Wow!
That was quite a response, so I'll definitely get back into writing this story.
Quite a few reviews indicated that I should rewrite it and fix the story up a bit- and I find myself agreeing that it may need it
I'll probably be prioritizing my second story which I've just started writing for now, but I promise any spare time I have I'll start to rewrite this
story and post it again, hopefully better than before. Let me know what you think.
If you have the time, check out my second story and let me know what you think of it. I'd appreciate it a lot!