Hey peoples now ok that last poem was like a one time in a life thing. I can never make good poems and all. They just never go as I plan. So about this poem this is like well... a continuation of the other one. So this isa poemthat is about Satoshi. There is a littlehint of Satoshi/Daisuke. So I hope you enjoy andI think this is a good poem too.

This Feeling

What is this feeling

that makes me this way

With this emotion showing

It won't help keep this monster at bay

How can you keep smiling

with your bright crimson eyes

This emotion is calling

The monster that is inside

I tried to crush these feelings

You're the cause of this emotion

To have nothing precious to me, nothing

Your persents makes this commotion

Even if I know this

I want to keep you close

It makes my monster hiss

when we're just both host

This emotion is overwelling...

My monster is coming

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So how is it? I tell you one thing if you don't like then I wouldn't be surprise. I mean I really am not good that this.

So review. Please, and if you want tell what I can improve on.

Tokyogurl1