inuyasha-fan1269: (waves at viewers) hello everyone this is my first fan fiction so go easy on me

disclaimer: i don't own inuyasha i wish i did but i don't

chapter 1 one new moon night

Kagome point of view

" Where are we going?" i said while i was on inuyasha's back i watch the seanery around me while inuyasha was jumping from tree to tree.

Inuyasha point of view

" We are going to my hide out when i go into my human form" i said as i try to beat the sun from setting once i got there i stop and looked up and saw the night sky i slowly turned human and said " get off kagome and go in."

Kagome point of view

I saw inuyasha turn into his human form and i got off of him and i notice a barrier and i said " but inuyasha there a barrier" " the barrier keeps youkais and hanyous out and humans in. One time i left my shirt in there i had to wait a whole month to get it back" he said and he walk threw the barrier and walk to his spot and he sit down and waited for kagome. I followed inuyasha and i rubbed his back.

inuyasha point of view

I growled a little and i look at her and i said " what are you doing" and i moved a little

kagome point of view

" don't move i am rubbing your back" i said and i sit down next to him 'what wrong with him' i thought to myself

inuyasha point of view

i jumped on her pinning her to the ground i glared at her and i said " don't touch me"
and i got off of her and i ran off

to be continued

inuyasha-fan1269: not so bad for my first fan fiction

kagome: yea good job inuyasha-fan1269 (claps hands)

inuyasha: ( in a sarcasm voice) yea good job inuyasha-fan1269

inuyasha-fan12769: well i hope i will get good reviews and i will post the second chapter once i finish writing it and you can give me tips since i am new i am open for any ideas