel where the goal was, they both stared at each other and began to run more and more, exposing themselves to the toxicity and inflaming themselves everywhere
Outside the tunnel, it was shown in slow motion as Lacey and Kerdan jumped fully bloated towards the finish line on the ground, the camera returned to its normal speed and they both fell into the line at the same time, where Chris and Chef were waiting for you
They both got up off the ground
Kerdan: Take that, bossy girl!
Lacey: Did your skull dry up? I beat you!
Kerdan: Get your eyes checked, I crossed first
Chris: Actually, Vincent got there first.
Lacey and Kerdan: WHAT?!
They saw Vincent resting in a tree
Vincent: Good afternoon
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Vincent: It was really easy, and now my team will win, thanks to me.
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Maxime, Kristine and Debbie made it across the finish line too
Chris: Now it's 3 to 2 with the Fishes winning.
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Maxime: Maybe I wasn't the first, but hey, I got these new gloves.
Maxime showed his hands completely swollen, he tried to clap but then it hurt
Maxime: Ow, it hurts!
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Sol made it to the finish line just before Sakura, Lilly, and Destiny, all without any swelling.
Sol: Ha, come first, we win!
Chris: Ahem, let me repeat that, I said that the first team with all its members wins, or it seems that you are missing some members, and it seems that they are already here
Jude, Ferb, Billie and Lucas came out completely inflamed
Jude: I don't feel anything at all.
Lucas fell to the ground unconscious.
Chris: That means the Artificial Fishes win the first challenge!
The Fishes began to cheer, Sol approached the last four angry
Sol: Look what they've done, we've lost!
Billie: Hey, it was fun, wasn't it?
Billie laughed to the annoyance of some of her teammates.
Chris: And since you're in the shelter now, it's time to clear up a few things...
Maxime: BEAR!
A bear was eating honey from a jar
Chris: Oh yeah, the "real" animals stayed here, so if you don't want it to be your dinner, please don't bother them.
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Billie: Living with animals, cool
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Chris: There is also a big change, the losers in this case the Bears will stay to sleep in this cabin
There was a dirty and somewhat damaged cabin, the Bears groaned in disappointment
Chris: And the winners in this case the Fishes, will stay sleeping in this Spa
Very close to the cabin, there was a more refined house, where behind it was a swimming pool, the Fishes cheered for their reward
Chris: Now everyone go to the infirmary to get those swellings out, Robotic Bears, I'll see you tonight for the first removal ceremony.
The team was disappointed while Sol crossed his arms in annoyance.
Elimination Ceremony
At the elimination spot on Pahkithew Island, the Bears were sitting on logs. Chris arrived with a plate that had six marshmallows on it.
Chris: Cheers to your first elimination ceremony, the votes have been counted, those who are safe will get a marshmallow, and this season, we're going to repeat a punishment for the loser, a marshmallow they didn't want to eat.
Sol: As if those marshmallows were a punishment
Chris: Actually, we have something new this season...
The Chef with some kitchen gloves approached holding a box, which opening it revealed a marshmallow burning in flames
Chris: Whoever gets the Molten Marshmallow of Defeat will be out of the game, those who get a normal marshmallow can stay...Ferb
Ferb caught his marshmallow smiling.
Chris: Jude
Jude caught her marshmallow as she adjusted her glasses smiling.
Chris: Sol
Sol caught his marshmallow still upset
Chris: Kristine
Kristine caught her marshmallow smiling.
Chris: And Debbie, they're safe.
Debbie caught her marshmallow neutrally, Lucas was nervous, while Billie was neutral.
Chris: Guys, it's just you two left, and the Molten Loser's Marshmallow goes to...
They both stare at the marshmallow...
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Chris: Billie
Lucas breathed a sigh of relief as he received his marshmallow.
Billie: Well it was fun while it lasted.
Chef threw the marshmallow at her, she caught it but then quickly let go
Billie: Ow, it burns!
Chris: It will burn you more the way you go home
The scene cuts to Billie inside a canyon.
Chris: The Cannon of Shame! ...yes, I ran out of ideas
Billie: Oh yeah, shoot me, BOOM BOOM!
Chris: You're crazy... of course
Chris pressed the button causing the cannon to explode, sending Billie flying to the horizon.
Chris: One down and there are thirteen left, who will be the next to be shot by the old cannon? Find out next time in Total...Drama...Brutal-er!
End Episode
Votes:
Ferb-Billie
Jude-Debbie
Sol-Billie
Kristine-Billie
Debbie-Billie
Lucas-Billie
Billie-Lucas
Teams:
Artificial Fishes: Destiny, Vincent, Lacey, Maxime, Sakura, Lilly, Kerdan
Robotic Bears: Sol, Nebbie, Kristine, Jude, Lucas, Ferb
Elimination Order:
14-Billie (The Crazy Girl)
Conclusion
Finally the first chapter is here, congratulations to those who competed here, I thought that very few would send applications, but I was surprised that many and some authors that I knew sent me Ocs, what a surprise and thanks for the support, it lasted faster than I thought
Here are the Ocs and their authors:
Ferb-By me
Destiny and Sol-By Dunsparce 519
Lacey and Lucas-Lacuevademisgustos
Jude and Lilly-By GirlPower 54
Kerdan-By MegAxlo 68
Vincent-By ZNBT
Billie-SAMOTA
Debbie-By Fritz Electroscreech
Maxime-By DogWalker4
Kristine-By Wolfik128
Sakura-By Fluffygirl5
Fun fact, all these except mine were so far all the requests sent, what a coincidence
As for the challenge, if you are one of those who watch Pixar movies, you will have noticed that the challenge is similar to the toxic challenge of Monsters University, when I saw that movie again I was so amused by that scene that I decided to put it in Total Drama, they even have the same dialogues and situations, and this season is a bit inspired by Revenge Of The Island
As for the elimination, the first expelled is Billie, she was like a new version of Izzy, very funny, but she wasn't very developed, so I cut her first, sorry if the creator feels bad, but remember... don't be sore losers
The placement of the team members, they were done randomly by one page, so I had 0% control here, then I'll see what plots I can do, like the Kerdan and Lacey rivalry, anyway, see you in the next chapter