This is my first story, so I hope you like it.
Prologue
My name is Ravon. I am a clone soldier, and am going to die. I have committed high treason against the Emporor.They have given me 24 hours to convey my story to you. Here it is. Please listen with all your might…….
Chapter 1Darn! I was late for lunch again! The lunch today was my favorite, glow fish. I could not get into the line, so I sat at my usual place. Oh, did I mention I was a clone of Jango Fett? AND SO WAS EVERY FU#$!&#!ING ONE OF US IN THE CLONE SOLDIER COMPOUND! Jeezy creezy! This made me glad that every person (and I use that term lightly) that each person had a band on their arm to give an explanation of who they were and their physical condition.
Oh, wait let me explain all this. My name is clone #16. Well much easier to remember, is Ravon. I live on the planet of Kamino. You see, there was a Jedi who ordered group of clones made. I am one of the originals. As the cloning program progressed, The Aliens learned to speedily move the maturing of a clone. I am one of the only originals left. The others were lost to an epidemic. There is an explanation for this also. When a clone's matured faster they had an accelerated immune system, and when you are a natural clone (How is that possible?) you have to grow as a normal person would grow. So, they all died of some alien fever or another. But, there you go. I am one of the last, and I don't know it at the time. I thought I was just slow, and scrawny.
So,
luckily, my best friends Chale, and Dai came over to the table at
that moment. And, since I didn't get to buy lunch, they bought s
little extra.
"Hey
Ravon, I guess you didn't get to eat today, huh?" …….. I hate
it when he (Chale) did that.
"So, you just hungry, or you two going to help out a brother?" I had to ask, didn't I, I had to ask.
"Nope." Dai said.
That sorry mirgin, fragin, gragin, brogan"Give me that fish!" I had to repeat this a couple of times to get the food. They both handed me a clean plate, 2 fillets, and a little water. I was starving. And what do you know, by the time I actually got to eat, I had to go to practice. The Kitans were emptying the room. Well, I'll live.
well boys and germs, this is the end of chapter 1. I hope you enjoyed, Please, please, please review! i need those to get inspiration.
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