Ok.. Quick on the update today.. FF refused to upload for 4 days.. so here's the chapter I tried to upload the 21st:

Chapter 17: Don't Shoot!
"Chloe! Where are you!" Searching every chamber in Will's house frantically, I try to find Chloe, Will and Norrington.
I hope Mary didn't harm them in any way.

"Mmfmfmppfh!" A dull and muffled sound can be heard from behind the cellar door.

Jack stalks over to the cellar and pulls his gun out. With a movement of his hands he beckons me to stay back as he slowly turns the lock.. Barbossa draws his gun too, pointing it at the small crack.

The door slams open, and two figures fall over each other on the floor.
"Mmfmfmpphf!" The top figure says. Jack takes a step back and points his gun at the two people, who are still sprawled on the floor. With a finger he warns Barbossa not to shoot.
"Alright.. who are you and what did you do to the others?" Jack demands.

"Jack! Don't shoot!" I quickly push both of the guns down, before something very bloody happens.
The person on top lifts its head. Two very angry looking eyes squint a Jack.
"MFMMMFFFPPPFH!" It muffles.
"It's only Chloe" Indeed.. it's Chloe.. and underneath her lies Will.. both gagged with a piece of cloth and tied together with a few shawl.. don't ask why..
Gingerly I pull the gag out of her mouth.
"Well.. hello there..had fun in the cellar?" I ask, grinning slightly."

Chloe continues glaring at Jack.
"He tried to shoot us!"

Jack glances at his pistol and quickly hides it behind his back, smiling his most charming smile.
"Yes.. well.. I had to... what if you were another evil person being? Hmm.. ever thought of tha'? Nice to see you again too, by the way"
"Don't you weasel your way out of this Sparrow.. untie me so I can give you a wallop!"
Jack puts his finger on his lower lip and pretends to be thinking deeply. After a few seconds he answers.
"Well.. though tempting it may seem.. I feel disinclined to free you.. especially with the idea of being hit on the head in the near future"

Jasper simply rolls his eyes and unties Chloe, grabbing her by the arm, thus preventing her from trying to strangle Jack.
"Hi.. I'm Jasper.. you must be Chloe. Lona told me a few things about you"
"Oh? What did she say? Hey.. so you must be Jasper.. then who is that guy?"
"I am Barbossa, glad to meet you miss"

"Mmmfppfffhhfmpf!"
Oh right.. we're forgetting about Will. Quickly I untie him too, while gently clipping Jack across the head.
"Thank you oh so very much for your help Jack" Will says sarcastically, while rubbing his wrists.
Jack grins and bows slightly
"You're ever so welcome, young William."

And, as happens often in this kind of situations in which people are together, everyone starts talking to each other. Creating an awful lot of noise for only five people talking. Five people? Six including myself? Who am I missing? Let's see..
Me- one
Jasper- two
Chloe-Three

Will-Four
Jack-Five
Barbossa- Six

Norrington!
"Jamie is missing! Where is Jamesy?"
Chloe raises an eyebrow
"That little pantsy has betrayed us"
"No!"
"Yes!"
"Why!"
"I don't know!"
Jack interrupts our little conversation
"Probably money, luv. Now let's go and collect our treasure! Or at least our treasure map!"

Chloe looks at Jack, confused
"Treasure map? Treasure? What? Who? and mostly: where and why?.. not to mention: WHAT IS BARBOSSA DOING HERE!"
I glance at Jasper and sigh.
"Well.. that's a bit of a long story.. let me explain.."

-a few moments later-
"... and then we found you."
Chloe eyes Barbossa suspiciously
" I don't trust him"

Barbossa stares at her, looking shocked
"But ma'am.. I can assure you.."
"You can assure and insure all you want.. I still won't trust you.. it's in the name you see?" she snaps at him.

"Yes, yes.. all very fine.. can we go now?" Jack asks, glancing out of the window nervously.
"Where to Jack?" Will asks, still a bit chagrined about him being tied up and all.
"The docks..and then... the TwenthyFirst Century!"

Everyone falls silent.. looking around them as if something dramatic should have happened. But it didn't..

"You're daft Sir!" Barbossa says, taking a step backwards, shaking his head.
"Aye.. and your point would be?" Jack asks, grinning and showing his golden teeth.
Jasper stands in the doorway, his arms folded in front of his chest, blocking the only means of escape for Barbossa.

"You're not going anywhere Barbossa.. it's your sister.. so we decided you are somewhat responsible"
"I thought she was dead!"
"Yes..and she is not! Imagine how that makes you look!"
"Apart from surprised, shocked and stunned you mean?" Barbossa retorts "I don't know why she isn't dead.. and why she did this.. but it has nothing to do with me!"

"Sure mate" Jack scoffs "but guilty or not. you're coming with us".
Jack thrusts his finger skywards and shouts excitedly "TO THE DOCKS!"

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Love, Lona