A/N: I'm back! Went to Jasper for the weekend.. as always.. and it was fun! As always :) But didn't have a chance to write.. or update.. so.. here it is.
Alori: Thanks for the explanation! My story itself is a little bit unrealistic.. yeah..-and proud of it- but I try to let Lona react the same way as I would in real life.. even though I'm not quite sure I would react so calm if someone would use my boyfriend as a boxing ball :D Oh.. and I corrected the mistake in Chapter 4 :) TY!
Nicole: I liked the bathroom scene too.. Jasper didn't.. well.. he didn't like the idea of Jack being naked and me standing there in the same room.. he doesn't seem to get that this is fiction.. bless him :) He's so friggin' cute sometimes
Chapter 5: Killer Coke
Waiting..
bored.. What's keeping that guy? It's been over 15 minutes since he
left to get Jack some shoes to try on. Jasper is standing in front of
a mirror, examining his bruised eye. The poor guy.
"Y'know..
I could tell the guys at school I was in a fight with at least a
dozen very big men, and I kept them at bay all alone"
"Sure..
you could tell them that.. and who knows? Perhaps they'll believe
you.. and perhaps.. someday.. pigs will fly" With a wink I give
him a hug.
Finally
the shopkeeper comes back, carrying five shoe boxes.
"If the
sir would be so kind to try these on? They should fit your
description rather well, Miss"
"Well Jack, go ahead.."
Jack.. where's Jack? He was here just a minute ago.. oh no.. the cash
register! Never leave a pirate alone with money! Terrified of what I
might see, I carefully glance over my shoulder at the counter..
Nope.. no Jack.
"Jack? Where are you?"
"Over
'ere!" From somewhere near the ladies shoes I hear his voice
calling out.
Working my way through the shopping crowd I finally
reach Jack..
He's
regarding himself in one of the mirrors, wearing a pair of woman
cowboy boots. Yuck.
"Jack.. they look disgusting"
"Yeah..
I know.. can I have them?
The boots are a filthy looking colour brown, with all sorts of doodles and thingies.. a flower pattern embroidered on the nose.. in short: Icky.
"You
want these?"
"Yeah.. I like them"
Frowning I
look down at the boots again.. he likes them.. this man has a very
strange taste..
"Are you sure Jack? I mean.. they áre
woman boots.. and that nice man has gone over all this trouble to
find you some nice shoes.."
Jack simply shrugs
"Don't
want them.. I like these.. and that man isn't nice.. and how can
shoes be nice? They don't talk or act"
Sigh.. and people say woman are a tough crowd when it comes to shopping.
"If
you say so Jack"
I take the price tag to the counter and give
the shopkeeper an apologizing smile
"I'm so sorry for the
inconvenience, but my friend decided he wants these boots"
At
first the man looks annoyed.. until he scans the tag.. a beaming
smile appears on his face.
"No problem Miss, no problem at
all.. now.. will that be cash, cheque or PIN?"
-gulp-
300 euro? That bloody, stinking pirate sure knows his shoes.
"Erhm..
PIN please"
A
few moments later we walk out of the store.. Jack is trotting along
happily on his new boots. I wonder if the embroidering is made of
gold or something.. 300 bucks.. jeez.
We spent the rest of the
afternoon in several men's wear stores, and I've got to say.. apart
from the boots.. Jack looks great. Too bad he refuses to go to a
barbershop.
"No!
My stay here is temporary! I will not.. I repeat.. I will NOT let
anyone do anything to my hair!"
"But Jack.."
"Lona,
give the man a break.. you've given him a total makeover.. let him
keep his hair for cryin' out loud"
Jasper sighs
"But..
I.."
"No!" Jack is looking frustrated and keeps his
hand protectively on his hair
"Oh alright" I grumble.
"Let's go get something to eat.. I'm starving.."
Jack
glares at me.. not entirely trusting me for giving in after a mere 20
minutes of arguing.
"You're not going to press this
matter?"
"What matter?"
Confused
Jack looks at Jasper
"What's she up to?"
He just
shrugs "Don't know.. Lona.. you're acting strange.. you don't
normally give in that fast.. what's wrong?"
Argh.. why is it that everyone keeps thinking I'm up to some evil scheme or something? I mean.. that only happens 9 out of 10 times.. this could easily be the 10th time.. right?
"Nothing
is wrong.. why should anything be wrong? Look.. we can eat something
here"
"What? This isn't a tavern" Jack looks around
even more confused. "This looks like one of those shoe stores"
"Well..
frankly.. it is.. but this one has a restaurant at the top floor..
"
The three of us take a seat at a window view table and I
take a glance at the menu card.
"That'll be fries and salad
for me.. what do you want Japs?"
"Pizza!" Right..
how could I forget?
"Jack?"
"Rum!"
"Something
to eat Jack.. and they don't sell beverages with that many alcohol in
it here"
"Stew?"
"You know what.. I'll
order something for you.."
After a little while the waitress brings our food.. yay! Food! Fries with salad and gypsy sauce for me, pizza Bolognese for Japs and a Croque Monsieur for Jack. And 3 glasses of coke.
"So..
what's our next plan of action?"
I swallow the fries and
shrug "Haven't got the faintest idea.. I guess there isn't much
to do.. we just have to hide Jack until they've stopped searching
him.. I think"
Jasper nibbles on a slice of pizza, staring
ahead of him in thought "But.. we're in the future.. how can
they forget about him if he stays here long enough.. if he goes
back.. won't he come back in exactly the same time and space as when
he left?"
Huh?
Come again?
"BLOODY HELL! POISON! AGAIN!" Jack suddenly
jumps up from his chair, after drinking a little of his cola.
Spraying the stuff in our faces.
"Jack! Calm down! What's
wrong?" Jasper pushes Jack back down on his chair.
"What
is this stuff? There's something in it that tried to eat my tongue! I
could feel it skittering and popping an' bubbling in me mouth!"
Carefully
I pick up Jack's glass and examine it, dipping my finger in it,
tasting it, sniffing it.. attempting to look through it.
"There's
nothing wrong with it.. it's just.. cola.."
"Nothing'
wrong with it? It almost sizzled a freakin' hole in my mouth!"
"Stop
exaggerating Jack"
"I'm not!"
Jasper is looking
at the drinks.. obviously thinking about something.
"It's
a vile drink! Even more vile than rum.. at least rum won't kill ya!
Well.. not so quickly anyway"
"You're still alive, it
didn't kill you! Nor did it kill me or Jasper!"
"Lona..
do you remember the first time you ever had cola?"
"No"
Jasper
glares at me
"What? I really can't remember! I was a young
soft drink addict.. so sue me!"
"Maybe some day I will..
but anyway.. my point being.. the very first time a child drinks this
stuff.."
"Are you callin' me a baby now mate?"
"Shut
up.. the first time it'll hurt a little on the tongue.. the bubbles?
Remember?"
"Yeah..
I think I can remember my little nephew crying the first time he
drank it.. but.. after the first gulp he was alright.. even laughed
because it tickled his mouth from the inside.. stupid kid.. so that
means Jack's a very big baby?"
"Am not!"
"Well..
perhaps.. he's just a little sensitive"
"AM NOT!"
"Try
it again.. please? For me?"
"For you? After you called
me a baby? Don't think so luv"
Of all the stupid, arrogant..
grrr
"So. prove it then.. prove you're not a baby!"
Jack
glares at me.. grabs the glass and downs it all in one go. Wow..
Impressive.. Even I won't do that..
"And? Still think it's
eating your mouth away?"
"grnrnrrfff" Jack is
making swallowing noises.. and looks a bit bloated..
Erhm..
perhaps something went wrong.. Jack is clutching his stomach.. and
suddenly lets out this huge belch.. which I won't repeat here.. due
to young readers whose precious little minds I do not wish to
corrupt.. or something like that..
"Ahem..
right.."
"Yeah.."
"That was great! Rum
won't do that to you! Bartender! Another round!"
"NO!"
"NO!"
"Just..
eat your food Jack" at least he won't have troubles with the
tosti.(Croque Monsieur.. or whatever you not Dutch people call it)
So much for my appetite.. staring at my fries I hear Jasper gasp.. and hear Jack gobbling something down besides me.. gobbling down? You can't gobble down bread. Well.. normal people don't gobble down bread.
I
look at Jack.. and can't help myself.. I start laughing really
loud.
"This I like.. a good, sturdy soup"
Right..
remember that sauce I mentioned that came with my fries? Gypsy? Jack
thinks it's soup, and he's drinking it all down now.. without a
spoon.. just.. the bowl at his lips.. and go.. I guess you should've
seen it.. I can.. and it's a stunning sight.
Clearing his throat,
Jasper taps Jack on the shoulder
"You don't want to be doing
that.. I'm sure"
"Why not? You try it.. it's great.. a
bit on the sweet side.. but still, I've had worse"
Glaring
angrily at me.. for still not being able to talk.. because I'm almost
under the table from laughing, Jasper tries desperately to pry the
bowl from Jack fingers.. and fails miserably
"Because Jack..
that isn't soup.. erhm. how do I explain this.. "
Well.. after five more minutes, Jasper finally convinces Jack to stop slobbering down the sauce. At least.. that's what Jasper likes to think. The fact that the bowl was empty is something that comes in second place apparently. For some silly reason the waitress asked us, very impolitely, if we would please leave because we were embarrassing the other guests. Pssh.. the nerve of some people.
Let's head back for the car.
And another chapter done :) I am thinking about doing a parody on a Mary Sue.. in POTC I mean.. but I'll get back on that one later (I've still got 3 other stories to finish.. and 1 story I want to rewrite.. so.. busy.. but.. writers block on those stories.. bad me)
