Let The Tor- I Mean Training Begin
Author's Rant On 3/23/2017: Hey guys, I had this completely irritating reviewer leave this so I wanted to put it in since for some reason he didn't take the time to actually log in.
From: Matt (Guest)
Matt:This is crap. Reasons why 1. Percy/Naruto is WAY overpowered., 2. You skipped some very good stuff from the first quest(i.e. helping the animals, going to the casino(where Percy/Naruto could've helped the di Angelo's), and slaying Procrustes and Medusa)., 3. Percy/Naruto doesn't need to go to S.o.M. since he captured Luke therefore erasing the need to go on the quest., 4. Any P.J. series readers favorite cyclops, Tyson is out., and 5. Luke being captured no body for Kronos to possess no Titan War. So just stop these stupid stories already and delete all of it.
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Okay first of all, MATT, (If that's even your real name which I doubt) The fact that you left this as a guest tells me your either too lazy to spend five minutes creating a profile, too lazy to sign in, or too scared to have someone actually answer you back. Let's look at your so-called reasons now that that is out of the way.
1. Naruto was a century old shinobi before he finally fell to sleep and didn't wake up in his home dimension, you don't get that old in that world without being able to bend the world over your knee and spank it silly. Look at the Third Hokage, how old he had gotten and how strong he was. Therefore, your so-called reason shows your failure to understand the back story of the main character.
2. So what if I skipped some things? It's called fanfiction for a reason, it's supposed to be different, either slightly or greatly. If you want to read things going the exact same way, open one of the books. I would also like to point out that the book Percy was just a twelve-year-old who was metaphorically picked up and dropped straight in the fire, there's no true planning with his group, just reactionary actions. Naruto/Percy on the other hand has had twelve years forewarning and has taken appropriate measures for cross state traveling with how he approached the people of Eagle's Roost. There are further preparations ahead but for the sake of not spoiling things for those who actually enjoy this I will not mention them this early. Oh, and about him helping the di Angelo's, even if he somehow deduced they were demigods, if he did that, then why would he and the others go up to Maine where they would meet a Manticore and Artemis? Learn what the ripples of an action would cause you short sighted ignoramus.
3. HELLLOOO, Luke is not the only demigod, nor does a demigod have to be the current 'mook leader'. Your short sightedness is really quite astonishing.
4. We're still in the month where Percy/Naruto first came to camp and Tyson appeared during his time at Meriwether College Prep which he attended AFTER his first summer at camp, get your timeline straight you lazy bum.
5. Please refer to number three, you're starting to sound like a broken record.
Finally, your comment about the stories being stupid and I should delete all of them? If you don't like them so much, then why did you read the first book all the way through? I don't THINK anyone is strapping you to a chair and forcing you to read this so that's on you. And furthermore, one word reviews of 'crap' the whole way through is not only nonconstructive, it's highly immature. Go get a baby bottle and have some milk and a bottle of baby food you brat, because clearly you're hungry and just bitching at the world to get some attention.
Sorry all of my other readers, but that guy just rubbed me wrong with his constant 'crap' reviews. Let's get to the part you actually want to read yeah?
Story Start: Day One Of Time Dilation
All of the early risers of the camp had the amusing experience of hearing a bugle sound out a wake up call at seven am before two minutes later those who weren't getting out of their beds were yanked out via chakra threads held by shadow clones who were standing in the cabin doorways. The clones acted in full on drill sergeant mode ushering their students into the showers, the few non students or those whose schedules gave them a late start watching with sleepy grins before going back to sleep. Not among said zombie state students were Grover and Annabeth, the two having been awoken an hour earlier by the original Naruto.
Said students were currently getting their second winds after Naruto had them run five laps around the camp's perimeter, the currently a blond thirty year old shinobi looking over them from where he was crouched on top of a tree branch. Naruto glanced at an imaginary watch on his wrist and said "I think that's a long enough break. Let's move onto tree climbing."
The two students both perked up as Annabeth asked "You already figured out how to let us do that?"
"It wasn't actually that hard to do." Naruto said as he jumped down before pulling out four slips of paper and continued "These seals go directly onto your feet and have three settings, off, solid surface attachment, and liquid suspension, controlled by mental commands. Don't think learning how to use these are going to be easy though, beyond the fact that you're going to have to learn how to quickly turn on and off the SSA function in order to move faster than a snail you also have to build up all of the muscles in your legs and back to be able to support your weight while being perpendicular to the ground or hanging upside down. It'll probably take you the entire year's worth of lesson time to become adept at using the SSA in a combat situation and probably just as long to get to the point where you can properly use the Liquid Suspension system in the same manner."
"Then I guess we better get started." Annabeth said with determination.
That determination flagged slightly as Naruto gave them an evil grin and said "Guess we should, fair warning, after we cover the basics, I'm going to be shooting at you two with this." The two paled at the high-powered paint ball gun the blond unsealed before looking at each other with wide eyes, one thought passing through their minds: What had they signed up for?!
Time Skip: One Week Later
Chiron grunted as he took a kick to his chest and was sent skidding backwards before he charged back towards his blond opponent. Naruto's shadow clone did something that had him gazing at the sky overhead on his back and his currently transformed into a centaur opponent looked down at him with a grin as he asked "Shouldn't you be more used to fighting in this form than I am Chiron?"
"One would think so, certainly." Chiron said before he accepted the clone's offered hand and allowed himself to be hauled up to his feet. Idly rubbing at a sore spot on his lower set of ribs, he asked "How goes the training of Annabeth and Grover?"
"Well they've started going through the various translation dictionaries the Boss grabbed before we went under time dilation in order to come up with new ways of cursing him out, so pretty well I'd say." The clone said with a grin causing Chiron to chuckle.
The sound of an alarm clock on one of the bleachers going off marking the end of the hour had the clone dropping its transformation along with all of the other clones who had also been transformed in order to help train the non-human CQC class. Members of the next class, a mix of 'minor' cabins with a few Demeter kids thrown in started to come down into the arena proper from the bleachers where they had been watching while other students began coming in over the next few minutes from their previous classes.
Chiron watched the clones begin the class for a moment before he slipped out of the arena his radar ears twitching to the side before he glanced in the same direction with an amused look as a PT group of Ares kids led by a clone were running past like they had hell hounds on their heels, oh wait, that orange and sea green coloring meant it was just another shadow clone adding extra motivation. Chuckling at the sight, Chiron went to the Big House to begin doing some of the 'little details' work that came with being the one in charge of the camp. Just because they were under time dilation didn't mean it didn't add up if left alone long enough.
Time Skip: Two Weeks Under Time Dilation
"I saw an old lady walking down the street!" A clone called out as he jogged atop the lake.
"I saw an old lady walking down the street!" the group of campers jogging behind him using the Liquid Suspension seals on their feet repeated.
She had a pack on her back and boots on her feet.
I said hey old lady where you going to?
She said the US Air Force Para Rescue!
I said Ah, Ha!
Ah, Ha!
Ah, Ha!
Ah, Ha!
Hey old lady, don't you think you're too old?
You better leave that stuff to the young and the bold!
She said Hey airman who you talking too?
Said I'm an instructor at the Para Rescue!
She said Ah, Ha!
Ah, Ha!
Ah, Ha!
Ah, Ha!
Saw an old man walking down the street!
He had tanks on his back and fins on his feet.
I said hey old man, where you going to?
He said the US Air Force Scuba School.
I said Ah, Ha!
Ah, Ha!
Ah, Ha!
Ah, Ha!
I said Hey old man, don't you think you're too old?
You better leave that stuff to the young and the bold!
He said Hey airman, who you talking to?
I'm an instructor at the Scuba School!
He said Ah, Ha!
Ah, Ha!
Ah, Ha!
Ah, Ha!
The last laugh was called out even as the clone jumped up in the air to avoid Grover as he shot past on his back, throwing up a rooster tail that became two as the Satyr barely managed to roll on his back onto his feet where the liquid suspension seals could keep him out of the water before he sank, still sliding ten feet back before he could stop. Annabeth followed his actions not five seconds later causing all of the campers to stare as a black and orange blur shot past their group and slammed a flying kick into Annabeth's hastily raised guard sending her skidding even further back before the blur lashed out at Grover.
As the two students tried to withstand the just over their limits assault of their teacher the PT clone clapped his hands and said "Alright kids, nothing to see here, let's move." He began jogging again and after a few traded glances the campers began following again as the clone began another cadence.
The original Percy's lesson took to the air as he did a handstand and kicked both Annabeth and Grover's chins at the same time, pushing off the water to follow them before throwing a punch at Grover even as the Satyr activated his new Flight Seals (Which were made on anklets and bracelets) to stay airborne. Annabeth allowed herself to rise a bit further before activating her own Flight Seals before she shot down like a bullet with an axe kick trying to hit Percy's head, only for her eyes to widen as the son of Poseidon grabbed her foot with a grin before he swung her down and into the lake, a large splash of water shooting up from her passage. Turning back to Grover, Percy couldn't help the evil grin that spread across his face as Grover let out a nervous gulp.
Percy didn't waste any more time in pushing Grover over the edge of his limits. Five seconds later, a furious yell sounded as Annabeth shot out of the water and rushed towards the pair, murder in her eyes as she yelled out "You're dead Seaweed Brain!"
"What, you didn't enjoy the bath?" Percy asked with a laugh even as he easily defended her angered attacks while also fending off Grover at the same time. Annabeth growling was his only answer as the fight moved through the air all over the camp, Percy being sure to keep them inside the Time Dilation field during said fight. Eventually the conch horn sounded for lunch and the three landed inside the pavilion, Grover and Annabeth covered in bruises while Percy didn't even have any sweat on him. The two seemed a bit put off by that but it only seemed to make them more determined to do as well as they could in their training. At least they had practice with the Sarutobi rifles to look forward to after lunch.
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Short I know, but I almost didn't get this out in time, which would have really disappointed me since that would mean I only met my New Year's resolution just over half way. Hopefully the next chapter I need to work on won't give me as much trouble.