Hey peoples now ok that last poem was like a one time in a life thing. I can never make good poems and all. They just never go as I plan. So about this poem this is like well... a continuation of the other one. So this isa poemthat is about Satoshi. There is a littlehint of Satoshi/Daisuke. So I hope you enjoy andI think this is a good poem too.
This Feeling
What is this feeling
that makes me this way
With this emotion showing
It won't help keep this monster at bay
How can you keep smiling
with your bright crimson eyes
This emotion is calling
The monster that is inside
I tried to crush these feelings
You're the cause of this emotion
To have nothing precious to me, nothing
Your persents makes this commotion
Even if I know this
I want to keep you close
It makes my monster hiss
when we're just both host
This emotion is overwelling...
My monster is coming
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So how is it? I tell you one thing if you don't like then I wouldn't be surprise. I mean I really am not good that this.
So review. Please, and if you want tell what I can improve on.
Tokyogurl1
