About the killing of characters, my beta-reader didn't like it, niether did I, but the fragments are dropped by those monsters and I need one character up there since I'll just neglect them and focus on Aya and the MvPs.
(I want spellcheck...and I want my beta-reader back.)
About the maps, she checked out alot of books from the Library, adventurers could survive long enough to make some maps, but on the higher and more populated levels they couldn't fight off the mob and that is why there wern't as many maps. (None of ya can survive on those levels, trust me ) The Alice and Aya sidefic is up! Also, I can bring the 'dead' characters back, I think I hinted that they were turned into monsters. Rambling ending now Oo;
Oh my god...theres THAT many MvPs up here? So much for my 'hit and run' idea to kill em if I had too. Woah, Dark Lord is tall, but hey Eremes looks preety cute... Oh god what am I saying! He's dead for Odin's sake! Zomg I'm a necrophiliac!
"Aya, Aya are you ok, Alice to Aya!" with a few good shakes Aya was jolted from La-La-Land and facing the MvP mob again. "Heh, eh...Hi?" Gathering all the strength she could find to hold herself together, she placed her wand in the 'defence' position.
"Hi!" A high-pitched voice greeted, the MvPs groaned, and turned to face a Valkyrie-like monster. "Hi Randgris..." Baphomet muttered in that 'I'll only be nice to you because I have too' voice, Aya had heard this often at the Sage academy.
"Ooohh what'chya got there?" Radngris asked, sounding like a 6 year old trapped in a womans body. "A human..." Katrinn stated, hoping it would make the annoyance fly away. "Cool! I never see ANY humans where I am! the Skieegold's kill em all before I can meet them!" Randgris estatically replied, getting a little to close to Aya's face.
"What's your name? Where are you from? How'd you get up here? Are you really
a girl? What's your favorite color? Your favorite animal? Your favorite monster"
My god, this girl can talk! Somebody get her a muzzle, please! Aya slowly
attempted to mold herself into the concrete block behind her.
"Uh...ah...I'm Aya, I'm from, well, I don't know where I'm from, I came up
the tower with my friends. Yes, I'm a girl, My favorite color is Purple,
I like cats, and I don't really have a favorite monster..." Ok, so she wasn't
gonna materialize into the concrete block, might as well, hop up onto the
thing and hide behind a statue.
"Aya get out from behind the statue of Odin! Or, atleast I think that's Odin"
Alice said while tugging on her friends arm to remove her from the work of
art. The statue and his other carved possey began glowing as the pillar with
2 angels on it in the middle began turning in a clock-wise motion.
The pillar rose about 2 inches, then stopped, now the circle pattern with the four statues and the pillar was spinning. It stopped when it reached to about 10 feet. A 5x3 (5 feet up and 3 feet across, I think) pushed in and then slid to the left to reveal and silver-clad crusader-looking guy.
"Wha...W-Who are you?" Aya stutted, The man flipped his blood red cape back,
his ocean blue hair covered his eyes, and in a deep, baritone voice he replied,
"I am Thanatos.".
The end, ugh, shush