Hey guys its me again! First of thanks for all the favorites and followers!

And I also want to make something clear. I am not able to promise consistent updates. Live can keep me busy… please have Mercy on me okay? :)

Alright now to the Reviews that don't have an account (which is how I will answer them from now on)

PhantomDark: happy you like it. if genderbending isn't your thing than sorry about that but maybe a different story would be better suited for you.

Justareader: Thanks and Oh she will be part of the harem. I just forgot to add her.

FFReader: Thank you very much. That was something I really wanted to avoid. The typical 'love immediately' thing. It is honestly a bit annoying in harem stories. I would like to try and have the relationships form naturally and have some dynamic and have every partner be their own person still. It just wouldn't fit or be realistic otherwise. Akechi was tricky to do since I assume she would be somewhat detached from people and have problems forming connections or finding friends (like in the game). I honestly think she is touch starved and doesn't have many to have meaningful interactions with. So I hope I manage her right and show that part of her without making it look like she is immediately heads over heels for him.

For the two Guests:

Yes its not gay, not that there is anything wrong with being gay of course. LGBT+ is great :)

and Guest 2:

Thanks. I hope this will feed your desire for a good genderbend fanfic.

Good now with that all said two more things. Im going to make some relationships between the girls inside the Harem. Mainly because… well it makes sense. One example would be Ann and Shiho who have so many moments together. So there will be some shipping in between. It will still be a harem but everyone just loves everyone and there is no grudge or anything. A bit of polythieves elements. Also at the end of the chapter I will show you an updated version of the harem.

Okay with that all said Enjoy!

Akira had no words that could describe how good it felt to see the long nosed gentleman and the true velvet room attendant. A slight part of him was worried to find himself behind bars again and a divine cup cosplaying as his true guide. Seeing things as they are supposed to be lifted a heavy burden from his heart.

Even the Velvet Room itself felt different with its proper master in charge. He had only gotten a small taste of its atmosphere back then and yet there was a noticeable difference in how the Velvet Room made him feel. It felt… comfortable, as if to go home at a burning fireplace after a day of playing in the snow. Under Yaldabaoths heel he always had this unease when entering it. So this was a very welcome change.

Lavenza, oh the beautiful blue fairy girl, replied just as happy as he was. Running at him, she all but threw herself at Akira, who was pushed into the chair he sat on. Tightly hugging, the two smiled. She pulled back and smiled at him, "We too are happy about you landing here safe and well Trickster."

Akira simply smiled back, slightly chuckling.

He faintly noticed something else about Lavenza. Did she look… more mature? She was a bit taller, definitely taller than Futaba if he had to guess and looked more like someone his age, more youthful in contrast to her previous appearance.

Igor's coughing was what made the two snap out of their joy and turn towards the Gentleman, "Now… I believe you have a few questions, right?"

A few? Akira just giggled a little, still on his high, "You bet your nose on that. What the hell happened?"

Igor chuckled "Then allow me to elaborate." He summoned a book out of thin air and opened it, letting its pages flow out and swirl around the Trickster. On those pages where different events from his previous year, his battles against the palace rulers, the forming of the Phantom Thieves, meeting his other teammates and finally… his battle against Yaldabaoth.

"Through the year you spent in Tokyo, you made connections and forged true bonds that could have lasted a lifetime. Your power grew accordingly and step by step you came closer to fulfilling you destiny. Though… unfortunately, the corrupted god had manipulated the game from the beginning and even though you won, you did so at a price far too severe to call it a victory."

The pages swirled together, forming a new page showing him on his knees surrounded by corpses and blood. The image angered Akira greatly. That damn grail.

Igor continued, "As your guide I was supposed to prepare you for this task, I was supposed to aid you in fulfilling your destiny, though I clearly failed."

Lavenza looked at her Master with worry, "Master, this wasn't your-"

"But it was," Igor interrupted his attendant, "I was unable to fulfil my duty. My strength couldn't compare to the Grail. MY weakness is the core of the misfortune that befell you. I am fully willing to take the blame."

Akira now looked at Igor with wide eyes, he didn't knew the Velvet Room Master for long but to think he could actually feel so much guilt, it was an alien idea to him. "Igor I-"

"Do not try to make me feel better about this Trickster. There is no need I assure you. We from the Velvet Room have it as our duty to align fate in such a way that humanity has the advantage. Our failure has caused this unbalance." Igor almost looked like he was mourning, "Such a colossal misfortune didn't befall one of my Wildcards for a long time. Yet… it is now not the time to grief and ponder about past mistakes. Not if a new round gives the opportunity to change everything. Thus I used all of my power to reverse the wheel of fate to the point of you making your first steps in Tokyo."

With a handwave, the pages flew back into the book, making Igor close it and reopen it. Surprisingly… only one page was there this time, showing Akira meeting Goro.

Oh right… there was something else he wanted to ask. "Say about THAT."

"Ah yes let me explain." Igor tried anew. "When you managed to slay the god, the sheer power the fight unleashed, combined with your grief, caused a great unbalance. A distortion so severe it was beyond fixable. Thankfully I reset time but… Fate is like a river. It flows in one direction. The act I committed caused a new river to emerge from the one it originated. The moment you saw your allies fell, you managed to briefly unlock the true potential of the Wildcard, becoming much more than just a Sailor on this river and allowing this opening to happen."

Akira blinked. This… didn't make complete sense to him. "So you are saying that once I did… whatever I did that killed Yaldabaoth, I basically tore apart Fate?"

"That is one way to describe it. Yaldabaoth, having the combined support of the masses, was the ruler of fate. A supreme being that could mould destiny to his will. Him overthrowing us only further strengthened this. But Wildcards are an exception, an anomaly outside Fate's control. Thus… this caused ripples in fate, ripples that extended and altered fate, even as I reset time."

"Basically," Lavenza chimed in, "You bringing Fate out of its natural balance caused Chaos and in an attempt to fix itself without much guidance, Fate was altered."

"Okay I think I get it," Akira rubbed his head. Dear lord this was confusing. "But how did it cause a sex change."

Igor and Lavenza only shrugged.

Akira sighed. "Guess there aren't answers for everything."

Lavenza reassuringly smiled, "Worry not Trickster, even if Fate is altered, I am confident that you will prevail once more."

"And you can be assured," Igor stretched out his arms, pointing at the walls surrounding them and letting them fade away, revealing nothing but a void "This time you will have the full aid of the Velvet Room."

The Trickster smiled, "Thanks guys. I think I'm gonna need it."

"Now, before we depart, any more questions?"

"Well… with what am I starting out here? Do I still have the power I had previously?"

Igor seemed to be anticipating this question. "You start this journey having access to all resources you had in the first round. Your body is still the same as it was at Christmas Eve. The wide array of Personas you collected in the Compendium are still willing to aid you as well, but their true potential sealed away. You will have to reforge the bonds that allowed them to appear in order to properly use them. Any weapons and equipment have been transferred in this Box." He pointed at Lavenza who out of nowhere held a big brown box, only for it to disappear into a dozen butterflies. "It will be in your room in the real world. Once you have the time, go through its contents."

Akira nodded with sweet relief. So he was still having all his power. This was a good start already! But… did it also count for…

"Say do I still have what allowed me to kill Yaldabaoth?"

Igor only shrugged, "It is still inside you no doubt, but it will likely need some time to resurface. But worry not, we shall decipher this puzzle one piece at a time. Now then… the night is waning and it is almost time, but before we depart, I need to ask of you to sign this contract so you will become a fully fletched Trickster of the Velvet Room."

A paper appeared out of nowhere in front of Akira, simply hovering before him. Without hesitation, Akira instinctively grabbed it and he could feel the paper connect with his soul. In a beautiful blue color, his name was written on the paper, solidifying his bond.

It was good that he did it so soon, because he could feel himself drift apart from this different plane of reality.

In the real world, Akira was awoken by his alarm. Eyes snapping wide open he all but jumped out of the bed. He felt refreshed and determined.

Yes. NOTHING would stop him this time from saving everyone.

As he jumped out of bed he could already see the large box Lavenza held in her hands in a distant corner of the room. He would go through it once he was back from School. Alongside making some plans.

"Prepare yourself world." Akira thought to himself, as he dressed in his familiar school clothing, "The Trickster has arrived to take you by storm!" he finished his thought with a gleeful smile and went down to met Sojiro.

Akira's excitement was all but gone now.

He just painfully discovered another side effect of being sent back in time, one that extended beyond you're the only one to remember.

He had to go through all of it again.

And all of it…

Really meant ALL of it.

"To reiterate, just so we're clear."

"I completely forgot just how much of a pain this was." Akira mentally sighed as he let the lecture go over him.

Having to go through this farce of an introduction one time was already enough, but a second time? Ugh…

What didn't help Akira's nerves either was the sheer contempt he felt for this… Kingpin knock off!

It was a miracle he still could keep his temper in check. If he already felt this pissed around him, how bad would it be when he went back to the other Palace Rulers?

But again… how dare this bastard lecture him about manners and how to behave if he has been covering up Kamoshidas acts all the time and sells out his students for some conspiracy!?

Now that he thought about it… what was this prideful bastard Shido using Kobayakawa for? He was a principal. What influence did he have that could possibly aid him? Was he supposed to do some propaganda for the newer generation so that Shido will be praised and looked up by people who aren't allowed to vote yet?

What worth was Kamoshida even for him? How could a Gold Medalist aid Shido in any way? Now with that on his mind, he preferred to think about this mystery while letting Kobayakawa ramble on.

"Alright let's think about this. What if Kamoshida was a price of sorts?"

"You will immediately be expelled if you cause any problems."

"Yeah that could be it. Perhaps Shido arranged somehow for Kamoshida to get here as a present for Kobayakawa. Kamoshida was never part of the conspiracy, but Kobayakawa was and after some intimidation or so Shido gave him a medalist as a sign of what he can do to improve his life and the reputation of the school."

"Honestly, I hesitated on accepting someone like you, but there were some circumstances on our side."

"Kobayakawa became Shidos little lap dog. All so his crap place of a school gets some good reputation for once. This is beyond pathetic. I would like to say no human is like that but I know different from experience."

"You might have done a variety of things in hiding back at home, but you WILL behave yourself here."

"But still what does Shido get from him? I never heard any propaganda in this school. I mean granted he died before the elections so maybe his part should start then but still… why keep one so insignificant pawn? This is like chess for idiots. Shido has no reason to want his support if he has Artists, Criminals, CEOs and high ranking officials. What am I missing?"

"If you are thrown out from our school, there will be no place for you to go. Keep that in mind."

"Wait... at this point Goro told Shido about the Metaverse and how to access it. That means Shido knows that the first person to successfully enter the Metaverse was a student… Holy crap THAT'S it! Shido was expecting there to be more people that could enter the Metaverse, likely students like Akechi. THAT'S why he needed Kobayakawa! He was expecting someone to arrive and once it happened Kobayakawa should report to him and find who it was! After he failed in doing that Shido abandoned that idea… hold up. There is no way Shido only picked one school in the entire country. How many principals work for this scumbag!?"

"Are you even listening to me?"

"Oh SHUT UP you fat bastard! I already heard the crap you're saying! What is more important to me is how utterly pathetic you are! God I can't even look him in the eye!"

"I am." Akira swiftly replied. Kobayakawa nodded quickly, sighing a little, as if he expected this student to cause trouble. "Oh he has no idea."

He pointed at the woman standing to his left. Akira at this point simply droned out what he was saying with her. But Kawakamis words deeply resonated in him, as he looked her over. At first he hadn't noticed it, being too caught up in feeling bad for himself and being pissed at his situation. But now with all he knew, Kawakami looked like a walking corpse! There were wide bags over her eyes and she didn't so much as emit a singly spark of happiness.

She gave him his ID, with an almost mechanical movement, "Be sure to read the school rules. Any violations will send you straight to the guidance office. And if by chance you cause any problems, I won't be able to protect you at all."

"I get it Kawakami. Just like you didn't think you were able to protect Takase-kun." Akira could feel his temper flare up at remembering THESE rotten excuses for people. Taiki Takase's guardians were absolutely disgusting, even compared to all the things he has seen in the Metaverse! Forcing a child that lost his parents to break by working too hard and then extorting the one person that wanted to help him, all because they THOUGHT his real parents looked down on them. THOUGHT!

"That's why I let our son experience what it's like to be forced to grovel! It felt nice to see him gradually break down from working so much…" were the exact things he had said, his wife being no better.

These people were sick. Sick doesn't even begin to describe it. It was a wonder they hadn't formed a palace already!

Oh Akira would RELISH in beating their shadows down! Maybe he could make some time in between exploring Kamoshida's castle.

But there were other people besides them as well, just as rotten or perhaps even worse. The cult leader that harassed Chihaya and made people disappear. The horrible excuses of parents that used Futaba's friend. The doctor that blamed Tae and would have let a child die. So many shadows to go after and only one year of time…

"Wait… FUCK I can't do any of that yet! They were all in the deeper parts of Mementos! CRAP! And even if I could I would ruin the timeline if I would take some of them down immediately. Dammit! I could try and break the gates down? I should be strong enough to do that now. But that would only raise questions for the others and I don't want to give them a heart attack yet and tell them I'm from the future. Yeah I am not looking forward to THAT talk. And I need to keep in mind that they aren't as strong yet. I would have to do this all myself. UGH! I never realized how much of a pain time travel was! Here I am with the power to change the world and I can't do shit yet!"

"Are we done here now? Can we get going?" Sojiro's voice snapped him out of his thoughts. Right the talk was over now. It's not like the world stopped while he cursed his situation.

They soon departed and he gave Kawakami last look before walking out the door.

"Sorry Becky. But I promise I will fix your situation as soon as I can."

"They are treating you like some nuisance." Sojiro told him while they were walking out the school.

"I know… heard it before. And trust me you don't need to tell me to behave, that message is already in for a long time."

Sojiro eyed Akira weirdly, "Hey don't get pissy with me. It's not my fault that you are where you are."

"I know. Its gods fault."

Sojiro sighed exhausted, "Blaming God is not going to help you either kid."

"It's the truth though. Well not directly. It's the fault of a divine sippy cup that thinks himself god and a wannabe Messiah who's Shadows must be obsessed with bodybuilding."

"Sorry boss. But I promise I don't aim to cause you any trouble." Akira tried to reassure him. Sojiro looked like he wanted to say something but out of nowhere.

"Akira!"

A female voice spoke to him. Looking at the source he saw no other than Miss Goro Akechi, in her usual attire. Oh yeah, they wanted to meet up.

"Okay Akira, you had your freak out. He is a girl now, accept it and move on."

"That is the right attitude!"

"Oh hello Arsene. How are you?"

"Fine but angry."

"What… why are you angry?"

"Our beings are connected Akira. Your wrath is my wrath."

"Oh… right."

"Good morning Herlock! How are you?" he replied to her as she walked towards him, rolling her eyes at the nickname, but surprisingly still smiling.

"It is SHERLOCK, Lupin. And I am fine." she now stood right next to him, "shall we go then?"

Before Akira could answer, Sojiro coughed and the two soon to be Thieves turned to him. "Ähm… who is that girl kid?"

Oh right. Sojiro didn't know about Akechi.

"Sorry boss. May I introduce you, Goro Akechi, Detective Princess and my first friend in this crazy City."

His guardian looked surprised and stared at the girl, eyes wide behind his glasses. He soon caught himself however "One day and you already got a friend? Well… can't say I complain. I do know you from somewhere. You are the girl giving all these interviews lately aren't you?"

Goro simply nodded, looking flustered for some reason. "Yes that's me. I met Akira yesterday and we sort of got to know each other. We agreed to meet again today."

"Sorry boss, forgot to tell you. On the bright side… you don't have to drive me?" Akira apologized while rubbing the back of his head. Sojiro just looked at the two students and rolled his eyes. "Well I am not against it. Just make sure he doesn't get in any trouble okay?"

"Don't worry I will be careful." Goro promised.

Akira couldn't help but chuckle. Oh if only Sojiro knew…

The old barista walked over to his car and was soon gone from sight, trying to avoid the traffic problems no doubt, leaving them alone.

Thus Akira turned towards the Detective, looking just as formal as always. And she looked pretty red in the face. "Is something wrong?"

"Oh no I'm fine really. Just… I am surprised you already called me a friend."

Akira acted slightly surprised, but in truth he had guessed something like that, the Detective was completely untouchable in the first round. "Well, we are on nickname basis and meet up to hang out, this seems to be a good definition for friend in my book."

Goros face was unreadable for a moment before she nodded, "Well I can't argue with that logic."

The raven mussed, should he try and test the waters a little? "I mean if you don't want to be friends with a convicted criminal-"

"NO! That's not it I swear." Goro quickly corrected. "I don't mind your record it's just… I am not really used to people calling me that."

…

Okay that actually tugged on Akira's heartstrings a little.

He knew. He knew everything the girl's been through in her lonely life and yet it hurt to see her actual talk about it somewhat. Time to cheer the Princess up a little.

"Well get used to it," he said with a smile. One that was quickly reciprocated. Wow. This was… really different. He had seen Goro smile in a fake way but to see her genuinely enjoying herself was quite the delight to see. Time to change the topic.

"So… where are we going."

"Oh right. We go to Kosei academy. I'll explain on the way there."

"What the hell is WITH me all of a sudden?"

Goro thought while walking with Akira. They were heading towards the prestigious Kosei Academy. A school highly focused on arts of all forms. As such, its music and art classes were famous and well known. Last week she had gotten the offer to listen to a school band by one of her fans that was the lead guitarist. She eventually accepted given that she had to do SOMETHING for that blog of hers (curse whoever invented blogs). She had listened to some of their songs and was somewhat liking them "Last Surprise" being probably one of her favourites.

So with that she had out of nowhere decided to just invite Akira with her. An idea she was kicking herself for. Would he even like music? He seemed to enjoy the idea as she told him but what was to say he wasn't just faking interest? Should she just have offered to go see a Movie perhaps?

Speaking of why was she even so strongly thinking about this!? Fine so she had found a guy who apparently liked spending time with her. So what? This is normal. People her age do this all the time. There was no reason to be overthinking this.

Except if he was just trying to get under her skirt. No that wasn't it. She would have noticed that. She could divide very easily between the people who really enjoyed her work and those who just see her as another girl on their lap. Akira was… genuine.

"Come on Goro just act. Like you always do. Come on, you're used to this."

Except she couldn't. For some reason she could not put on one of her public masks. Was it because Akira already saw through them? Somehow within the time of one conversation he had seen through her and already they… formed some sort of connection.

Fine so she was worried about possibly injuring him when she did a mental shutdown on that scumbag of a driver. Abusive trash. That piece of shit once almost killed his own daughter in his drunken rage. The hospital seemingly didn't care enough to press charges or whatever excuse he had given them.

Truthfully, Goro didn't care about that piece of breathing garbage. All she cared about was that the job was done and that bastard will lose his job and get in prison after she had anonymously leaked the evidence to the police.

Just like Shido wanted her to…

No. Don't think about him now. She focused back on her latest target.

His Palace was at least pretty small, so she could get it done within an hour.

The new… company certainly helped though. Robin Hood, while being what some would call a perfect Hero personality wise, was very strong, almost as strong as Loki with a wide variety of spells. And he had a weirdly, calming function on her. Lokis madness was addicting, powerful and a burning inferno in her heart. With Robin Hood she had a comforting and soothing flame.

Honestly… she liked how it felt.

Which leads back to Akira.

How in the World had he caused this!? How did this complete stranger cause her to awaken this power?

That was likely it. That was likely the reason she was so worried around him. Yeah it had to be.

However she couldn't deny that Akiras presence by her side did warm her somewhat. Not unlike Robin Hood.

"Looks like we're here." His voice snapped her out of her thoughts. The gate of Kosei was open before them, unusually empty due to it being weekend. The band was still practicing daily however, much like other students who wanted to practice in peace or don't have the means to do so at home.

"Yeah looks like it." She spoke, "We will have to wait for the band though. They told me they would meet us-"

Her phone ringed, announcing an incoming message and interrupting the Detective. She quickly glanced on it and saw immediately it being the head guitarist.

"She just texted me?" she wondered somewhat. Why was she texting her now?

"Well what does she say?" Akira asked his company. Goro read through it quickly before sighing and reading it again out loud.

'Sorry Goro-Chan. But sadly something came in between and we cannot hold our usual practice today. We're incredibly sorry, pls don't be mad."

Goro rubbed her head, she seemed exhausted by this. Speaking of she seemed somewhat tense ever since they walked here. "Looks like we don't get to hear music now."

"Its fine. I mean we can do something else." Akira offered. There had to be something else they could do. Like… huh. What was the Detective interested in?

"Like what?" Goro pressed obviously curious.

"Well… I'm not sure. Do you want to get something to eat?"

"I actually just ate."

…

Dear god this conversation was getting more and more awkward by the second. What happened with Goros acting? She wasn't exactly making this easy for him either.

"Now come on we are two young people in one of the biggest cities in the world there has to be SOMETHING we can do. You live here right? What do you like to do? Any hotspots?" Akira pressed on. He wanted to try and make her take the first step and offer an alternative. Having her engaging in a meeting could prove beneficial for making the Detective Princess open up more.

"Come on Goro give me something. Whatever it is I will say yes. Theme park? Fishing? Batting cages? Please just work with me here!"

But of course… she took her time. Was she weighing the pros and cons of telling him something she enjoyed? Did she have some non Metaverse hobby at all?

Goro mussed and thought and contemplated before finally opening her mouth. "We could-"

"WAIT!"

Eyes wide, the duo perked up and stared bewildered at the source of this shout. Before being able to notice or interfere a girl ran up to them, tugging on their uniforms. After she was done she took a few steps back, making a square with her fingers. She than… smiled. "Perfect."

Goro and Akira could only look at this girl in front of them. Who was this girl?

She had long blue hair, part of it falling down her back, another part of it being braided and in front visible, going over her chest in length even. She wore the usual Kosei Uniform and had a surprisingly tall build. She looked somewhat… thin though. Perhaps even malnuritioned…

Wait…

Akira palled. "Don't tell me…"

"Ähm… excuse me but who are you and what did you just do?" Goro finally asked.

The girl looked surprised for a moment before answering. "Oh I am sorry. I am Yuzu Kitagawa and I simply couldn't resist but try and intervene in this beauty. You two look astounding together and I thought some added touches by myself could perhaps improve."

Akira couldn't understand more as he fainted.

Arsenes laughter being the last thing he heard.

Oh poor Akira. Don't worry guys and gals he will eventually learn to deal with it but for now, let us enjoy his freak outs :)

Boy I was nervous with this chapter. Its more of a filler really but I did want to introduce Yusuke soon. Did I get Akechi right? I hoped this lives up to your guys expactations.

And I know there was quite the amount of info dump but I hope it all makes sense, as to how Akira got send back in time. I aswell hope you like my explanation as to why things are so different. But just to make sure were all on the same page I will try again.

Destiny and Fate are important parts of Persona 5. Defying Fate is what the Phantom Thieves do on a daily basis. And a Wildcard has the ability to take their own fate and by extension that of the world into their own hands. Its to the degree that every Wildcard sort of has his own Era. An Era in which THEY decide humanities future.

Being a God made out of the masses desire, Yaldabaoth acts as the perfect counterpart, being able to bend and decide fate. He was like the collective Fate of the entire world all combined into one.

When Akira shoot Yaldabitch, he pretty much stabbed a water filled ballon. The water being fate itself that went chaotic and didn't know where to go.

Because Akiras power was uncontrolled and still raw he couldn't act as a shield to defend the world from this.

That was where Igor fixed it, the anomaly in fate allowing him to reverse time.

However these ripples still remain, still try to belong somewhere and as they sorted themselves new they caused changes.

I hope this is all clear to everyone. Not gonna lie I had some troubles coming up with an explanation myself. Thankuflly I had someone who read this story act as a sort of helper. His name is Sun Kasai and guess what he planned to do such a story once too. However since he currently is busy he offered me to help with this one instead. Thanks for that BTW :)

He came up with that idea of having Fate play a role and with some different ideas that you will all see down the line. And if you ever have the time check out some of his stuff. He mostly does RWBY and Persona it seems. No harem or lemon so far though.

BTW: Akiras small thought process while listening to Kobayakawa were what we thought might be the reason for his involvement in the Conspiracy. Its the only thing that really makes sense in my opinion. Do any of you guys agree or disagree?

And here is the updated Harem:

Ann

Ryuko (Sakamoto)

Yuzu (Kitagawa)

Makoto

Futaba

Haru

Goro

Hifumi

Shiho

Yui (Mishima)

and Lavenza (Who I slightly changed. I know Velvet Room attendants are like hundreds of years old probably but I just feel better without such a loli in the harem okay? I just wanted to make Lavenza appear more in Akiras age.)

As for the adults I am currently still debating. Sae, Tae and Kawakami still appeal to me. But not completely sure yet.

But on that note… does anyone know how old Sae is? I think she is in her very early twenties. Like 21. Do you guys think I'm on the right track?

Anyway I hope you enjoyed and see you guys next time. And if you guys have any suggestions or so feel free to leave them :)