Disclaimre: One last time people. What do you think?

I'm going to use this one in another story, but posted it here to gauge a reaction. Soooo?

-Dying Inside-

She's screaming inside
Dying inside
All this pain and hurt
She's trying to hide

Her heart is breakin'
Dead souls wakin'
Reliving the pain
So long in makin'

No tears are falling
But her heart's calling
Lonely scream
Silence galling

Glazing eyes draw you in
Deep inside down to when
She was whole-
But that was then.

And now there's only now.