Okay so here's the re-written chapters 1-6.
Blake walked behind her team quietly and minding her own business. Her stomach growled loud enough for everyone in front of her to hear,"now Blake's stomach is growling! I told you to download the map on your scroll the paper map was a bad idea", Yang scolded Ruby about losing their map around campus. It was a huge campus and they were trying to find the cafeteria. Finally after feeling like her stomach was going to fail and she'd Parrish. Blake was about to just go back to the dorm but Ruby found the cafeteria before she said anything.
After they got their food they looked around the room to see if they could find a place to sit. They didn't see an open table until Ruby saw Jaune waving them down to sit with them. Ruby smiled,"c'mon Weiss let's go sit over there with team JNPR", Weiss groaned not liking the idea of sitting at the same table as Jaune, who constantly tried to hit on her. Blake stood there spacing out thinking about what Weiss said about what she was going to do to Jaune if he kept bothering her. "Blake?", Yang asked seeing that her partner was standing by the table staring off into space. She waved her hand in front of her face,"Blake to remnant, hellllloooo", Blake flinched slightly not expecting that to happen."Oh , uhh, sorry I was thinking about something", Blake shook her head and sat next to Yang. She thought it was stupid whenever she spaced out and mentally scolded herself.
Everyone at the table pretty much new each other so they were just talking about themselves taking turns telling stories, while Ren and Nora were doing their own thing. Nora was telling Ren about her dream where she fought Ursi in Vale and no else was around to help her because they got taken prisoner somewhere and she had to save them. Ren however sat quietly politely listening to her rambling. "Nora, do you want my pancakes?", he interrupted her briefly gesturing to his plate of food."OKAY!", Nora quickly replied her voice sounding more cheerful then before. She ate all the pancakes at once and poured syrup in her mouth then swallowed Blake was caught looking at Nora as she poured more syrup in her mouth. Nora swallowed the syrup," Hi Blake!", she said smiling and speaking a little louder than needed."Hi", Blake gave a half hearted smile,"OH, did you want to use the syrup?", Nora held up the syrup, Blake just shook her head,"well, MORE FOR ME!", she then slammed the rest of the syrup, and continued telling her story to Ren.
"What's wrong you don't like syrup?", Yang asked as she nudged Blake's arm."its just its texture bothers me", Yang remembered the time when Ruby accidentally spilled a whole bottle of syrup on the kitchen table and Yang got stuck cleaning it up."Hmmm", was the last thing Yang said before spacing out, and thinking about how much syrup was wasted that day and how it got in her hair.
Blake was going to try shaking Yang out of her little trans when she heard a loud noise, like someone dropped a tray."ow stop it that hurts", yelled a girl with an Australian accent. Blake turned to see a Faunas girl with one of her bunny ears being tugged on."stop leave me alone", the girl pleaded, she was faced away from Blake so she didn't see the girls face. Blake wanted to help but before she did anything the one who was pulling on her ear made her turn around so he could show his friends."see I told you they were real", Blake didn't quite hear him she was frozen by the girls beauty. She had the most beautiful brown eyes that Blake had ever seen, Blake couldn't look away stuck in a trans of her own, colors seemed to be shining and reflecting off every object that surrounded her, yangs golden locks shined brighter than the sun. She had a light blush on her face and a slightly goofy smile.
Yang then nudged Blake slightly but on accident,"sorry that was an accident", Blake snapped out of her trans,"no it's alright", Blake then looked at the girl who was now looking at Blake. They both blushed hard and looked away, "I'm going back to the dorm", Blake said to Yang who just nodded thinking Blake must have forgotten something. Velvet was her name, Blake thought to herself leaving the cafeteria.
After Cardin left velvet alone she was in tears and she saw a dark haired girl looking at her with a Blaise spread across her face. She started to blush herself , the pain from her ear subsided. The girl then realized that velvet was staring back at her then soon left. Velvet wanted to talk to her so she went over to the table the girl was sitting at. "Um, excuse me", velvet was standing at the end of the table, Yang was the only one who noticed her,"Hi can I help you?", after Yang spoke the whole table saw Velvet and looked at her. Velvet stuttered from the uncomfortable stares,"wh-who was that g-girl that just left?", she spoke mainly to Yang,"oh you mean Blake?", Blake, velvet said her name in her head, "oh I guess so, umm where'd she go?", Yang smiled, knowing that Blake was checking her out earlier,"she went back to our dorm room", velvet nodded,"I could take you there if you want?", velvet nodded again, this time with a slight blush. "Okay, come on then", Yang laughed then got up dumping her tray along with Blake's, she was to flustered to dump it herself. "YANG!" , Ruby shouted to her sister before she got to the door, Yang turned around to see Ruby bolt toward her,"where you going?", Yang forgot to tell Ruby she was going back to the dorms,"me and velvet here are going to go see Blake", Yang said smiling ,"ooo get me some cookies but don't tell Weiss", Yang nodded as Ruby walked back the table,"sure thing sis", Yang said and turned to leave the cafeteria. Blake sat on her bed thinking about Velvet and why she just left the cafeteria."you'd think you were mature", Blake said to herself seeing as how she didn't act mature and left the cafeteria. There was a knock at the door,"Blake I need some help", Yang called from outside the room. Blake sighed and reluctantly got up to go help Yang, but when she opened the door Yang was no where to be seen instead Velvet was at the door.
They stood there in silence staring at each other, velvet then Blushed and felt embarrassed,"um Yang brought me here", velvet paused,"or no I mean I-I asked her .. to bring me here", velvet said that last part slowly and whimpered slightly after her sentence. Blake didn't seem to be listening she was just standing there with a slight dreamy expression,"um", velvet said and Blake blushed hard, realizing that she spaced out again. "Oh um did you want to come in?", Blake asked and velvet just nodded not making eye contact. Blake stepped to the side and let velvet in, then closed the door."oh um you can sit here", Blake pulled out her chair from her desk,"Okay", velvet said before sitting down.
"Did you want to talk about something?", Blake asked sitting on Yangs chair that was already next to hers,"uh i wanted to talk but uh I don't know what I want to talk about", Velvet said with a nervous laugh,"oh , I see", Blake said and looked away with an almost sad look. "I'm Velvet and Yang already told me your name, I'm a 2nd year, team CFVY", Blake smiled,"well even though you already know I'm Blake , 1st year , team RWBY", velvet smiled then asked "D-Do you like to read?", blake seemed to brighten a little,"yeah I love to read", velvet was about to say something again but was cut off by someone knocking on the door then the door swinging open.
"Velvet what are you doing?", a girl with shades and a black hat entered the room,"C-Coco? What are you doing back y-your mission was supposed to end on Friday", Velvet stood up Blake being completely forgotten in the background,"well they canceled the mission halfway through, tch , call us back to school three days early for a 'big' mission and end up canceling it", Coco was mad that she did have enough action and she felt like she got lied to,"oh sorry to hear that", Velvet said. "It doesn't matter right now, who's this and what are you two doing?", coco looked to Blake who wasn't paying much attention to either of them,"oh that's um Blake and we were just talking", Velvet said and Blake stood up,"hello, are you team CFVY's leader?", Blake asked trying to changed subjects,"yes I am , what are you intentions for Velvet?", Coco asked with a serious look on her face. "N-Nothing like that I-", she was cut off,"that enough just stay away from her, let's go Velvet show me who was bullying you", Blake could nothing but watch Velvet he pulled out of the room and the door closing in her face.
they closed the door Velvet saw Yang standing there ,"thanks for the help, now follow me", Yang nodded and walked behind them quietly. Velvet didn't know why Yang was there but when coco said "thanks", velvet knew that Coco must have asked Yang to bring her here too. After they got back to there own dorm coco told Velvet to go inside."I need you to do something for me", Coco pulled out her scroll,"what's your contact info?", Yang then pulled out her own scroll and gave it Coco, after she put in her contact info she put a number into yangs text messages and the two different numbers in her contacts,"you only text on this number call for pity things for this one and emergencies on this one", Yang nodded,"what do you want me to do?", coco scowled,"I want you to keep tabs on Blake for me, or else", Yang was shown a picture of her bike," I understand", coco smiled,"then go get started", with that said Coco went into her room leaving Yang in the hallway,"for bumblebee" , was all she said before walking back to see Blake.
Yang got back to the room she opened the door and ended up knocking Blake over."Ah Blake are you okay?", Yang rushed helping her partner up,"ow, yeah no I'm fine", Blake said rubbing her arm. "Why were you standing by the door?", Yang asked after she got Blake up,"I want standing by the door mind you I was about to go to the library", Blake said fixing her clothes,"oh well can I go with you?", Blake looked at Yang like she just learned something new,"you want to go to the library?", Yang nodded vigorously,"uh huh", Blake was suspicious but went with it anyway,"alright then but I have a class at 11:30", Yang smiled "me too", Blake opened the door for Yang and left closing the door,"Professor Port?", Blake asked locking the door while Yang watched her,"yeah up until 1:30", Yang said with a sigh,"I heard he was boring", they began to walk to the library.
They passed the cafeteria Ruby and Weiss saw them and walked towards them,"Yang how come you didn't get it?", Ruby sounded mad,"get what?", Yang forgot about what Ruby asked for,"you know what?", Ruby pouted,"OH! sorry I was um busy?", Ruby didn't believe her,"what was she getting?", Weiss asked,"um my uhh pencil?", Ruby couldn't lie very well,"cookies?", Weiss asked glaring,"yeah cookies", Ruby said in a small voice,"didn't I tell you those were for after class?", Ruby looked down and nodded,"ugh class will be over at 1:30 so wait", Ruby just nodded again", Blake looked at Weiss,"Ports class?", she asked,"Yes we are in the same class", Blake didn't know and neither did Yang,"oh", they said,"well we're going to the library,"Blake said and Ruby brightened up,"ooooo we want to go to!", Weiss sighed,"I don't but if your all going I might as well accompany you", Yang smiled,"Okay let's go then".
they got to the library they decided to split up, then meet up at 11 so they could go to class and Yang walked to the fiction side Yang went to the short stories while Blake snuck off to the romance section. She grabbed two books part one and part two of the same story,but where's part three?, Blake couldn't find it after she searched the towering shelves. "It's 10:57 let's go meet up with Ruuu-...Blake what are you doing?", Yang looked up to see Blake crawling on the shelf looking at the books,"uh looking for part three?", Yang didn't know what she meant,"you can look for it later we have to go now", Blake sighed and jumped met up with their partners and walked to Class Blake sat with her team in the second row.
Velvet ran to class she was late because Coco was telling her to leave Blake alone and Fox started arguing that Velvet should enjoy romance. She got caught in the middle of the argument until she checked the time and saw that it was 11:20,"I-I have to go, m-my class is starting", Velvet said trying to get their attention,"HEY!", Velvet shouted and the two looked at her,"I-I-I ... class", cocos expression softened,"your gonna be late you should hurry up then but come back here after and NO BLAKE", Velvet nodded and started running. When she got to her class she saw Blake sitting with her team towards the front.
The doors shut behind her and looked like they weren't going to open until the end of class. Velvet didn't see any place near Blake that she could sit just a seat next to a random guy. He had a big fluffy pink fox tail, a white bandana tied around his right forearm, he had bright fluorescent pink hair, and he had a plain white ring on his left hand (pointer finger). "Can I sit here?", velvet asked and the guy smile,"sure", velvet sat down and put her bag next to her."your imato right?", velvet asked and the guy laughed,"haha no that's my sister I'm Imati", he paused,"we're twins but we don't look that alike", he shrugged,"she has Black hair, and she shorter", velvet felt embarrassed,"I'm sorry, you two just have similar names", Imati smile ,"oh and that two is a way to get us confused", velvet smile and nodded.
"Good morning students, I'm professor Port thought most of you already knew that", Professor Port immediately started talking about himself. "He's so full of himself", Imati said ,"yeah but some of his stories are pretty interesting", velvet said quietly not wanting to get in trouble and have detention, "yeah some of them", velvet laughed again. From the front Blake could hear velvet and Imati talking and that was making her jealous. She then heard Velvet say that she was going to Vale later to buy new socks and imati asked if he could tag along with her. Blake grit her teeth ,she could have asked me, Blake thought with anger at first but that changed to sadness. "God dammit", she said aloud ,"miss Belladona there must be a really good reason as to why you're interrupting my lecture", Professor Port stood in front of Blake waiting for an answer,"No sir, I just forgot my pencil", He seemed to believe her,"next time raise you hand and ask for a pencil", Blake nodded and he continued with his lecture.
After class everyone went to the cafeteria when an announcement was made that all classes for the rest of they would be canceled, they didn't say why but everyone didn't care. Velvet told Coco that she would be going to Vale with a friend but Coco was to busy to care that she didn't say who she was going with. Velvet and imati went to the mall and went to a clothes store,"you'd think theyd have better shoes for huntsman", imati said, and velvet laughed ,"I need new socks too, the shoes really tear them up", they both laughed,"I'll be over here", imati gesture to the men's side and velvet just nodded and went to the women's side.
While picking out socks velvet saw a hoodie that have a place for her bunny ears to go, she went to look at it. She decided that she'd want to show imati and ask his opinion. Blake and Yang followed Velvet , Blake being uncomfortably jealous of Imati. While Yang casually walked into the same store as Velvet , Blake stealthy went in and eavesdropped on the two's conversation."yeah that hoodie looks great you should get it", imati said after Velvet tried the sweater on to show him,"aww but I don't have enough money", velvet pouted sounded crestfallen ,"oh well I can't buy it for you", imati said in a friendly way,"no it costs a lot", velvet argued not wanting a friend to spend money on her,"well I'll buy the hoodie and you can buy your socks", imati said trying to compromise,"fine but I'll buy us some snacks", velvet said even tho she pretty much had enough money to only buy a bag of chips and a small drink,"Okay works for me", imati shrugged and went to buy the clothing.
Blake was having a mini ear in her head, to kill the guy and buy the world for Velvet or to just sit back and watch. Yang bought a ton of clothes carrying three bags after leaving with Blake to go back to the school."why'd you buy so much?", Blake asked while the sat on the air bus,"silly I didn't even buy that much", Yang said leaning on Blake ,"sure"; Blake said as they landed and walked back to their dorm."you know I'm surprised they thought we were second years and let us leave the school", Blake said opening the room door,"maybe it was my matureness ", Yang said shoving her new clothes into her and Blake's shares closet, Blake laughed at yangs statement.
"I wonder where Ruby and Weiss went", Yang said walking into the Bathroom to change. Velvet got back from Vale and went to her dorm,"hey Vevls how was the date?", Fox asked, he was the only one in the room,"what?", velvet said putting her new clothes away,"how was your date?", he asked again,"what date?", Fox sighed and laid back down on his bed,"never mind", velvet smiled,"Okay".
Blake was reading her new romance book while Yang was playing a game on her scroll. The door opened and Weiss and Ruby walked into the room,"hey guys we're back", Ruby said not sound like her usually happy self, Yang immediately noticing the tone in her voice,"what's wrong Ruby?", Weiss huffed,"We went to the store to buy some snacks and Ruby saw this barrel full of cookies and tried making me buy it , but when I said no she started crying making a scene", Weiss said giving Blake and Yang ice creams,"now if you'll excuse me I'm going to shower", Weiss grabbed her night gown and walked into the Bathroom and the shower turned on.
"Ruby why'd you start crying? Your to old to be making a scene like that", Ruby gave Yang the saddest look,"I know", Yang sighed,"when Weiss gets out you apologize to her", Yang said sounding calm but mad,"Okay". Weiss got out of the shower and walked out of the bathroom in her night grown, Ruby immediately apologized and Weiss gave her a box of cookies from her and Ruby's shared closet. They stay up until 10 doing their own things and talking.
So here's the new version where I combined them all I didn't do that good but it's still alright hope you enjoyed and stuff.