Hello ppl! It is chapter 4! Have fun with it and I need more reviews. O well review plz. Ill fix chapter 1 soon too ok. O it just struck me I haven't told yall what race Val and Peirs r! Well Val is a dark elf and Peirs is a wood elf ok!

We find our team in a prison cell in ebonheart……..

Peirs: dam I hate prison!

Val: so do I it's no fun in here.

Peirs: well if you hadn't broken the archery cou

Gaurd1: hey you in there we have you a new cell mate! Heh have fun with him he's in here for murder of a high ordinator. I don't think you will make much of a challenge for him!

Peirs: wtf! Val look what we have now a guy who seems to be content on killing us! God what did I do to deserve this?

Val: I don't know but it had to be bad.

Peirs stares at Val with venom in his eyes.

Evil regaurd: hey you guys you want to bust out of here?

Val: well that doesn't seem like a good idea…..

Peirs: yes how do we?

Evil redgaurd: ok I managed to smuggle TNT into here so we can blow our way out!

Peirs: great! How do we live through the explosion?

Evil redgaurd: well first off we can't second off call me max ill join your team you got going if you want I ain't got nothing else to do!

Peirs: great max you can join we need some help anyway! So let's see lets stick the TNT to the guard and then he will blow up and drop the key!

Val: hey what if he kills use?

Peirs: he won't the explosion will that is why we hide in that corner.

Val: oh. I see.

Peirs: good. Now when he comes to bring us our evening meal we stick him with it ok?

Val: ok!

Max: Kay I got it!

That evening……………………

Boom!

Our tri runs away from the ashes of the prison of ebonheart and commandeers the local fisher woman's vessel.

Max: a life out at sea I could like that!

Val: yeah can I steer the ship?

Peirs/max: no!

Val grabs the ruder of the ship and manages to flip it over.

Icy cold water enveloped Val's senses and everything went black……..

Inside Val's mind…………..

Wow! Were I……… last I remember is I flipped the boat so were I………am Peirs! And max! Dam I'm stranded alone and lost no!

Something whizzed through the air and hit Val and then there was nothing but darkness…………

Oooooooooh clift hanger hope you liked my jail break chapter!