Hey uh sorry if I'm not too good with sad stories, I've never written them before so I

wanted to try a new experience well hope you like.

Breaking Point: Chapter 2. Taking Her In

" Miss, if you keep staying in the rain as you are, you'll die," I said.

She let me go, and looked at me for a moment then went back to the corner in a tight ball. She wouldn't budge.

" Almost like she wants to die" I thought. I sighed and put my coat around her. I grabbed her hand.

She looked at me and started to cry again.

I pulled her up until she was on her feet.

" You're coming with me, " I whispered.

Her eyes widened, and then her eyes started to narrow, and before I knew it, she collapsed, unconscious. I began to panic. " MISS, MISS"I said to her limp body.

She wasn't moving.

I checked her pulse. There was a pulse but just barely. What happened to this girl, why was she in such a state? She was breathing and a heartbeat was present. But she was just barely alive.

No choice. I picked her up, and carried her. I carried her until I came to a familiar looking house.

I kicked the door open.

" Hey Kurama, where have you been its almost," Yusuke stopped when he saw what I was carrying.

" Oh my god, it's a girl," Kuwabara exclaimed.

" SHE LOOKS HALF DEAD," the girls ( Keiko, Botan, Yukina, and Atsuko) yelled.

" Indeed, I found her in an alley in a dark corner crying in the rain. At first I thought it was just someone homeless or something. But when I saw her, I concluded she wasn't, she may be in rags but something about her seems different," Kurama explained.

" Kurama, do you plan on taking this girl in, if she were to see who we really were, she would most scream or do some matter of shock," Hiei said calmly.

" Well I can't leave her," Kurama stated.

" He's right, the girl will stay here," Genkai said.

And that's how the broken girl, or so I call her, was to stay with us.

Hey this one isn't as sad as the last but it's just the explanatory on how she was in the presence of Team Urameshi.