In your reviews you said that Graystripe would never get over Silverstream. Well Crowfeather got of Feathertail right? Well not totally but enough to love Leafpool. Same could happen for Graystripe.
Chapter 3-Too Long
Graystripe fell into a deep slumber. Before he knew it, he was in a clearing. There was a river that dazzled in the moonlight. He could smell so much prey. Three mice, two squirrels, a raven, two voles, and a rabbit. He also caught a familiar scent in his nose. He couldn't put his paw on it but he knew that he had scented this before, but not for a long time.
"Graystripe." Chimed a voice
Graystripe knew that voice. He turned around and saw his beloved Silverstream on the other side of the river. She was a beautiful as ever. Her silver pelt danced and shone brightly in the moonlight, "Silverstream. I've missed you so much."
"I know Graystripe. It has been too long."
"How's Feathetail?"
"She's adjusting. It's hard for her. She is apart of two ancestor groups now. No one in Starclan or the Tribe of Endless Hunting (I know I put Endless Sleep in my other chapter. I forgot.) knows how to do both."
"Can I see her?"
"No. She is with the Tribe of Endless Hunting right now. She is spending time in each group each day."
"Oh."
"Graystripe, Autumn is really some cat."
"How did you know about Autumn?"
"Graystripe, you underestimate the power of Starclan. We can look in on any clan cat, no matter where they are."
"I hope you don't feel that I am being disloyal to you."
"For what Graystripe?"
"For...for liking her."
"Of course not. You shouldn't dwell on the past. It keeps you from fulfilling your personal destiny."
"My personal destiny?"
"Everyone has a clan destiny and a personal destiny. Look at Firestar, his clan destiny was to kill Scourge and bring peace to the forest and his personal destiny was to raise a family with Sandstorm."
"What does my personal destiny have to do with Autumn?"
"You know I'm not allowed to tell you. Starclan can only reveal what they see."
"What they see?"
"Yes, we only tell leaders and medicine cats what we see."
"You're avoiding the question Silverstream."
"Alright, this is what I see..." Silverstream closed her eyes and was quiet for a few moments, but then said, "Two seasons will clash and a new era shall be created. Alright does that suit you?"
"What does it mean?"
"Graystripe, you ask too many questions."
"Well you don't answer many."
"I'm not allowed to answer many. Bluestar doesn't want me to reveal too much. I can tell you how Firestar is doing though."
"How is he doing?"
"He and the other leaders are leading the clans to a new home. When the time is right, you will rejoin them."
"When is that?"
"When the time is right." Silverstream started to fade away.
"Silverstream don't go!"
"I must. I must return to my clan. Don't worry Graystripe, I am never too far away. Just keep me close, in your dreams." Silverstream had now disappeared.
Something was poking Graystripe in the real world. Someone was telling him to wake up. Graystripe awoke with a jolt. Autumn was standing over him.
"It's morning Graystripe."
"Unfortunately." He muttered.