Ok chapter three! Hope you like it! Ok 2 let yall know just incase u forgot this story is partial credit to my friends I have them go over this story with me and make there lines fit there personalities the way they like ok.
Chapter 3
The punishment
Our story starts with Val, Zhou li, and Iruka sensei walking down the halls of the grand chamber of the hokage's.
Iruka sensei: You boys really need to be nicer to naruto, what did he ever do to you?
Val: Well he's just that weird kid who plays pranks all the time I mean……
Zhou li: Yeah he's just that annoying little kid and he has that demons soul in him!
Val: Zhou li! Shut up!
Iruka sensei looked back on Zhou li and Val.
Iruka sensei: Were did you hear that?
Zhou li: Our parents talk about it all the time!
Iruka sensei: Boys please don't tell this to naruto he doesn't know……he shouldn't know……
Val: Yes Iruka sensei.
Zhou li: Yeah Iruka man!
Iruka sensei: It's pronounced sensei Zhou li…….
Zhou li: Yes sensei……
Iruka sensei: That's better. Ok now we're almost at the hokage's council chambers. Now I want you to treat the hokage with respect, none of those pranks or insane jutsus got it!
Val: Yes sensei
Zhou li: Yeah whatever sensei.
Iruka sensei: Well here we are ok be ready for your punishment.
Iruka sensei through open the doors to the council chambers only to find no one there.
Iruka sensei: Where is everyone!
Val: Hey look there's a sign it says…….
Out for ramen be back in two hours.
Zhou li: Ramen? Wow! I wonder were the hokage goes to get his ramen……. I mean I love ramen and I never see him at any of the ramen shops………
Val: Yeah I noticed that to! It is sorta scary………
Iruka sensei: You know I don't know that either…….
Over some where else…………………
Peirs: hey! Not again first we are thrown in jail then we come back here! I thought I was free!
Valkyre: nope that is impossible we are wanted!
Peirs: shut up…… and ummmmm this isn't our story so back to the real story.
Somewhere that we are supposed to be at………….
Hokage Sama: man this is great ramen!
Naruto: thanks for coming to eat lunch with me hokage.
Hokage Sama: it is my honor naruto you know I love ramen!
Naruto: who doesn't!
Back in the grand council chambers…………..
Iruka sensei: well let's start our search of every ramen shop in this village ok!
Val: ack1 why do we have to do this!.
Zhou li: man why can't we just wait?
Iruka sensei because this is part of your punishment!
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