Okay, so maybe chapter 2 has come slightly quicker than I first though. I'm not one hundred percent sure on certain dates in the movie or the book (as I don't have it), so I figured seeing its fan fiction I could make it up as I please :D. Thanks to all those who have replied, I to like happy Jack and Ennis stories, so hence the reason I'm writing one! This will be my first attempt at a sex scene, so please bare with me, but my motto is: the hotter the better, so I'll see how I go! Also I'm going to use a song or 2 in this section, which are all modern songs of out time (so to speak) so if you could just pretend that they really existed in 1970, that would be great and they will be in italics. Once again, on with the story…
Ennis pulled his truck into the driveway, his headlights sweeping across Jack's truck on the way past it. He felt the grin stretch over his face. He was still here. Now didn't he have a promise to fulfill to him?
Jack heard the truck pull in, and he wiped the sleep out of his eyes. Seeing as it was dark now, Ennis must have bin gone a while. He hadn't meant to fall asleep, but 14 hours straight driving and only 1 piss stop does tend to make you rather tired. He heard the front door open and the sounds of Ennis removing his coat and hat. He watched as Ennis strode into the room before grinning sexily at him. Jack felt his cock respond. Christ! All this man had to do was smile at him and he got hard. Sometimes Laureen could do everything under the stars and it would still stay floppy. He felt it start to soften, 'No! Bad man Jack, do not think of your wife at a time like this. Especially when the man in front of you is 10 times hotter than she ever could be.'
Ennis dropped to his knees in front of Jack on the couch. "Now Rodeo, I think I had a promise all made out to you, didn't I?" He reached out and slid his hand suggestively over Jacks achingly hard cock, squeezing it through the denim of his jeans. Jack's only response was to lean back and groan, pushing his hips upwards so his cock rubbed up against Ennis' hand. Ennis leant into to kiss him softly, his tongue gently prying open Jack's lips, before sliding over his own. "Slow down Rodeo, we've got an entire lifetime ahead of us." He then slid his arms under a slightly stunned Jack and lifted him up, easy as if he was a young babe, before carrying him toward the bedroom.
Once there, he laid him on the bed and kissed him again, just not on his mouth, but all over his face, his neck before pulling him into a fiece hug. "I'm never gonna let ya go Jack Twist, never, ever agin. You're mine now, and I'm gonna prove it," He paused to kiss Jack, who was know even more stunned, before adding, "I'm gonna make love to you Jack, and show you jist how much I love you."
I'll be your dream
I'll be your wish
I'll be your fantasy.
I'll be your hope
I'll be your love
Be everything that you need
Jack finally recovered his senses and grabbed the back of Ennis's head, pulling him down into a crushing kiss. He rolled on top on Ennis pushing his own hard cock into his, yanking Ennis's clothes off, desperate to get at the skin beneath.
I love you more with
every breath
Truly madly deeply do.
I will be strong I will be
faithful
'Cos I'm counting on a new beginning.
A reason for
living.
A deeper meaning
Ennis felt the heat surge through him, he rolled over, pulling Jack underneath him and he struggled to get to Jack's hot skin. He yanked off the belt, (complete with rodeo belt buckle) and threw it away from the bed. Jacks jeans followed and Ennis grinned when he saw that he had no draws on underneath, He reached down and wrapped his hand around the hard cock, pumping it slowly, watching as the pre cum dripped of the tip and as Jack groaned and wriggled. Suddenly without think Ennis leant down and licked the tip of the hard cock. Jack almost leaped of the bed with the sensation. "Holy fuck Ennis! That felt fuckin' amazing!" Ennis grinned, before leaning back down and taking a the head into his mouth, sucking on it gently "Holy FUCK!" It must of felt good. He sucked some more and gently ran his finger down to Jacks hole, running his finger teasingly around it. Jack whimpered, he had never wanted this so bad in his life, not even that first night up on BrokeBack. "Please Ennis" he whispered, "What Rodeo?" "Make love to me". Ennis grinned, "You're wish is my command little darlin'". He leant over and pulled open the draw in the bed side table. "What the hell Ennis?". Ennis shifted a little nervously, " I, ah, got some stuff, ya' know, to make it a bit easier, when, I ah" Ennis was bright red now, and Jack felt a wave of love wash over him. "Oh come here cowboy, and bring that with you!"
I want to stand with
you on a mountain.
I want to bathe with you in the sea.
I
want to lay like this forever.
Until the sky falls down on me...
Jack went to roll over, but Ennis stopped him. "No, I wanna see your face", Jack smiled at him, and laid down on his back. He watched Ennis get into position, but instead of feeling his cock straight away, he felt Ennis's fingers. "What ya doing Ennis?" "Makin' it real good for you". He lay back and let the enjoyment wash over him as Ennis's fingers gently prepared him, before he felt the tip of Ennis's cock pushing up against him. He pushed up against it and Ennis pushed against him and he felt it slide inside. Holy. Fuckin. Shit. Christ, this felt good, so fuckin' good. He felt Ennis start to move slowly in and out of him, his moans mixing with Ennis's, his cock was achingly hard, and he groaned even more loudly as Ennis's hand wrapped around it, pumping it to the rhythm of his pumps in and out. They got faster and faster, before Jack felt it happening, low in his stomach, he didn't have much of a chance to say anying but "Guns going off!" before he came all over Ennis's hand. His hole clenched around Ennis and he heard Ennis moan before he came, spilling into him.
And when the stars
are shining brightly
In the velvet sky,
I'll make a wish
Send it to heaven
Then make you want to cry..
The tears
of joy
For all the pleasure and the certainty.
That we're
surrounded
By the comfort and protection of..
The highest
power
In lonely hours.
The tears devour you..
I want to stand
with you on a mountain,
I want to bathe with you in the sea.
I
want to lay like this forever,
Until the sky falls down on me...
Jack looked up and Ennis and smiled, "I love you Ennis Del Mar, more than you could ever know."
Okay, so maybe the
whole chapter turned into sex. Lets just call it a fluff chapter.
The song credits are as follows: Truly Madly Deeply, copyright
Savage Garden, sorry I'm not sure what year, but it was in the
1990's. Don't know if anyone agrees with me, but that song
could've almost been written for Jack and Ennis.
Chapter 3 will be up soon, please keep leaving feedback, I like it!
