Ahaha here we go again...Chapter Two! I've been R&Ring like crazy, time for my break. I'm going to keep writing fanficts all through the summer hols, I'm going to see if I can improve my writing skills. This chapters going to be happy since I've found my favourite bands website and they have music up to listen to, HURRAY!
So anyway, can you guess who Hilary is going to work for now shes a robot? You know, this fanfict has some weird twists and turns, all off the back of my head too. I might do something I'm infamous for, which is keep changing which character I'm looking at, so for one paragraph it would be what Hilarys doing, and then another on what Tysons doing, etc. I'll give it a try.
Disclaimer: Currently not owning any Beyblade characters, I suppose for my own amusement I could add in my own character..oh, the Irish man in Hilarys head is my invention.
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Chapter Two
After the unfortunate attack on poor little Hilary, Tyson and a few of his friends chose to make 'Get Well Soon' and 'Hope You Don't Die' cards for her. It was their way of praying to the Mighty Lords Above for Hilarys safety and health. Tyson had phoned all his and Hilary's friends to deliver the sad news; which they took well since it was over the phone. Max and Ray had decided to take the next plane to Tokyo and visit Hil in person, to show they care. Tyson warned them she was in a bad state but they shook it away as if their presence would lead to certain miracles and other severe changes to her current way. Nothing else had really changed since she was hit my that oncoming vehicle, apart from the person who had been driving the beast that nearly killed her was taken to court and trialed but found 'Not guilty' since no evidence or cameras displayed exactly what happened. Anyone with half a mind would find that puzzling. No evidence! But of course it was a Sunday morning and many people were hungover or just too half-assed to decide what happened to the crazed psychopath driving the monster and if he hit anyone else. I mean, come on ITS THE WEEKEND! But anyway, at present Hilary was stirring, not over a pot though -a bit of light humour for us there- but in fact she had just woken from what could be descibed as an "8 hour coma"- or "recommended 8 hour sleep" as those health specialists could put it. In fact, for a girl who'd be dead had she not been in the way of the surgeons, she seemed to suffer minimum damage with only a broken leg and fractured elbow. When the doctors entered the room to find her well awake, they asked if anything else hurt. She quoted a line from a famous romance writer about a 'Broken heart and fractured guilt' before demanding a bubble bath with coconut-smelling shampoo bottled fresh from the 'Exotic countrys beyond'. Sure, this wasn't how she normally was; she blamed this behaviour on the injurys and was determined to drain the NHS dry of their luxury items.
"Yo, Kai, coming with me to see Hilary?" It was more of a statement than a question that escaped from Tysons mouth, but Kai regarded it as everything else in life. A waste of time spent with the most annoying people on earth. Grr. Kai actually spent most of his time thinking of ways to tell Tyson where to go without using obscene words. He failed miserably at this though. "...Ok." The silence between the question and answer was as long as a Velociraptor which had been sent by Skeletor to kick the living crap out of He-Man (A/N: I don't watch He-Man, the Skeletor line was used in a movie I love and I did some research and found he was the bad guy in He-Man - correct me if I'm wrong. Velociraptors were also used in that movie, not along with Skeletor though, I united the two) . Tyson would have ignored Kai if he had refused to follow and ventured out regardless.
"More of the yummy shampoo, Biatch!" shouted the disgruntled Hilary as the nurse continued to cover her head in shampoo. As you would know if you've ever been to hospital or broken a part of your body, taking baths is a pain, Hilary requested a nurse to help her. "Look, just pour the whole damn bottle on, will you? I'm injured, I'm crippled, I can't go on living like this. DO IT!" She grabbed hold of the nurses arm and forced her to pour it on.The nurse screwed up her eyes trying to hold back tears. This is a waste of shampoo, I love this shampoo so much, how will I go on? She kept thinking it over and over as she wasted the quality expensive gunk over this bratty teenagers head. "Ahhh, there, much better" Hilary could smell the intoxicating aroma of the coconuts and immediately fell into a dream-like state. "You can piss off now if you want..." she muttered before her eyes filled with joy. The nurse left, sniffing the most expensive shampoo the hospital had to offer. Hilary could feel her head heavy with sleep and felt it difficult to conjure a thought that would keep her awake. Hmm,she thought. How can I abuse my new form? She was asking it over and over, as if expecting her brain to find ideas. Y'know, little 'un,this could be the Big Break for you.Ahh, Hilary, you gotta lot to learn about manipulation.It was the Irish man in her head, Hilary knew what he meant and decided it was best to dry up, return to her bed and get ready to put her thinking cap on. This was going to be one long afternoon.
Tyson entered the hospital and stared at the four walls covered in white tiles. It freaked him out, the enterance hall was large to say the least, with an entire glass wall ahead of him. He could see small shops. "..Because its a ward and people sleep here. Well...not here.." He felt himself blush as he said it aloud in a teacherly voice. Kai, who had been behind Tyson on the quest, immediately strolled up to the desk that was to the left. Tyson stayed put. It didn't take two people to ask which ward Hilary was on. So instead he admired the high ceiling, the two staircases that seemed to spiral into heaven and the large white paned windows that gave the hospital a look that screamed "Yes, you know this is where all the ill rich people come. Oh, we'll let you stay for free if you promise not to die and ruin our reputation!". Eventually, after a few moments, Kai had the ward Hilary was on and had already made for the stairs. Tyson had to sprint to catch up with his old pal. Of course, this would be a surprise for Hilary, who was at this time sitting in her room chatting out loud to the bloke in her head.
End of Chapter Two
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Special thanks to Troublesome Aries whos helped me come up with some ideas for my next fanfict. I'm rushing ahead of myself but I really have a lot of spare time on my hands. Have any fanficts for me to R&R? Let me know.
xx WickedEvil xx Nicola xx