I made my goal of 10/15 reviews! It may not seem like much, 10, but im soooo HaPpY!

imagine i was a star -what do u think I should change about the plot? Suggestions are available (they prevent the imminent disease of writers-block)

To those who did review me, Thank You. I could get creative with my thank you's but…When I get creative look out.

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Our heroine was last seen…Laughing at James's pathetic excuse at saying the word feisty.

Once Lily had finished laughing at James she took pity on him.

"Oh, I wasn't exactly laughing at you, I was laughing at how you said the word feisty.You just looked so, so gay. Not in a bad way, but…" She drifted off at her horrible attempt at trying to calm him. She tried again,

"Well you said feisty like that on purpose right?" James looked like he was about to cry, then again models have a knack for looking overthetop with their emotions, they had to, it was part of their chosen profession.

Sirius came strolling along with his new blonde "babe" James's heartbroken expression vanished immediately, after all, guys must look manly and macho in front of their peers.

"Sirius! Meet my new beautiful and no doubt talented modeling partner Miss…er- I don't think I got your name."

"Lily"

"Right Miss. Lily…sorry, this is awkward but, Last name?"

"Evans."

"Right right, thank you. Say hello to Miss. Lillian Evans." James paused hesitantly wondering how she would react before adding, "My flower." Grinning when she didn't smack him across his head.

Sirius grinned deviously, "Merlin!A redhead, James now I knew you liked them feisty." Lily would have laughed out loud at Sirius's take on the word feisty, except James's words finally sunk in…

new modeling partner

His new modeling partner, her!

"Now wait a minute! Who said anything about me modeling with you?" Lily cried out, interrupting Sirius, not that she really cared.

"Me, just now, didn't you hear me?" James asked oh so innocently, but Lily wasn't fooled by that handsome smile, it was actually a devious smirk. James was just hiding it

Lily looked on the brink of exploding. Her hand would most certainly find its way to his head now. "I never said I was going to!"

James paled, he wondered what she would do if he said- "I just assumed you wanted to."

Mission: Find James'sgiant melon of a head

Mission given to: Right hand (its stronger then her left)

SMACK!

Mission: Completed

It was Lily's turn to smirk "You know what they say when you assume, you make an ass out of you and me."

Sirius piped up "I don't get it." James whispered something to Sirius and it dawned on him, "OHHHHHH. So you're one of those sexy Americans!"

James looked confused all he had done was explain the joke, how did Sirius confuse arse with American?

Lily voiced both hers and James's oh-so-intellectual thought "What?"

Sirius rolled his eyes and explained very slowly to Lily, as if she was mentally challenged, "You know, Americans say ass and cookie, and we awesome British say arse and biscuit." Seeing Sirius say the word "arse" in slow motion would have been enough to get anyone laughing, but not Lily, not when her intelligence was on the line.

You could see Lily's eyebrow twitching, you see she didn't like being confused as retarded. You could even say she was the antithesis of mentally challenged, therefore the opposite of Sirius. "One, I am not a retard so don't talk so slow (unless you're incapable of talking any faster), two, I'm not American, and three, I said ass because "arse out of you and me" doesn't sound as good." Lily exclaimed, grinning as if she had made a point in her "sounds good" argument. She was a bit red in the face from arguing and James seemed to be entranced by her complexion 'How beautiful, her hair matches her face' James had already fallen for her, and Lily couldn't do anything about it.

By this time all the shouting (mainly by Lily) had been overheard and professor McGonagall felt it was her duty tomake her way over to them. "What is all this shouting about? Lily I expected more from a prefect such as yourself."

Lily suddenly found her shoes exceptionally interesting. James started to feel a little guilty so he went on an unbearably long lecture about the events leading to the argument to ease his concience.

Ranting…

Ranting…

Still ranting…

"…and that is how my beautiful flower was captured in this spirited debate on arse's with the arse-face himself" James finally finished his unbearably long lecture. McGonagall hadn't expected such a thorough and vivid description on the word arse.

"Mr. Potter, well, I hope you are happy because no points will be taken off for the shouting, however…" Lily cringed; she had never liked the word however. "…5 points will be taken off for every time you said the word "arse." that comes to 40 points." She paused."Miss. Evans, you should consider Mr. Potter's job offering. You will find it has substantial pay, and you of all people should be able to handle the responsibility it comes with." Professor looked at Lily with her lips twitching slightly upward. (After all it would be awkward if the lips were twitching downward)

A certain "Miss. Evans" was having trouble deciding what to do.

Emergency Situations like these deserved a list of pros and cons.

Pros.

The money would come in handy when looking for an apartment after graduating,

Saying yes would makeProfessor McGonagall happy (or happier at least).

She'd be the envy of many Hogwarts girls (as shallow as that sounded)

She could prove that she wasn't such a prude

Cons

She didn't really like a certain "Mr. Potter."

She would fall behind in her studies and prefect duties.

She-uh-that is she, she was a prude

That was it, she didn't want to be a prude, she would accept! Take that world! Lily Evans: Non-prude takes center stage in modeling! She would be lying to herself if she thought that had a good ring to it.

"Alright. I'll do it. How much does it pay?"

Grinning from ear to ear James replied "100 galleons-" Lily's eyes bugged out. James finished, "Every shoot." That was it, she would become James's new model, after all, it couldn't be that bad.

The Next Day

Lily was talking and enjoying her time with her best friend, Marian Collins. She would be leaving the next day so together they packed together, which usually happens when two people are together with a suitcase and a bunch of clothes.

Marian sighed, "Oh, I wish I hadn't gone to the Hospital Wing, but I just had to get hit by that bludger!" Marian was chaser for Gryffindor, alongside James and John.

"Do you think I would have been chosen if I had gone?"

Lily smiled reasuringly, "Of course! I can't think of anyone prettier or cooler or smarter or nicer, or less loser-like."

Marina was indeed very pretty, long straight brown hair with chocolate brown eyes, she was athletic and sharp. She was the girl next door with a twist. (Meaning she wasn't at all loser-like)

"Well, I wouldn't have wanted to become a model anyway" She said with a wicked smile, "You know you have to wear makeup twenty-four seven!" She knew how much Lily hated makeup.

Lily's eyebrows raised in horror, "What about when you sleep?" She said scandalized.

"That's the worst part! They make you leave your eyeliner and mascara on at night because they think paparazzi might come in the middle of the night!"

"Why would paparazzi be in my house in the middle of the night?"

"I don't know what muggle paparazzi are like, but the wizard one's are much worse, they have magic!" She looked very solemn and serious while saying this

Lily wasn't so sure this modeling thing would work out if she had to wear mascara at night, and the strange men entering her house in the middle of the night to take pictures was bad too.

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Um, I'm not as satisfied with this chapter as I was with the last one, I promise, it'll get better.

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