It's hard since my beta reader lost his internet but I'll try to revise it. (I'll try, might fail, but I'll try) I kinda need reviewers to do the beta-reading since the only one that I felt I could share my fanfic with without being embarassed is gone darn his parents!
'God, I must look like a dork crawling down to the main platform.' Aya thought she really was litterally crawling for fear of falling off. "I hate hieghts I hate hieghts I hat-" she shrieked as she lost her footingand rolled down to the main platform. "Head, hit, rock, pain..." groaning she sat up.
Was that a...Howard? from the third level of the Biolabs in Lighthalzen?
"Neh..." the whitesmith studied her with, blank, black eyes. "Too small"
he stated with a dissapointed look. "Wha?...HEY!" she screamed and flung her
wand at the guys head, forgetting that fact that she could probably kill
her in one swipe.
For a split second he had a comical expression then it turned to one of
annoyance. "What'd you do that for!" he cried, like it actually hurt him,
was his fault anyway. "You started it with that perverted comment, you jerk"
"You're the one who took it as a perverted comment!" "Ugh, enough! Can we please
just kill the human and get on with the MvP meeting!" Amon Ra complained.
"But she must've gone through alot to get here, and it's not like she could cause trouble with all of us here" a Bacsojin reasoned. "Stop taking the human's sides, Bac" The Knight of Windstorm counterd. "I'm gonna agree with Bacsojin on this one, she's only a little sage and there's 35 of us here, the others never make it." Maya sighed in sheer annoyance at thier impudence.
"I can always feed her to my pups..." growled Hatii. "Um, Yeah, Heeellllooo
sitting right here, I can hear you guys." Aya said trying to get thier attention.
None of them noticed, and if they did they didn't show it. "I give up"
she cried as a Dracula was just explaining hoe humans were less inteligent
then a Poring.
"Oh, Aya!" Alice cried as she hugged the sage. "When my sister said you were here I didn't believe here, but here you are alive and without a scratch on you! I never got the chance to thank yo-" There she was rambling again. I could always tell her apart from the other Alices because of this.
"ENOUGH!" A Incantation Samurai called "Let's just kill this thing and get
on with the aranged marraige of Doppelganger and Egnigem Cenia!" he ordered.
"I don't wana get married to this weakling!" Doppelganger challenged. "I'm
a good 6 levels above you!" Egnigem cried.
Aya could just sit there looking annoyed at how they thought they could take her down so easily, she was gonna be a Proffesor after this! A Eddga let out a growl as he attempted to scratch her face off. Obviously under-estimating her, she froze him with her Frost diver in two hits.
She then went on the freeze the Incantation Samurai, set up a fire wall to keep the Hatii at bay, and set up a few Heavens Drives to slow down any advanced that the Windstorm Knight or the Amon Ra would make. Finishing up with a safety wall on both her and Alice.
"Aya they wern't REALLY gonna hurt you..." Alice said back in shy-mode.
"It looked like it, Alice, I'd rather not take any chances" she said with
a smile to her friend."Hurt you, oh no, we'll kill you!" Egnigem yelled as
she cast Two-Hand-Quicken. "Frost Diver!" Aya called and froze Egnigem
in her tracks. "What's your problem, I didn't do anything to you, whatever
humans did to you guys it's no reason to hate all of them!"
Alice laughed, "Freezing MvP's and then giving them a good scolding, just like
you Aya". "Mind telling us who your friend is Alice?" Maya asked. "Oh, right,
I forgot, this is Aya, as you guys know I was forced to be the pet of a
rude Lord Knight, Aya here helped me escape from him, and almost lost her life
in the process.(1)" "Really, never heard of a human
doing that before" A now un-frozen Eddga stated semi-sarcasticly. "That's
because you only listen to the bad things you hear about humans ya over-grown
tigah.(2)" Aya said sticking her tounge out at him.
He growled and made a move for her again but found his foot pierced with a tiny Earth Spike. He cried in pain and plopped to the ground to nurse the little splinter-like wound, Alice laughed, 'It might be as hard as I thought to return the armor piece.' Aya thought, hoping she wasn't dead wrong.
(1): I'll write a one-shot about it later, along with a fic on what happend with Saiyuri and her Retribution friend.
(2): she says 'Tigah' with a accent to make it seem more insulting.
My chapters are getting shorter, I know, probably cause I'm still constantly
revising the other chapters to make them 'perfect'. Not to mention I'm
trying to become the first reborn on a small 1/1/1 PK server with no GMs,
It's hard work x.x.