Life is like a flame
flames start out bright and steady
like a baby is born ready
for the life it has to endure
life is so unsure
the flame grows fast and strong
hopefully it lasts long
after all the beatings it goes through it gets smaller
even though you are getting taller
the flame starts to burn low
life begins to slow
The flame begins to dimish
your life it about to be finished
as the flame begins to die
a tear forms in many a person's eye
the flame is out now
and so you are gone
but you will be remembered on and on
guess who will miss you always
through all of these days
me, myself, and I if no one else will
ill think of you as i walk up a hill
everythime i turn around the thought of you will always be around.
the moral of this is no matter what someone will miss you and if not i will. even if i dont know you i still care bout every life there is cuz you cant take life for granted... even if its not your own.
This chaps for all the people who reviwed which are three special people:
Dark Kitsune of Ra - thank you! wow ive read some of your poems and they are great im honored to be reviewed by you.
aubrey - thank you! i tried to get my feelings about it into a poem but it wuz hard. Im glad someone understands where im comming from.
black rain -hey first reviewer thanks again!
bye guys
Cat
