He looked around and it looked like a slave auction. He saw a Togruta man to his right and a human man to his left. He ran towards the togruta to protect him. He looked in worse shape. When he got there he heard the man say. "Thank you Jedi," in a wheezy voice. "Your welcome," he responded. He had to get this man help. He had to make the queen let him and this man free.

Suddenly a man came out with an electro whip. He walked over and force pushed the man over who looked surprised before falling over. He walked up to him and grabbed his hair, the man struggled but he was strong enough to hold him down. He grabbed his hair and repeatedly slammed him against the wall. Finally the man fell down, knocked out. He grabbed his whip and went to get the man. The man was dodging the electro whips well. However he wasn't watching his back and turned around just to get whipped to the face, he fell down.

It was just him, great. Not like the man could have helped. He didn't have a weapon. Revan walked over with his boots crunching. He activated the whip and attacked. He dodged a whip and pushed a guard with the force. Then to his right two men fell. One was one of the alien creatures he was fighting and the other was a human. He guessed the human was with him because he started shooting the guards. He heard a scream and looked to where the queen was, a girl was being electrocuted. She had a lightsaber. Jedi! But why was she here? She was way too young. He would deal with that later he thought as he turned back to the battle.

The man in front of him was hit with an electro whip and fell immediately. He decided to use a huge force blast. He hadn't wanted to as it would kill them but he supposed he had to. He lifted his hand and felt the force swirl around him. He aimed it at the guards and they all disintegrated. He turned around to face the queen. He yelled "You will release me and these two. I will only give you one chance,"

For some reason the man whose head he slammed into the wall opened his eyes. He quickly gathered the force but then the man said in a croaked voice "Stop I'm with you, Me and her were going to trick the queen into…" he trailed off. "Releasing the Togruta colonist," He responded, "why should I trust you?" Then after a few seconds he said "I'm a jedi too," and a small whirlwind appeared on his palm.

He felt bad hurting him. "I'm sorry," he said. "It's" cough* "Okay," the man said. He turned back up to the queen and did a jedi jump. When he arrives at the top he uses a force push, breaking the glass. "You will release all the slaves or I will do what I must," "Fine," she says with rage. Then she gives the command into her comm. She walks to a table and turns around. He almost doesn't react in time as a bullet streaks passed him. He uses the force to push her over. Knocking her out.

Revan walks to the queen and grabs her. He uses the force to make her regain consciousness. When she opens her eyes he shoves her to the comm and threatens her to make her guards stand down. She does it this time without complaint. Then he uses the force to knock her out and leaves her in the corner. He grabs the Togruta girl and makes her wake up with the force. She must have used her slave collar. The girl wakes up and then calms down when she sees him. "Why are you here? We were supposed to be the only ones sent," she says. " I don't know," he responded. "I'll be right back. I'm grabbing the others," he says before she can ask more.

He goes down and grabs the one man that was hit with the whip. He makes the man lean on him. And walks to where the queen was. He jumps up with force and lands. However he stumbles and with the extra weight he falls down. The girl chuckles and he glares at her. Then the man he had hit comes up. "Obi-wan" he whispers. Then he says "So you're the thing I felt in the force,". "What do you mean?" he asks. "I felt something a few hours ago. When did you get here?" the man says "A few hours ago," The man looks surprised. "We'll talk later," he says.

It takes them about an hour to get out. It was hard to find their lightsabers and had to interrogate a guard for it. We had to fight him because that was not his orders to let them go and wouldn't say. Then after that the man had explained how they were both Jedi and here to save the Togruta colonist. Their names were Master Kenobi, Knight skywalker, and Padawan Tano but they told him to call them Obi-Wan, Anakin, and Ahsoka. Early on he contacts a jedi named Plo Koon who would arrive with their battalion. He was surprised that he didn't know any of them. When they left he heard the sound of gunfire. The battalion must have arrived. Obi-wan pointed to the right and said they had parked the ship there.

"We should go help them," He said. "No the clones got it," said Anakin. He was confused "Clones? What do you mean?" he asked. All of them looked shocked except Rex who had his helmet on. "You know the war the clones?" Said Anakin. He was very confused "I ended the war," he said. "Who are you?" Anakin asked. "Revan," he said. "So you're named after one the most famous jedi of the jedi civil war?" said Ahsoka. "Named after?" he said. "Of course he died almost 5,000 years ago," said Obi-wan. Revan was shocked. He thought it was just a bad guess to explain the advanced things on this planet. "I'll talk when we are in hyperspace," he said.

When they finally got there Anakin punched in the coordinates and they blasted off into hyperspace.

Authors notes: Hi, I finished this on Tuesday but I will probably release them on Saturday or Sunday because then they get the most views :P Bye!