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Thanx so much for all the reviews! They made my day! I'm glad you all liked it! Here's the next chappie of Alanna's wedding to George
Reviewers:
thingy of um thingyness: Thanx for the review, since you wanted more, I think that means you liked it. Did you?
AnimalWriter1: Thanx for the suggestion and the compliment! That's exactly what I was going to have happen! You and I think too much alike... It's scary...
Guacamole13: Glad you love it! Here's the next chappie, I'm sorry it's longer than yours, it's not my fault! It's your fault for telling me it had to be 2-3 pages long! (jk)
DOMLUVR4EVER: Yah, I think so too, but I'm glad you think it's good!
Dom's Angel: I'm glad you liked it! I'll do Kel and Dom next, but I'm doing 2 or 3 chappies on each persons' wedding. But don't worry! I will do them next!
hottie12oclock: You're welcome for the review! And thanx for yours! Here's the next chappie!
Kings Lioness: It might be I haven't decided yet... here's the next chappie!
Irish Violinist: I'm not sure yet... should I make it so he does? Give me your opinion plz!
CitrusFruit: I'm glad you like it! And I'm glad you like my style! I'm going to do a couple chappies on each persons' wedding then I'll move onto a new person! Does that sound good?
magewhisperer: This chappie is just for fun, but the next one will be about the wedding then I'll do a different person.
Arachnomadness: Thanx for the great review! try not to get the "or else" part! lol! Here's the next chappie! Enjoy!
silverspirit737: Thanx for the criticism, I appreciate it! I didn't realize I was going off the original perspective. Hope this one is more on track! And don't worry! I didn't take it as a flame!
Tidsmagi: lol! Thanx for the great review! And don't worry I plan to write more! Lots more!
Sorceress ShadowRain: I promised to do KD next but after that I want to do DN...unless you don't think I should... who would you suggest? Let me know! I agree! Lots of fluff! An di have read your and I think its great!
Now here it is the moment you've all been waiting for... Chapter 2!
As Alanna was leaving the palace chapel -her hand still clutching her ember stone- when someone startled her from behind.
"Alanna! Alanna wait up!" Roselyn shouted exasperated
"Roselyn? What's wrong?" asked Alanna worriedly
"Oh nothing's wrong," replied Roselyn "It's just that I've been looking all over the palace for you since this morning." she added thoroughly annoyed
"Oh right, this morning..." said Alanna remembering "Well, you found me, what say we go eat some breakfast?" she added starting off in the direction of the mess hall
"No miss!" Roselyn shouted, running after Alanna
Alanna stopped
"No? Why not?" questioned Alanna
"B-Because miss," Roselyn said unsure "Because you need to be re-fitted for your dress to make sure it fits, we need to check with the palace caterers, the Corus florists, and so much more!" she added throwing up her hands in frustration
"Wow, I had no idea we still had so much to do." replied Alanna quietly
"Of course we have a lot to do! It's the day before your wedding!" shouted Roselyn "Now come ON!" she added pulling Alanna off towards her rooms
(((2 hours later)))
"Are we almost done yet?" said Alanna in a very bored tone
"Almost, miss." piped the dressmaker in a tiny voice
The thought of arousing the Lionesses famous temper, was enough to frighten her into an, unusually quiet state
"Groan. I HATE standing in one place for so long." mumbled Alanna, a little louder than intended
"Oh don't worry miss, i-it won't be much longer. I promise!" said the dressmaker, thoroughly uneasy
(((3 hours later)))
"How many different cakes must I try!" Alanna said completely exasperated
"Uh... just a few more mistress." announced the palace chef, also the person in charge of the palace caterers
Also not wanting to arouse the famous temper, she spoke each word with thought and care
"If I have to eat one more bite of cake..." threatened Alanna, her temper beginning to rise
"What a coincidence!" said the chef hurriedly "We're finished!"
"Now we have to go into the city miss." added Roselyn
That drew a grin from Alanna. She would get to see all of her friends in the rouge. Maybe even George would be there. She brightened immediately. She was pleasant to the chef as she made her final decision, then left the room at a trot, with Roselyn in her wake. She ran down to the stables, saddled, and mounted Moonlight just as Roselyn burst in through the doors.
"Miss! Please slow down! I'm not as young as I used to be!" she stated panting "I have to go with you remember? You don't know where we're going!" she stammered
"Oh. That's true." Alanna sighed "I'm sorry, I just got carried away." she said quietly as she dismounted. "I'll help you saddle up." she added with a tiny smile
"T-Thanks." panted Roselyn
(((10 minutes later)))
"YAY! We're on our way to the Dancing Dove!" shouted Alanna with glee
"Umm... miss? I will try to say this as nice as possible, so as to refrain for upsetting you..." mumbled Roselyn "But I don't think we will have time to umm visit the Dancing Dove on this particular trip to the city... you see, we only have enough time to go to the florist's then get you back to the palace, before your briefing with King Jonathan, and Queen Thayet. Roselyn said softly, her voice almost frightened
"Perfect! The only fun thing I would have been able to do today, and it just HAD to be ruined!" shouted Alanna angrily
"I'm sorry miss. But it is the day before you wedding, you should at least TRY to enjoy it." replied Roslyn
"Sigh. You're right. I shouldn't be upset. I should try to make the most of this day." Alanna said more to herself then to Roselyn.
They rode along in silence for awhile.
"Look!" Roselyn exclaimed suddenly "It's the flower shop!" she added, a little too excitedly for Alanna's enjoyment
"Wonderful." said Alanna rolling her eyes
(((1 hour later)))
"Miss? Which one do you prefer? Roses, carnations, or the lilies and daisies? questioned the mild-mannered florist
"Oh, who really ca..." started Alanna "Ouch!" she exclaimed as Roselyn kicked her under the table "Oh, for! I suppose I like the roses the best." she said, forcing herself to do so
"And which color would my lady prefer? the undaunted florist asked "The red, pink, yellow, maroon, plum, white, or is there another that my lady liked better? she ventured
"I don't car... she began, but stopped when she received yet another kick from Roselyn. "Umm. I mean, it doesn't matter that much to me, why don't you choose?" she finished
Roselyn gave an approving nod, while Alanna responded with one of her deadly glares
(((Back at the Palace)))
Once Alanna and Roselyn returned to the palace, Roselyn went to Alanna's rooms to see if there was anything else to be done, while Alanna went up to Jonathan's study for the briefing.
When Alanna arrived in Jon's study she was quite taken aback. This is what she saw:
No Jonathan, no Raoul, no Gary, no guards, no one except Thayet and her other friends.
"W-what's this?" asked a very surprised Alanna
"It's your Bachelor-ette party of course!" the entire room chorused
In the room were: Thayet, Buri, Onua, Rispah, and lots of other ladies from various places in the Palace.
"We wanted to surprise you!" exclaimed Thayet
"And they even let me come!" added Rispah
"T-This is wonderful!" said a teary-eyed Alanna
"We'll have none of that now Alanna." Onua said sensibly "This is you night! We planned lots of fun stuff!" she added enthusiastically
Just then the door slammed open. In walked 3 of the provists' men.
"You are all under arrest." They said in unison
Everyone except Alanna stifled giggles
"And what have we done officers?" said an enraged Alanna "Why are we under arrest?" she finished in a rage
"You are under arrest," began the men "For being too Sexy!" said the men
Then one of the men pulled out a record player and they all started dancing around the room.
All the women including Thayet burst out laughing, while Alanna sat there stunned
"Y-you hi-hired s-strippers!" blurted Alanna after a moment
"Yes! It wouldn't be a bachelor-ette party without them! And you can thank Rispah! They were her brilliant idea" Thayet shouted over the music, as Rispah flushed crimson
The strippers continued to dance around the room, and eventually started shedding articles of clothing.
After another minute, Alanna joined in the laughter. All the women sat there laughing until tears streamed down their faces.
"So. Are you having fun?" asked Rispah with a sly smile
"This is the most fun I think I've ever had!" laughed Alanna
Then the door opened once again, this time to reveal a very cheery Roselyn. She was carrying a tray full of drinks and pastries. She walked into the room and placed the tray on the table then went to sit by Alanna.
"You knew!" shouted Alanna "Why didn't you say something?" she questioned
"And ruin the surprise?" Roselyn replied with a twinkle in her eye "What fun is there in that? she asked
Alanna replied with a tiny giggle. That giggle then turned into a full out laugh. Then not one of the people that filled the room could stop her laughing fit, nor did anyone want to. She was having fun, and so were they.
The party lasted until midnight, when Roselyn suggested that Alanna get some rest for the next day. She agreed, and said thank you to all of her friends and walked back to her rooms glowing with happiness.
She collapsed into her bed as soon as she walked in, not even bothering to change into her nightdress.
She fell asleep instantly but was troubled in her sleep. She was having the same nightmare she had, had the night before.
Dun Dun Dun!
What will happen next?
Was this one as good as the last? Better? Worse? The Same?
Let me know!
Also does anyone have any ideas? I've got a major writer's block! I'm actually surprised I finished this one!
Please review!