OK before we get started I'd like to say thank you to Ember Silverly for her review and I thank you for your questions. For your first question about why Tomoyo is related to Sakura,
I just thought it would be an easier way to introduce her to team 7, and I do agree that she would be stronger if separated from Sakura, and that plays a good part of the story, because Tomoyo ends up thinking that she doesn't need her teammates and gets injured on a mission because of it. Her and Sakura start to fight and later Sakura challenges Tomoyo to a little "match" to see who is stronger. For your second question, why I am switching points of view, I'm sorry that you find it distracting and I promise that I won't do it as often because I want to keep my story as interesting as possible. I'm still debating on if I should keep doing that or not, and so far I'm thinking I'm not going to do it anymore. And for your third question, I write in second person because I want the reader to picture themselves in the story and not just some random girl. Again Thank you for your questions and the review please keep reading my story because it makes me smile to know that there are people out there who like my writing!
Disclaimer-I still do not own Naruto but I hope too one day only my OC's and some of the storyline.
Chapter 2- Sister, I'm hungry.
It was the next morning and you were carrying your little brother because he was still asleep.
He was on your back and his face was buried in your neck and his steady breathing was tickling you and you couldn't help but smile, until the events of the night before replayed in your mind about the third time that morning. Your smile faded and a frown was seen upon your features.
FLASHBACK
"I hope your not afraid of the dark." As the fire went out you immediately sprang into action. You placed your brother in a bush to keep him concealed from view, even if it was dark you weren't about to take any chances. After hiding him you closed your eyes and concentrated on your surroundings. After a couple of seconds you pinpointed him by all the sound he was making. He was still in the same spot as before but he was looking around and the noise he made by moving gave you the advantage. You opened your eyes and spoke loud enough for him to hear, "aren't you going to attack me? Because I know where you stand and won't hesitate to kill you! But first, what do you want?" you looked his way and with a menacing look in your eyes. "HAHAHAHA, clever girl, I want everything you have with you at this moment. Even that little bundle you had in your lap a while ago, before the fire went out."
At the mention of him wanting your little brother your emotions kicked into overdrive as you moved. You moved with such a great speed, he had no time to react. You grabbed a kunai knife out of the pouch that was positioned on your hip and appeared behind the stranger and as soon you appeared you plunged the kunai into his back and stood there as he fell to the ground. You looked down at him and replied even if he couldn't hear you, "Like I said, I wouldn't hesitate to kill you." As you peered down at the man in disgust you let out a breath that you had been holding in since the fire went out. As you looked down at the man you spoke yet again, "forgive me, I am sorry I could not control my emotions, I shall give you a proper burial. But no one EVER threatens to take my brother away." With that said you took a deep breath and started to lug his heavy body to the center of the clearing.
FLASHBACK END
You spent the rest of the night digging a hole on the ground to put him in and you never got much rest either. You didn't mind though. Then you felt your little brother stir. You turned your head so you could get a good look at his peaceful face. He opened his big round eyes and looked at you. "I can walk sister." You just smiled and gently placed him on the ground a little relieved that you weren't carrying him anymore, even though you never would admit it to anyone, he did get heavy after a while. Then you heard a noise, it was kind of quiet but eventually got louder you looked to your side with your eyebrows raised and he blushed.
"ummm I'm sorry sis." You looked at him once more and laughed. You looked down at him once more with knowing in your eyes and asked, "what's the matter?" he looked up at you and smiled again, "Sister, I'm hungry." After his little confession the strange noise was heard again and you laughed again, "I can tell." After you were done laughing you looked ahead and was greatly relieved at the sight. You stopped walking and he looked ahead. "You know what? I don't think you need to worry about being hungry, because as soon as we enter those gates I promise getting you food will be my first priority." You smiled as you grabbed his small hand and raced to the gate ahead.
So How'd you like it? sorry it was so short but I'll make more chapters and I promise they'll be longer! Well please reveiw I would appreciate it! later!
