Hey sorry but this is kinda in the middle of a sentence from my past notebook, this is where they're at his house.

Chapter 8

A small whimper escaped her lips.

"Are you loosened up a bit?"

Ana smirked as he started massaging her hips "Damnit Jack what are you doing to me?"

He stuck his head in the crook between her neck and shoulder, "only the same thing you're doing to me."

Ana smirked as she turned her head towards him and kissed him.

Jack turned Ana towards him and deepend the kisss while Ana wrapped her arm s around his neck.

With one swift move Jack picked her up and led her towards the bed. Ana's heart beat harder with each step towards the bed.

As he laid her down on teh bed, he started kissing her gently on the neck while Ana's hands snaked up his back.

Slowly Ana's hands moved down his back and towards teh frount of his body where his flat stomach was showing from his open shirt. Slowly she moved her hands even lower down his body as if she was a young child playing in the water for the first time. Seh marveled at the way how smooth his skin was to the touch, how there was a bit of muscle in his stomach as lightly pressed against her own. She slowly removed his shirt and pants while he slowly removed her chemise leaving them both as naked as the day that they were born.They each looked each other up and down marveling in the beauty of their bodies.

Then Jack entered Ana slowly causing her nails to dig deep into her skin. Never in Ana's dreams did she ever feel such pain as she did now.

Jack heard a small whimper escape from Ana, but this wasn't the same whimper as before, this was of pain and sadness.

Even though part of him wanted to just continue on, a big part of him was concerned for her.

He slowly pulled out from her and held her close to him.

"It's okay," he whispered gently into her hair as he stroked her hip, "it always hurts the first time."

"Easy for you to say," mummered Ana as she tried to focus her mind away from the pain.

"Here," said Jack as he reached over the bed and put her underneath the sheets, "you stay there until you feel better."

"Why were are you going?" Asked Ana with a worried voice as Jack put on his brown pants and shirt.

"Just to get something to drink, I'll be right back." He said as he left.

As Ana sat there waiting for him to return, negative thoughts kept entering her head.

See now he's bored with you, because you can't even stand a little pain God why can't I please him! she thought angrily as she put her head into her hands ashamed of herself.

Jack came back in and saw her with her head in her hands.

"What's the matter?" He asked sitting down next to her.

"Nothin' " Mumbled Ana.

"What? Can't hear you luv with your head all the way down there." He said trying to lighten the situation.

Slowly he pulled her head away from her hands and saw her usual optimistic brown eyes now full of sadness.

"Now come on Ana cheer up what's got you so down?" He asked his eyes full of concern.

Ana sighed before continuing on.

"I don't know exactly, but it's got something to do with you."

"With me?"

Ana saw the confusion in his face which made her feel even worse.

"Yes but it's not really all that bad. It's just..." Ana stopped.

"Just what?"

"Don't ask me why, it's just I'm upset because I feel like I can't please you."

"Please me? Ana if anyone should be trying to please anyone, it's me."

Jack reached over the bed and got out the bottle that he left her to go get.

"Here," he said comfortingly as he poured some of the bottle into two glasses.

"What's this?" asked a confused Ana as she took the glass.

She stared at the dark liquid with curiousity. As she sniffed it, the smell of alcohol brought back the memory of her finding him on the docks that night eyes reddened, smelling of alcohol.

"It's rum, it'll help take off that nervous edge you're feeling."

Ana watched him over the brim of her glass still not really sure.

"Go on it won't bite."

Ana took a sip and started gagging. It felt like liquid fire as it went down her throat.

"Why...is...it..so...bloody hot?" She asked among sputtering coughs and watering eyes.

Jack let out a little chuckle, "it's supposed to do that don't worry. Is this your first time?"

"At what?" Asked Ana as she took another sip. After the rum slid down her throat like liquid fire, it settled in her belly leaving a warming sensation which she really liked.

Jack smirked his sarcastic grin, "what else do you think drinking. I know it was your first time at sex remember you told me."

Ana smirked, "oh yeah."

As they sat there sitting there in silence drinking their rum they could both sense the sexual tension growing between them.

After about her 3rd glass, Ana was beginning to feel very light headed, her eyesight was a little fuzzy giving everything a dreamlike appearance.

"Jack,"

"Hmmm..." Asked Jack as he finished off his 4th glass of rum.

"Everythin's lok funni." she slurred.

Jack chuckled, "I'm sure it must. All right Ana let's get you ready for bed."

"Aww..." whined Ana as Jack tucked her into bed with the greatest of ease.

"I taught we gonna have the sex." She slurred drowsily as she got comfortable in bed.

Jack chuckled as he lightly kissed her on the lips. He liked the way how the rum tasted on her lips. "There'll be other times when we can have the sex."

"Jack," asked Ana as he blew out the candles.

"Hmmm..." He asked as he turned towards her. Even though it was really dark, there was a moon that shone brightly illuminating the room with white light. Jack like the way how she looked now even though she was too drunk to notice with her slightly disheveled hair and a little bit of a glossy look in her eyes.

"You sa good ta me. I'd wish ya bin there,"

"Been where?" He asked playfully thinking she was gonna say something smart or funny.

"Tha night I almos' die." She mummered as she fell asleep.

Jack's brows furrowed together in worry and confusion. Night she almost died? I don't remember her telling me anything about that, I'll have to ask her about that tomorrow. Thought Jack as he cleaned up and got into bed beside Ana.

He wrapped his arms around and the last conscious thought he had before falling asleep was of her.