Authors note: Hey thanks for the reviews and I'm glad there's people reading. I got a bad review from an anonymous person saying that my spelling and grammar I told you guys about it and he/she read it and respond like this. So I feel as a person of kindness and sincerity I owe you an apology. I don't expect people to praise my story heck I don't even expect people to like my story but what you said to me personally didn't sound like constructive criticism. As for the way it was written I was writing it on the N and I was just copying and then pasting it and I had explained that to everyone in the authors note. So I'm sorry that it seemed as though I was ridiculing you but do you like the story because you obviously read it again. Sorry about that to the rest of you but it was anonyms so I could send a PM and I wanted that clarified so since this is so long you get an extra long post! So here we go chapter five enjoy. Oh I know I said that Jude and Quest went to New York and Sadie and Tommy to California but if you could just switch those two around it better fits the story that way.
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Chapter 5: Drama California
Jude and Quest have been in California for four days and they haven't talked about what happened on her seventeenth birthday. Jude had realized that she fell in love with Quest and Quest realized that he fell in love with Jude but neither one knew what to do about it so they didn't say anything. Quest's parents had a beach house there so that's where they were staying. Quest was just coming in from the beach in his swimming trunks and no shirt as Jude woke up in her PJ bottoms and a black tank top.
"Morning Jude or should I saw afternoon?" I've been with her for four days and I just keep falling for her even more. She's beautiful when she wakes up.
"Ha ha it's supposed to be a vacation you know where you get to sleep in and lounge around all day." OMG he has no shirt just look at his face not his nice wet rippling abs. Oh God I can't do this four days and you think I'd learn to contain myself.
"Yea sure, if you say so. So what's on the agenda for today?" Would she push me away if I tried to kiss her? No what the hell are our thinking stay focused it's just that she looks so damn good.
"Um I was thinking of going swimming, but in the pool out back not the ocean." Ok so if I kiss him would that be too much 'cause right now I just want to jump on him and kiss him.
"Why not the ocean?" Just do it, just tell her how you feel. Kiss her, hug her, hold her, hell do something.
"Sharks, yeah after I saw Jaws I haven't really been to keen on going into big spools of open water" Oh God you sound like a six-year-old I can't believe I just said that.
"Listen Jude we have to talk. There's something I've been meaning to tell you." Now's the time don't chicken out.
But before Quest could say anything Jude's lips were planted firmly on Quest's. After she realized what she did she Quickly pulled away and didn't bother to look up she just got off the couch and started to walk back to her room when she felt Quest's arm grab her own arm and turn her around. Before she could say anything Quest kissed her a little more firm than hers. Jude quickly wrapped her arms around Quests neck and he picked her up and they were against the wall. Jude could feel all the muscles in his back ripple under her touch; she longed for them just to be skin to skin. Quest had made it to his room never letting go of Jude or breaking the kiss. He carried Jude to the bed and laid her down but before he went any further he stopped and sat down beside her.
"We should talk" There's something every girl longs to here.
"Ok what about." Please don't I hate those words nothing good ever comes from them. I knew he was going to break my heart.
"I really like you Jude, and I don't want to rush things or push you into anything. I know a girls first time can be difficult and I want you to do it when you're ready." Ok why is she laughing I didn't say anything funny.
"You think I'm... this is not my first time Quest, I sort of you know with Speiderman." That was so cute and thoughtful and kind of embarrassing.
"Oh Ok well then if we, you know, what does it mean." Dumb question it means Tommy would kill you if he found out, and you would go to jail.
"It means I like you and you like me and that we care about each other enough to say to hell with the rest of the world. Quest I really shouldn't say this but I have to over the past month or so you and I have grown really close and well." Say it, don't chicken out tell him you love him.
"Well what please tell me Jude?" Tell me so I can tell you that I'm in love with you.
"Heck I'll just say it Quest I'm in love with and I don't know if you feel the...
"I love you to Jude." There I said it and she wait what did she say.
"You what did you just say you love me."
"Yeah, did you just say you love me?" Well I um... I'm speechless
"Yeah well what's next?" Please say there's more like you want us to be together or something.
"I don't know but I know that I want you so bad and I want you to make love to me" I can't believe I just said that.
"Ok" what the hell if I go to jail it's for a good cause.
Jude and Quest continue onto what they were doing after that they lay there together Quest just holding Jude but then the moment was ruined by someone knocking at the door.
"Who's that?" I could kill them for ruining this moment with Jude and me.
"I don't know" What the who the hell is at door who ever it is I'll kill them for ruining this perfect moment.
Quest and Jude got up to answer the door both extremely ticked off. When they opened the door they saw no other than Tommy and Sadie the picture oh so perfect couple.
"Hey guy's we were just on our way back home when Sadie thought we should drop by and see how you were. Hope it's ok if we stay a while." Yeah 'cause I don't like Jude being here some stranger would try to talk to her and then they'd go out and fall in love and get married, and have kids and I won't have that. But I shouldn't worry my man Quest is here he wouldn't let some guy get to her.
"Yeah hope it's ok. Jude what's wrong you look flustered. Did something happen."
"Wh... Oh no I'm fine I um just woke up." That and I was just making out with Quest
"Hey come in and I'll show you to your room and you can get settled it's almost time for dinner." Keep your cool man if Tommy finds out you're dead.
After Tommy and Sadie got settled Quest, with the help of Jude cooked and served dinner. They all sat around and talked. Sadie told Jude about her wedding plans and Tommy Told Quest about how Sadie wanted to trade the viper in for a mini van and then Quest brought up the topic of them moving which would impact a little drama and then he really messed up and asked about kids which brought a whole hell of drama.
"So a mini van, shouldn't you wait till you're at least pregnant to talk about that?"
The room got real quite when Quest said that and before any one spoke Jude had already knew and had already gone from happy to sad, to angry, to pissed. She started yelling before she could stop herself.
"You got her pregnant please tell me you're kidding. You guys aren't even married and you're already expecting have you not heard of condoms maybe you should have been investing in them instead of into condos. I can't believe this." What the hell were they thinking I hate the both of them so much.
"Jude just calm down and let's talk about this." Why the hell did I bring up kids now Jude's going to lose her head?
"Oh please who the hell are you to tell me what a condom is do you even know what one is you haven't even had sex." I can't believe her. She's an inexperienced little twit.
"Sadie babe that's enough Jude is just upset." Women can overreact sometimes but it's nice to know that about Jude.
"Sadie just because I haven't slept with every boy in school doesn't mean I haven't done it but at least I'm smart enough to use protection."
"I have not slept with every boy in school and any boy I slept with meant nothing before Tommy."
"Really that's nice to know Sadie. I'll make sure half the boys in Canada know"
"Quest man I don't think we should get involved I know you still love Sadie but this isn't the time."
"Well are you sure this isn't your first time being pregnant there could be others?"
"I'm not what you're trying to make me out to be Jude and just because you got drunk and slept with Spied doesn't mean you're an expert as I recall you didn't use anything either."
"I thought you said she was a virgin oh so now inexperienced and virgin mean two different things."
"Shut up Tom Jude had one drunken mistake and the point is she was dumb enough not to use protection."
"Well I was smart enough to use it with Quest." Oh God I just said that out loud.
Everyone stopped and stared in complete shock at what Jude had just said Tommy looked steaming mad Sadie looked shocked Jude had her hand over her mouth and eyes shut tight and Quest didn't even look up. Not one word was spoken
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