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Tala: --fakecough-- corny...very corny...
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Me: OLiver! Disclaimer please!
Oliver: Sure! T-LW-T doesn't own any of us. We are all (c) to Aoki Takao in...Japan I think and...yeah...All OC's or people you do not recognize are (c) T-LW-T or her bloody-muse Rhapsody as she likes to call her. The only thing T-LW-T owns is the OC's, plot, a computer, keyboard, computer mouse, TV, VForce: Ultimate Blader Jam, Beyblade for PS2, a PS2, and the word program she uses to type this.
Me: ...Do you have that memorized?
Oliver: --nods and walks off--
Me: ...What Ollie said, then! THANKS OLLIE! Oh, and enjoy the reading, folks!
Warning: Two more OC shows up! Oh, and thanks to Ash, we have moved this chapter's rating up because of his German potty-mouth...XD I didn't really bother to censor it, so yeah...
—————————Chapter III: Meet the Boys; Enter Xnic and Ash!
"Are we there yet?" Kai asked with high hyperness and childness. He continued to bounce as he walked next to Bryan until he realized what he was doing. "…Damn, this kid side's hard to control…" Kai mumbled angrily.
"Aww, c'mon and let it loose, Kai…! You never got to do this at the abbey!" Tala said from Kai's shoulder. Tala was purring contently at his ride and looking around, getting easily distracted.
"…" Kai glared at the hitchhiker. "…Grr…ride's over!" Kai snapped, pushing the red kitten off his shoulder. Tala landed right on his back, growling and cursing in kitty language.
"Meo-OUCH!" Tala yelped as he hit the ground. He growled and jumped to his feet and raced after the chibi blader, more cursing following as he did.
"Didn't you learn, Tala?" Kevin as, galloping next to him.
"Learn what!" Tala snapped as he concentrated on not running into anything.
"How to land on your feet! Duh! Cats ALWAYS land on their feet!" Kevin said, smiling all kitty-like.
"...(Bleep) off or I'll bite you..." Tala snapped and glared at Kevin...which caused him to ignore the pleas of 'TALA! Watch out for that--' they were all cut off as Tala ran into a tree because he was too busy glaring at Kevin...way to go, einstien! (Tala: SHUT UP! Kevin: Haha!)
"Where's your house?" Brooklyn asked Raven as a bird perched on his shoulder…which was odd since it was technically perching on Hiro's…
"Oh, it's right up here," Raven said, pulling back a bush.
Everyone: O.O
"…What?" Raven looked at the house…which was more like a mansion. "It's not my house; I'm staying with my team, here," Raven said, walking up to the intercom.
"Wow, it's like Enrique's…" Tyson said from atop of Hiro's (Brooklyn's) shoulders.
"Yeah!" Ray agreed from his place in Mariah's arms. Mariah nodded as mot of the others agreed. (Oliver: Mine's still bigger! --pouts--)
Raven giggled and pressed the intercom.
"Who's there?" A young male voice from the intercom asked.
"Raven Arakin," Raven said with high authority.
"Raven Arakin who?" It asked like in a knock-knock joke.
"…Enough with the damn knock-knock jokes, Ash." Raven growled. "Just open the door! It's Raven, dammit!"
"Hmmmmm…sorry! Don't know a Raven!"
"Open that damn gate or you'll be seeing Egypt…THE HARD WAY."
"—Gulp— Oh, Ray-Ray? Back so soon?" The metal gate swung open.
"…Idiot…" Raven muttered, motioning for the rest to follow her. "Just wait 'till I get my hands on him…" Raven mumbled angrily as she knocked on the oak doors.
A young boy with blue hair with black streaks answered the door. He had baggy tan cargo pants and had a black hoodie with the words 'Live to Play' on the back in white letters. He had fingertip-less black gloves on and he wore a black hat on backwards with the words 'VForce' written in white on the back. (A/N: Or in the front in the case of Ash wearing it backwards) He was probably around 17 or 18, around Kai or Tala's age.
"Raven! You're here!" The boy smiled widely. "Glad you made it back."
"What, did you expect for me to die before I came back, Ash?" Raven asked coldly, pushing past the boy. "Come on in Tyson and co." Raven ushered the gang in and started walking, Ash following right beside her.
——Oliver's POV——
I looked around the mansion. I really wasn't surprised; most of the Majestics' residences are like this. MY place is bigger.
"All right," Raven came up to a gaping hole that sat below a couple, maybe 7 or 8, upper floors. "Just follow me up the st—…." Raven's mouthed dropped open, she then clenched her teeth tightly. "… XNIC!" She yelled. "WHAT DID YOU DO TO THE STAIRS!" Whoa, what did he do to the stairs? They're gone! ...Who's Xnic? Team caption?
Out of the shadows, a cloaked figure came out. He had a hood over his head, concealing his face, and glowing purple eyes. The cloak covered all of his body and all we could make out on his face was his mouth with fangs showing when he hissed at us silently.
"A Dark Blader!" We all screamed, jumping out of our skin…except for most of the people that never even met them; so naturally they blinked and didn't have a clue as to what the hell we were jumping and screaming at; BEGA Justice 5, F-Dynasty, Judy Tate, Mathilda, Miguel, Hilary, Romero, Rick, and Hiro included...there might be more, but that's who I can name off the top of my head. Raven looked at us.
"A what?" She asked. "…Oh...you mean...XNIC!" She yelled again. The cloaked figure's eyes stopped glowing. "WHAT have I told you about FREAKING OUT our guests!" Raven snapped.
The figure pulled his hood down to reveal a boy around Hiro's age, 20 or 21, with orange hair. He pushed the bangs out of his eyes and frowned.
"I don't do it on purpose…" The boy replied, frowning.
"Okay, okay, I'll give you that…" Raven said, sighing. "BUT WHERE THE HELL ARE THE STAIRS! Must I ASK again!" Raven snapped. Xnix smiled sheepishly and sweatdropped.
"Eh...sorry." Xnic pushed a button on the wall and the stairs popped out of nowhere...no literally...one minute they're not there, next there not...and they made a'pop'ing noise when they appeared."Sorry, Ray'," Xnic apologized while throwing his cape back behind himself to show us that he woredark gray jeansand a long-sleeved white T-shirt with a gray vest over-top.He also has black tennis shoes on and gray gloves without the finger-tips.
"Whatever, but really, Xnic, what have I told you about not messing with the house!" Raven said in exasperation as she started climbing the spiraling stairs, all of us trailing behind...and I think Ash ditched us...Wait, no, therehe is... After 5 or 6 floors, we finally arrived wherever Raven was trying to reach..whew, she has a lot of stairs! My house may be bigger, but she has way more stairs... "All right, now…" Raven pulled out a silver key and slipped it into a padlock. She jiggled with it for a moment before a clicking noise was heard, telling her that the door opened.
"Mint should be working in here." Raven said as she pushed the door open with her shoulder and upper body. "But then again, I'm never sure with that girl."
"Ne, Mint?" Raven looked around. "You in here?" The sounds of fingers typing rapidly across a keyboard filled our ears. (Translation: Ne Hey)
"I'm…over…here…" A voice said between multiple clicks of the keyboard. The typing suddenly stopped. "What do you need?" A black haired girl in a rolling chair rolled out of the darkness and stood up.
She had small, circular glasses framing her golden eyes and had a light purple jacket tied around her waist that reminded me of Mariah. She had a dark purple belly tube-top on and she had baggyblack cargo pants that were outlined in pale purple. She wore black arm socks and had a watch on her right wrist over top of the armsock. Her hair fell daintily over her face and went a little past her chest.
Kenny looked at her with curiosity and a slight lust... and received an elbow in the ribcage from a jealous Ming Ming...Heh, I watched Kenny look at Ming Ming with a look of 'I wasn't looking at her like that!' and Ming Ming growled a 'Yeah right...' under her breathe. I snickered as most of the gang looked at me with curiousity themselves.
"A mystery." Raven turned around and picked up Johnny. If you asked me, Johnny was a little more than just nervous about it…He slapped me when I tried to pick him up because he was lagging behind. Raven held the chibi gently in her arms and looked at the girl. "These are some of the teams from the tournaments over the course of years. They were hanging out at the beach when they changed into the opposing gender, cats, switched bodies, or turned into chibi's." Raven said, motioning the corresponding groups.
"Hm…Odd." The girl muttered loudly. She walked up to Raven and looked at Johnny in her arms. "Chibi?" She asked. Raven nodded. "He's cute." She winked, making Johnny blush slightly and fidget. "Now, let me investigate this."
"Who are you?" Enrique asked looking up at the girl.
"Oh, I'm sorry. My name's Aminta. You can call me Minty, Mint, or 'Minta." The girl said, bowing. Raven smiled.
"She's the brains in this household," Raven replied. "Minty, one last thing before we head to the parlor…"
"Yes?" Aminta asked.
"…Xnic and Ash are gonna come up here in about 2 hours… so…do me a favor…" Raven set Johnny down and walked over to Minty and whispered in her ear.
Aminta ran into a closet and came out with a bucket. "Now…Get out of here so I can get to work!" Aminta commanded, ushering us all out. Raven looked at Aminta as she slammed the door in our faces. She flinched as the door slammed right in front of the
Evil laughter was heard inside the room as lightning and thunder flashed outside, making all of us wince.
"…Don't mind her." Raven assured us at seeing our freaked out faces, "She likes doing that. Freaks out our damn neighbors." Raven replied smiling, ushering us down stairs.
"Hey, Ray, have you seen Ash?" Xnic asked as we met on the stairs.
"No, I haven't." Raven replied. "Why do you ask?"
"I told him to go and get my book from upstairs…" Xnic asked, pointing upstairs.
"Why?" Raven asked, puzzled.
"Because; I read while we train together." Xnic replied, shrugging. "He's so bad at ninja training, I can read a book and block his attacks…quite fun."
"You and your stupid Ninja crap…" Raven groaned.
"Shut it. And besides…!" Xnic snapped.
"Wait…where's your book!" Raven asked, cutting him off.
"In your room. Why?" Xnic replied, shrugging. Raven sighed.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" A scream came from upstairs. "GET ME DOOOOOOWWWWWNNNNN!"
"Oh snap…" Raven started walking slowly up the stairs, all of us in tow; curious as to just what was happening up there. When Xnic and us finally caught up to Raven, we saw her looking into her room.
"You idiot! You know better than to go into my room!" Raven snapped, waving her arms. Xnic rushed over and saw Ash standing in the doorway; a sprung security system in the background. His hoodie sleeve was sliced, his pants were cut in many places, and his hat's brim was falling off; and he didn't look too happy. He held a manga book in his hand thatsaid 'Oshidoro'...I think the title is the name of the place...
"Are you all right, Ash!" Xnic asked, frowning.
"…Whatever…" Ash mumbled. He looked at Xnic and growled.
"…Xnic…" Ash started towards Xnic, holding a book in his hand. When he was about 3 feet away, Ash held up the book. "THIS IS YOURS!" He snapped, throwing the book at the orange-haired teen; smacking him directly in the head…
"Ow! What the hell!" Xnic snapped at the younger boy. "What was that for!" Ash growled and yelled.
"Wenn es nicht für Ihr fucking Buch war, würde ich nicht das fuckin haben ', das in einem freakin ' Sicherheit Falle gewesen wurde, die das fuckin ' sourpuss, Raven, aufstellen Sie! Ich HASSE SIE UND IHR BAKA BUCH!" Ash snapped. (A/N: I hope this is accurate German…...and I didn't really mind to censor it...so, yeah...)
"Ash!" Raven growled. Guess she knew what he was saying. I think Robert, did too, because he had his eyes wide. "You could have refused to get the stupid thing!" Ash growled at Raven, turning his attention towards her.
"OH! So now it's MY fault! YOU had the stupid trap!"
"YOU kept breaking into my ROOM!"
"NO, I did not!"
"YES, you did!"
"…All right, what is going ON out here?" A red with silver streaks in her hair girl mimicked their tone; slamming the door next to them open, right into the wall.
"Scar!" Raven narrowed her eyes. "Talk some sense into this kid!" Scarlet smirked.
"…Ooh Assshhh…" Scarlet taunted, slowly walking towards him cracking her knuckles. Ash gulped.
"RETREAT! RETREAT!" He screamed, running for the stairs and sliding down the railing; Scarlet running after him, doing the same.
------------------------------------------------To Be Continued...
Ash: ...WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO US!
Xnic: ...--reading Oshidoro and not paying attention--
Hiro: ...--blinks--
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Brooklyn: --comes outta nowhere and stands next to Hiro--And we would like to thank our reviwers:BeyMistress05 andkittens3!
Johnny: --same as Brooklyn--And our three dorks: Red Nox/Arma/Luna!
Tala: --same as Johnny-- Thank you all for reviewing and we're glad you enjoy the story. New chapter's will be posted maybe once or twice a week because T-LW-T has made all the chapters up to...
Kai: --walks in, scowling-- Chapter 5 and cannot go any further because she needs the reviwers like you's imput once she gets to that chapter in a few weeks...like 2 or 3...soooooo...Can I go now? --Tala nods-- Catch yah later, suckers...--walks off--
Me: ...do...youguys have all that memorized?
Hiro/Tala/Johnny/Brooklyn: --nod and walk away--
Me: ...freaks...o.O
