OKAY SO I FORGOT TO SAY A COUPLE OF THINGS...
one I found out something... some of the older chapters were very sloppy and just bad (even I don't blame you for not reviewing in some) SO I am going back to fix things and add things... if fact I already started and changes have already been added to the story.
To let you guys know I added more detail to things and more plot... I also want to change the plot destination from chapter 15 and so on... if memory serves me rigth.
OKAY bye hope it wasn't a big disapointment!