Okay, I want to know what I can fix, here are the questions
Do I spell words wrong often?
Do I confuse you with my writing style?
Do you like where my story is heading?
Are my chapters long enough?
Thanks! Please post after review!
In A Moment
Chapter 8
Mistakes Were Made, Mostly By Him
I was such an idiot, what did I do? God! I can't believe myself! He couldn't believe he acted that way! I mean, what was he thinking letting the perfect girl go? It wasn't that hadn't been enjoying himself, he had been. It was crazy but he could only think of one thing when he was making out with Terra. Raven.(Eww, don't think that!) Not like that of course, but of what she said about Terra. Beast Boy loved Terra, and if they forced her out he would leave too, wouldn't he?
"What!?" Terra barked into her pillow at the knock she heard. "Terra?" It was Beast Boy. Did she want to talk to him? She defiantly wanted to learn what happened, but she was scared. "Come in!" she finally yelled. "It's locked" Beast Boy said quietly. Terra smiled, it was so amazing how he could make her do that without even trying.
Terra slid the old fashion lock to the side and through the hole, and let him in. They stood there for a minute, until Terra made a movement; she hugged him and began to cry. He held her for a moment then pushed her gently away and moved her to the couch. "I'm so sorry," he said sweetly gripping her hands, "I was so rude, and I didn't even explain." She smiled, "Well, now's your chance." Beast Boy took this opportunity to explain what they said during the fight he had with the others, and even though she knew, she still nodded politely.
"So you were afraid of getting to serious, because you don't want to really leave?" Terra asked hurt, yet happy she understood. "Yes," he said, "But, but no now." He moved closer to her and she obviously noticed. "I love you Terra," There were those words again, "I want to do this." He paused "Do you?" She smiled,
"So much."
Hey yall, of course another short chapter, what were you expecting? Anyhow, next chapter is so freakin long, you won't believe it!
NNY273000- What's Microsoft word corrections? And I get what you mean, I will try harder.
Paleo-Ottaku- lol, and thanks!
Strixvaria- I hope you get to read it
