HELLO! I am in a good mood…. not for doing what I am supposed to do but you should be happy I am writing the chapter. Just so you know I don't really pay attention when I write I just go…. Nuts!

Oh and I am not the owner of Harry potter so none of this is mine…. how is it that I am not so happy anymore… (


By the way you should read the chapters that are edited 1-4 (there are some slight changes (or a lot but there is not any important information relating the story)… you might like them… tell me what you think!) Oh and thanks again to my beta!


Chapter 15


James' POV

I think Jen has lost it… she has became strange…. And so have Remus and Lily and Amanda (and if you are wondering why Sirius isn't in this is because…well Sirius is always NUTS!)

Amanda doesn't want to choose sides so she has decided to run the opposite way if she sees either Lily or Jen.

But when she sees Jen and Lily at the same time she goes to make out with a guy (and I mean anyone she even made a grade 3rd, 4th, 5th, 6th their day), well except Sirius who is desperately trying to be in the right place at the right time but Amanda will just make out with someone else… Poor bloke he has to stop trying so hard.

Well that isn't the ugliest part of the current news.

Yesterday Slughorn was asking questions and naturally lily's hand was up… she is so smart isn't she?….

Snap out of it! As I slap myself Moony glares at me in a "has he gone mad"…. yes mad in love!

This time Jen's hand also went up but this hardly happens… yes Jen is really smart, but she is normally fooling around with us (or telling us to listen before she jinxes us.)

As I was saying Slughorn picked lily (he ALWAYS picks lily) and she answered but then Jen's hand got up and the teacher finally let her speak and she said "she is way off this potion was invented by 1850 not 1934."

To be honest everyone was shocked considering lily has never gotten an answer wrong since her first year. Lily was naturally open mouthed and said "well it says that in the text book!" Jen smirked and said coldly

"Well know-it-all seems like you don't read as much as you think because if you read the latest edition of the magical historical mistakes "the famous potion crop (makes things grow faster why they called it that beats me it is said the guy was nuts) was created in 1850 not in 1934 as every one believes" and it is printed by specialist"

Lily glared at her and said "she has to be lying I have never heard of this book and I know every single one of the latest books approved by the ministry" Jen smiled evilly once again and bend down to her book back and took out a hard cover book, stood up and walked over to lily's desk and said "looks like you don't know every single book" Lily looked like a volcano…. And her hair is so pretty…. snap out of it…. but let it go while the teacher started sucking up "well seems like Ms. Evan's might have a rival well I look forward to Ms Park participating more."

Yeah and then lily had constantly been trying to apologize… she last apologized 5 minutes ago but Jen has really made up her mind, and said "I am not mad about Amos, is a matter of principals and how much I valued your friendship, and how it is obvious you don't value mine as much as I thought" well that is what she said and pretty much after that she has giving her the cold shoulder.

To be honest I dunno whether to approve jen or to think maybe lily was innocent!

WOMAN they are so complicated…. In other news Jen saw…. All of us half naked (don't get too excited!)

…Well in our boxers. I don't think Sirius noticed this but Jen was practically smiling face to face the rest of the day. I think it might had something to do with her seeing Remus in a towel…. I am too in touch with my girl side…. Now! why can that kick in with Evans!

Jen wanted to talk to us about a changing our attitude, style, and acting more like ourselves (HA LIKE THAT EVER WORKED!)…. And then she hit Sirius and me for not listening to her ramble. I wonder if I should tell her that Remus is only with that alisa or Melissa (see we were doing a poem of how stupid she was… her name is alisa, and she sucks like Sirius flying skills…. Hey I never said the maurders were good at making poems… unless is roses are red, violets are blue…. YOU CAN'T EXPECT US TO BE PERFECT I am sure we don't stink as much as you… so what if we can't rhyme!

Well I should get going before comes stairs again.

Jen wanted us to come to the room of requirements why I do not know, I just know that Remus won't be there and Peter is with Remus so I think it might be Sirius and me in one room with JEN! Well is going to be after the quidditch game… against hupleffuf….

Don't even have to tell you how hard Jen has been working to beat hupleffuf 0 to 1000…. Well I am happy as long as we win…. Did I leave out the part that Jen has been practicing with the beater's club? Well she has and I feel sorry for Amos… and the whole hupleffuf team if Jen gets her hands on the beater's bat.

Well I better go after all Jen asked me to play target practice with her before the game…. I hope I DON'T GET HURT! They can make it without their star chaser…. Nah who am I kidding they will lose without me.

Down at the quidditch pitch

"Hey Jen" I said walking slowly considering I was late and just how moody Jen has been lately…. but she just laughed (for once in a long time I heard her laugh like before) and said "I am not mad you were just late… it happens but this is going to be about… the hupleffuf team…. see they got a new beater… a cute one… do you think they might try to use her to flirt with Sirius and get our guy players down."

I laughed and then the hupleffuf team came out and I saw they had one of the prettiest girls…. well not as cute or smart as lily but none the less my mouth was wide open and this time Jen laughed "who is laughing now… oh god we are going to get creamed… I am not worrying about you… but Sirius…. Or our keeper, and our other beater… well I have a plan… see the way to get out of this is if I was a beater and we should use the old distract us we distract you" I laughed and said "what does your evil mind think? Because I was thinking you should replace Sirius with you and bench him for the game after all I know someone that could fill your spot"


In the Quidditch game


James POV

Oh god, this is just bloody great… see our captain was flirting with the cute new addition to the hupleffuf team and well he found out she has a brother who is in his grade (did I mention he is 7 and a half feet high and fit to take on the whole team! Well now you do)

We are now a captain short and it is in the rulebook it states that you can't have a Quidditch game unless there is a captain… yeah normally we would just ask the co- captain to take his place…. But we never got around to voting who would be co- captain…. See this year we decided to chose our co captain instead of the captain choosing in any bias way…. LIKE LAST YEAR WHEN I SHOULD HAVE BEEN PICKED! Er… I mean someone else! BUT NO! THE BLOODY BLOKE JUST HAD TO CHOSE HIS GIRLFRIEND! And she didn't even know who invented Quidditch!

Well this was the situation, we didn't have a captain and with no official captain we just had to do something there was no way we would lose against hupleffuf. Jen was just as astonished by the thought of losing… that is when Remus slipped into the changing rooms and said "hi" I could see Jen's face smiling as she suddenly had wondered "um why are you here anyways?" He closed his book and said "nothing much just came to say good luck and to laugh at your captain" I laughed and said "well this flirting moron may cause us the game… long story but we need a co captain… and we don't have one so WHAT THE HELL ARE WE SUPPOSED TO DO!" Remus chuckled along with Jen and said "is okay James calm down… why don't you just pick one now… Okay I nominate James… all in favor… Good…. Now go I'll think I'll give it a go at the announcement job considering that he just got fired for something… I am sitting in a horrible seat... well good luck Jen, James, and Sirius"

How is it that Remus just solved everything so easily! OH what the heck I am co captain! A little longer and I might be able to be the player of the year…. Muah hahahahaha!

I told the team a similar speech that I made up… "Hi well this is against hupleffuf and I dunno you but I ain't gonna get beaten by a hupleffuf who cheated on our own comrade and fellow Quidditch player FROM OUR HOUSE!" The team roared and we left mounting our brooms, Sirius refused to give his bat to Jen so there is only faith left…. GULP--- I really hope we win.


Remus' POV

I sat in the announcement chair and said "Hello, Fellow Gryffindors! Hope you are ready because this will be one hell of a day, as you know this is our first match, and who ever wins will go against Ravenclaw! Madam Hooch asks the captains… and as you know Gryffindors own captain Ben claw had a problem with his hormones…. Well now substituting will be THE ONE, THE ONLY JAMES POTTER! (A lot of screams)"

"Madam hooch gives a loud blast with her silver whistle and of they go, as we know the Quaffle has been released and there goes James potter getting there before the slow hupleffuf chaser- great Quidditch player he is. Too bad he is a horrible roommate, I swear he is a sleeping rock on Sundays. A bulger just now was sent directly at James potter startling him and dropped the Quaffle---and is catched by none other than Jen Parker-Just a warning there Amos I really wouldn't like to be you if she gets a hold of the beater's bat. What is this Jen is approaching near the goal post--she shoots she scores 10 points for Gryffindor!"

"Hupleffuf Keeper Celina, or is it Celest… I can never remember! She gives the Quaffle to Annabel Gordine who is tricked by Amanda Brown- By the way is it just me or has there been a lot of people kissed by her lately? Well Amanda takes it back to the Hupleffuf's territory diving and making acrobats to escape the harsh boulders thrown by none other than Kristine Waine- You should have seen her brother 7 feet tall is my guess. Amanda has lost the Quaffle due to some seeker who doesn't know what position he plays- cough- Amos CHEATER Diggory- cough- And We see Gryffindor seeker chasing…Holy is it the SNITCH!"

"Well it seems it is--- GO Frank go! Well is it just me or is it--- I can't believe it is there some flirting going on the battle field by both beaters Kristine and Sirius! Ouch THAT has to hurt and isn't that a violation of some sort is not the guys fault she is pretty! And to her 7th feet brother I adore my life just so you know!"

"Time out called by James potter but Madam Hooch seems to ignore it… Sirius almost fell from his broom for goodness sake not even Amanda Brown has hit the bloke that hard! Well seems like his arm is bruised, and broken for how loudly he is complaining…. Why couldn't he be left-handed!"

"Well folks it seems like he can't play so it's all up to James potter who is one player down and his back up player is already playing. Time out ends and Sirius Black is now a CHASER, and Jen Parker is replacing him… well I'll be! Who would have guessed that a girl who is wants to kill Amos Diggory would play Beater, I can say 100 that this will get bloody and ugly!"

(bY tHe WaY next chapter I will continue the Quidditch game I just think this is a good cliffy)


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