Okay, start with an Authors Noteā¦I have never, ever written any form of fanfiction ever in my life, but I love writing stories, especially the ones of the m/m variety. I've seen Brokeback Mountain 3 times now, got home from seeing it for the 3rd time only tonight, and I have a million ideas racing through my head. Basically the story will follow what would've happened if Ennis hadn't turned Jack away when he came to see him after hearing about the divorce I really hope I've got the town spelling of Wyoming right, let me know if I haven't! Also, I'm pure bred Australia, so I speak Aussie English fair dinkum, but I seriously suck at Cowboy English, so please bear with me!. And any flash backs will be in italics. So in short, on with the story!
1970
Jack couldn't help but feel the grin getting bigger and bigger on his face as he headed toward Wyoming, He had a long drive ahead of him, 14 hours to be precise, but hell, this was Ennis he was going to see and he would fly to the moon if Ennis asked him to. He received the postcard only the day before, short and sweet, just the way Ennis liked them.
Friend,
Alma and me's divorce has gone through, see you next month, when the fish are jumping.
Ennis
And that's all it took, 18 words that had suddenly changed his life forever. He couldn't help but to think back when he first saw Ennis, lookin' so shy and alone, leaning on the wall of that assholes trailer.
1962
The fuckin' truck had been playing up again, Christ he was surprised it had made it this far. He better git work after traveling this far and hell, that idiot who had shown up last year better not show his face again. He wasn't even good looking. Jack sighed as he managed to roll the truck into the driveway. He looked around, then he saw him. Looking incredibly shy and alone, like he had the weight of the world on his shoulders. But fuck, he was hot, nothing at all like Andrew from last summer. He stretched as he slid outta the truck and looked slyly over at him, not being at all shy about it, he leant against the side of the truck bed and checked him out. The guy shifted almost uncomfortably, but hell, if a guy could look that good when being so uncomfortable, it was him. And that's all it took. In those few minutes, Jack Twist fell head over heels for Ennis Del Mar.
1970
Jack pulled the truck over and slide out, stretching as he went. He really shouldn't have been bringing up those memories, driving with an erection was impossible, not to mention uncomfortable, but hell, a piss should fix that, and it did. 10 hours down, 4 hours to go. He couldn't help but feel a few fingers of doubt creep into his heart. What if Ennis rejected him? Fuck, he had no idea what he would do, probably a trip to Mexico, or 10. That might help numb him, but it wouldn't heal him. The only person who could keep him safe, was still 4 hours away, and to hell if he wasn't happy to see him. He'd make him happy.
4 hours later.
Jack pulled into Ennis's driveway, tooting the horn. He parked the truck and leaped out, grinning like a madman as he stared at Ennis, leaning against his truck. Then Ennis broke out into a huge grin. A grin which said he was happy to see him. "Jack fuckin' Twist!" he exclaimed, though only quietly. Jack could only continue to grin like a fool. "I got your postcard. I was kinda hoping that, well, maybe you'd changed ya mind." Ennis grabbed him into a full body contact, giving what Jack hoped was an answer. Jack pulled Ennis close and inhaled his scent. The next thing he knew was Ennis's mouth on his, his tongue dancing with Ennis's. Christ, how could this feel so good and yet be so wrong in the eyes of society. He moaned and pushed his hard cock into Ennis's. "Feel that cowboy? It's bin up for almost 4 hours now, Damn stubborn bastard refused to go down, and I reckon you're the only one who can git rid of it." Ennis's only answer was to kiss him again, a hard long kiss that made Ennis forget that his 2 girls were sitting in truck, and probably hearing, but maybe not listening to everything that they had said.
A sudden voice made them leap apart, "Daddy, are you kissin' him?"
Ennis spun around, "Christ Jenny! Git back into that truck NOW!" Jenny backed away, looking scared, her daddy never yelled at her, or Junior. Who was this man? Why were they kissing? Men didn't kiss men, they kissed girls and ladies. But not men, surely that wasn't mean to be. She slid back into the truck and looked wide eyed at Junior. "Daddy was kissin' that strange man out there Alma" Junior just shrugged, choosing not to believe her little sister, she did have a habit of making things up. "Girls?" They looked up, and Ennis continued, "This man here is Jack Twist, a special friend of mine Jack this is Alma Junior, and Jenny." Jack grinned and said "Howdy". The girls continued to stare at him. "Girls, say hello!" "Hello" the girls said together. "Now I'm gist gonna talk to Jack here for a minute, then we'll go to town."
Ennis dragged Jack away from the truck, closer to the run down shack, before kissing him again, and cupping Jack's hard cock in his hand. "Wait inside Rodeo, I'll take the girls out, then drop em' of at their mamma's. Then I'll be back to take care of you." Jack grinned sexily, "Is that a promise cowboy?" Ennis kissed him again. "Sure as your name is Jack fuckin' Twist it is." They kissed again, before finally parting. Ennis slid into his truck and tooted on his way out, leaving Jack to settle in as he pleased.
Okay, that's chapter one, any feedback would be welcomed with open arms. Not sure when the next chapter will come, but rest assured, there will be one!
