Chapter 3
(hey! Hoped you guys liked the last chapter! This is the third chapter which I worked really hard on and I'm beginning to have writers block so I need suggestions soo review and SUGGEST! Chapter 4 will be the jealousy in the heart" the title sux but the story iz much better
Bakers lodge
" common guys we're going to be late!" Sarah yelled anxious to go.
"hold up sarah it doesn't start till 4 and it's ONLY 3!" yelled Lorraine.
" but I have to be there early to meet Eliot!" argued Sarah.
" NO YOU DON'T!" the whole house yelled.( I know it feels that I'm against Sarah but hey it's 8:23 am rite now)
"fine" sarah said finally giving up.
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Murtah Lodge ( Eliot is on the phone talking to his cousin Annie)
" ….. Eliot what if she doesn't like me?" said a very concerned Annie.
" don't worry about it you met her 5 times in your life" said a very calm Eliot.
" I know! But….but what if she doesn't recognize me!" said Annie.
" She still remembers you because I always send updated photos so don't worry okay?" asked Eliot.
" fine I'm ok now I'll see you in 10 minuets Bye!" said Annie.
" bye and remember don't worry" Eliot said. ( I don't know why Eliot called Annie she just lives at the end of the lake)
Country club 4:30
" Eliot!" yelled a very exited Sarah.
"oh hi" said Eliot looking around.
" who are you looking for?" asked Sarah.
" Kenneth" answered Eliot.
" why?" sarah asked again.
" my own reasons" answer Eliot.
" down here" Kenneth said.
" do you have what I asked you to get?" asked Eliot.
"yup" Kenneth said and gave Eliot a box.
Sarah wondered what was in the box that Kenneth gave Eliot. Sarah was in deep thought and snapped out of it when she heard someone speaking from the podium.
" excuse me may I have your attention please I would like to introduce you to my brother Nick and my work partners son Brian….now Eliot will introduce a couple of kids and make a little speech" said Mr. Murtah.
"Hi my names Eliot and first I would like to say thank you for coming this afternoon to celebrate the coming of my cousins and my best friends', I would first like to introduce to you my cousins, Annie, Suzy, Kevin, Brant, Jay, and Jordan and now I'd like to introduce you to my best friends Samantha, Andrew, Anson, and Samantha's twin Trey. It was five years ago when I first met Samantha and Trey. (Btw the are both all 13) Today was the day I met both of them and the day we all became friends. Kenneth and Samantha got along pretty great and so did the rest of the family. So today is very special and I hope you enjoy" that was the end of Eliot's speech.
( garden)
"Eliot!" yelled Sarah.
"Eliot!" yelled another girl.
Eliot turned around and saw Samantha and smiled.
" it's about time you got here" Eliot said
" I know but Anson didn't want to see someone…." Samantha said.
"who?" asked Eliot
But before Samantha could answer Kenneth came and gave Samantha a big hug.
" Samantha I missed you!" Kenneth said happy to see her.
" hey Kenneth aren't you glad to see me?" asked Sarah.
Kenneth looked at her and said "no"
All Eliot and Samantha could do by the way Kenneth's face was.
"hey Eliot wants to go and jump on the water trampoline?" asked Sarah.
" it's ok…" but before Eliot could finish his sentence Sean and Justin ( made up names cause I wanted young people in this one) and said " CRAZY STRING!" they took out cans of crazy string and sprayed it on Samantha and Eliot.
"SEAN JUSTIN!" both Samantha and Eliot yelled.
" hey Eliot instead of killing them like we did 5 years ago why not we just challenge them to a game of log roll." Suggested Samantha.
"YEA!" said Sean and Justin.
" ok fine" said Eliot.
"Can I play to?" asked Sarah
"NO!" all 5 including Kenneth yelled. ( once again it feels as if I'm against sarah but it's really late so sorry if she's your fav character)
" you can watch if you want" said Samantha
" no it's ok I think I'm going to go to my brothers and see what they're up to" Sarah said.
"okay" they said and ran off to get changed in their bathing suites.
YAY I'm finally done this section this is a long chapter for me cause I couldn't think of anything so sorry it took so long. this isn't the end just that I'm tired of working on this chapter because I know ur al anxious to read it.