This is not a chapter, I was just so mortified by someone's review that I couldn't wait to address it.
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I think you took what I said wrong. I meant it that fanfics change the books to fit their story. Kel became a knight, but a lot of people have her going back to the Yamani Islands instead. That is changing the books, but that is what fanfiction is all about. If I changed anything else, I didn't mean to, and wanted someone to point it out. I think you took it as though I was just going to take the character Alanna and stick her in a story that was my complete fabrication, and I just used Alanna so I could put the story on this site. I don't know if I can stress without being able to put my voice to this, that I meant to change something small like someone's hair color. Hair color doesn't really affect the story and I don't think it is a big deal if I change it. As for Alanna meeting up with the same people she would if she went to Corus to become a knight, have you ever heard of destiny? Do you think that I am supposed to create a whole new set of main characters just because Alanna goes to the convent and not to the palace? Hey! I just think you read too much into what I said. I thank you dearly for all of the kind things you said. I'm still trying to find my style as a writer. I haven't really gotten into writing until a few months ago. When I write I tend to get a little to formal and I can't think of big plots. I'm a master of little ones, but I draw a blank when I think of the bigger picture. I don't sound like me when I write. I'm crazy, funny, goofy, wild, smart, bookworm in real life, but I'm working on trying to get that on paper. Hope this clears any anger with what I said up, and I'm sorry if it is what I truly believe as an understanding. Thanks for the time to express concern.
Starlit Emerald-eyed Empress