Ok! Summer I can update more but I have 2 leave for vacation in a week maybe next week wen I get back yay. Ok well here is a new chapter and I took ur advice

XDarkmasterX I'm now typing like dou jagan no im not plagiarizing or nothing it just a smart idea 2 type like him ok then. Well here is the next chapter o and I suck at marksmanship that should make a pretty funny chapter P evil arrows and bad marksmanship ummmmmm well u'll find out.

Im gonna use val for valkyre 2 shorten his name k

Val: how many times do we have to do the ending over again before the author updates?

Peirs: I don't know but it sorta getting boring.

VCV: HOW DARE YOU SAY MY ENDING SUCKS!

Peirs: Oh shit we angered the author!

Val: not true you said that…… o wait the new chapter started already……..kool Peirs say your sorry we're later for the new chapter!

Peirs: Sorry all powerful and mighty author!

VCV: that's better but I'm not a god I'm almost a god just need 2 practice some more with my halo2 pistol sniping but thanks for the compliment! Now to the story that you were waiting for!

Chapter two

The amazing arrow trick!

Val: finally the next part of the adventure!

Peirs: Yay I no sorta weird though weren't we supposed to sleep?

Val: No remember we went to the house of earthly delights and got drunk! Remember?

Peirs: Nope don't remember oh well. So do you know who to report to to start your ummm quest?

Val: Nope! And saying such lets go to the archer course!

Peirs: Ok you mean the one near Sadrith Mora right?

Val: If there is one there then sure!

So Val and Peirs head out to Sadrith Mora, but at that time……

Guy: Hey Lenny where's that one guy that we was supposed to pick up like you know the one that was a spellsword and was like shipped over here?

Lenny: What that one convict that was shipped here like a sack of goods?

Guy: Yay that one were is he?

Lenny: Beats me…. But I know one thing the emperor will be real pissed if we don't find him!

And with that Lenny and Guy start searching the whole town for Val.

At Sadrith Mora………

Val: Yay the archery course! Cmon Peirs cmon!

Peirs: fine I'm comin but this costs money and you still paying me back for it k?

Val; Yay what ever just hurry up and pay!

Guard; that will be 50g for both of you.

Peirs hands over the coins with tears in his eyes and whispers good bye sweet money!

Archery instructor: Ok a few rules don't shoot the people, don't shoot your self, don't shoot and miss.

Val: What if we miss?

AI: Then I shoot you so don't miss.

Val:……………

The AI then hands me and Peirs a bow and lots of arrows.

Val: Ok I put the arrow here pull the bow back then………

The arrow shot out of the bow hit a near by pole and started to rebound every eventually killing landing in the dirt at Val's feet.

Val: Am I good or what!

It turns out that the arrow that Val shot have broken all the other arrows shot and had caused a sonic boom which broke the protective wall that the archer course was incased in.

Peirs: wow look at that it looks like you broke everything……

So good chapter? I thought so but I need ur thoughts so press that little review button and gimme a nice review! Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon to but no promises.