I got a review from SHAFFER saying "Rin should be with Haru. Besides this is just wrong

Well, Shaffer, if you didn't notice that this is MY story, not yours, If you have a problem with, then don't read, I never grabbed your face and shoved it on the screen to read it.

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NormaL POV

Lena had woKen up before Rin in the morning. SHe had stared at Rin for a while and noticed it seemed like she was having a bad dream.

"awwww poor Rin" She whispered to herself and barely touched her cheek. "the only way to get out of a bad dream is to wake up Rin" She said and got up from the futon. She looked at the clock next to Rin's bed. It was 5:30 am.
"wow I never get up this early...Im gonna take a walk" She combed her hair and put it in to high ponytails and clipped most her bangs on one side of her face and Ran out the door.

She ran around for a little while and came to a stop and sat down on a big rock. Her head was down form panting "this place is so b...b...BIG"
she said and suddnely felt a presence. she looked to her side and noticed that Haru was leaning on the wall, staring at her cocking his eyebrow with a cigerette ( I forgot how to spell it)

They stared at each other for about 10 seconds when Haru broke the silence. "Do you know how early it is ?' He said and Lena replied "Do you know how bad it is to smoke ?" She said and ran up to him, tilting her head while standing in front of him ans asked "Who are you ?" She said perkishly."I should be asking you the same thing" He said and grabbed his cigerette and threw to the floor.

"I am Shanika bend-over, I am a Russian man...With NO testicles !" Lena said and Haru couldn't help but laugh.
"okay okay my name is Lena...oh but I really amfrom Russia !" She said like she barely from Russia. Haru smiled at her Lena looked up at him and blushed a little. "Im Hatsuharu Sohma" He said still smiling at her.

She couldn't help but still blush. "Wait...hatsuharu...can I call you Haru ?" Lena said and Haru replied yes.

"Well then Haru from this point on let us be friends !' lena said and smiled and Haru stared at her with a dazed expression.
"Well HAru I must turn back and run to my friend's house so bye bye !"" she said andturned around and ran a litlle and then stopped and turned around and looked at him."And No more smoking !" she said and Ran off.

He smiled thinking what a silly girl she was...and wondered how she became friends with her. BUt he was glad that Rin had a friend and For some reason he could trust Lena.

As Lena kept running she thought about Haru, what was this strange feeling that she had for him, and why is her heart beating so fast.
She came to a stop and looked at the floor sadly. her eyes closed and she slowly covered her face with her hands.
'What is going on' she thought to her self. She hoped to herself that she had no attraction to that guy, because she still dosen't know how she feels for Rin.

'I know I love Rin, but is it more than a frienship love ? DO I want her more than a friend ? or do I just really care for her..' Lena thought to herself. Lena herself knew she was straight her whole life, she never felt an attraction to Any girl, but something made her want to become friends with Rin, and started to have confused feelings as thye became friends, but she never showed it.

Lena looked up and saw Rin standing in front of her with a worried expression on her face. She was panting and looked lik she was about to cry.

Lena looked shocked to see her standing in front of her. "Where were you ? I was looking all over for you, I got worried !" Rin said still panting.
Lena replied "I woke up early so i started to explore, did I come back late ?" 'Im just glad that youre alriht I had a drea that--" Rin said but suddenly blushed. "lets just go home" she said and started walking the other way. Lena walked next to her.

Rin looked at Lena's hand and blushed, she wanted to hold her hand. Rin, embarrased grabbed onto Lena's hand and Lena looked at her. Rin was looking straight ahead but was blushing and Lena smiled at it.

They walked inside Rin's house and let go of each other. Rin walked into the kitchen and asked Lena if she wanted to eat. When she got no response,
she turned around and looked at Lena who was looking at the floor. Lena started to tear adb Rin ran up to her. Lena whats wrong !" Rin asked concerned and Lena shook her head and slided down to the floor sitting down with her feet sticking out from each side. Rin looked at her worriedly.

"its because..b-because Rin, I-i'm so confused, and even if I knew, what would I do ? This feeling isn't right. And I wouldn't be able to protect you" Rin went wide-eyed and ena continued to talk. "Becuase I wouldn't be able to protect you, it would be all my fault, yet, I want you so much "
Lena said and Rin was in shock. Tears started streaming from her face, So Lena did feel the same thing and Rin was happy but she knew what Lena was talking about.

If thye are to love each other like a boy and a girl would, nothing but shame would be brought to them, and Lena wouldn't be able to protect Rin from it. It touched Rin and thats what caused the tears. She both love each other and were both confused the whole time.

Rin bent down and hugged Lena. Lena hugged her back, not crying anymore. they both looked at each other and kissed.

when they broke fomr the kiss the looked at each other and both had blushed "I have Lost mine mind" Lena said and kissed her again

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ooooooooooooh now what ? some Drama. and alot more Yuri. intersesting I think. oh well ill try to update soon