My beta reader said that now shes all not-blind the story will get boring,
gonna prove him wrong

"Eryk, ERYK!" Midori tripped over a human skull, the thing was small enough to be a baby orc's! Gods, he had no mercy, even with infants, "What?" the Doppelganger, or to her Eryk asked, with the same, Hatii-cold tone. "The dark Lord's attacking Geffen!" I screamed, probably looking like a total idiot.

"Hn, so it's begun" Eryk sat down in what was known to her as 'The Hunter Sit.
"What's begun?" I asked, letting my legs dangle over the edge of the pathway leading from the 3rd level entrance. Sighing he began to explain "As you probably know, there are a supposed 3 levels of Geffen dungon-" "Well, yah,
everybody knows that" I cut him off "Don't interupt, there are actually four levels to my dungeon". Before she could intupt again, he shut me up with a finger to the lips.

No, it wasnt one of those romantic moments that you read about in books with all the warmth and fuzzyness. Ensuring his finger with a slight glare he removed it and continued his explanation. "Exactly 1,593 years ago a priest by the name of Hellion attempted to take over Geffenia, yes, back then I was alive. Not that I'm not alive now, but you'll find out about that later on."

He started munching on the apple that I was gonna have for lunch, "I commanded a army of battle Mages and Wizards in those days, Hellion killed them all." By now she was huggled in a group of Nightmares, Deviruchis, and Marionettes. "There were 4 divisions, each consisting almost the same amount of jobs, however they differed greatly in strength."

By now Eryk had finished 'his' lunch and went on with the story. "Now, alot of people may say that Geffenia is the ancient ruins of Geffen, I'm not thrilled to say that it's true. 10 Knights, a Crusader, 30 Priests, 20 Wizards, 10 Sages, and 45 Bards and Dancers made up the first division."

A thief screamed in agony as his arm was thrown across the dungeon by a Deviruchi. "They were all killed, and then resurected as dark and sinister creatures known as, Abysmal Knight, Bloody Murderer, Violy, Incubus, Succubus,
and Fake Angel. The 15 Bards and Dancers, 10 Wizards, and I, made it out alive.

"We all vowed to never go in there again" He finished, yawning. "Wait, what happens next?" I asked, hoping to hear more about his past. "It's late,
can't I tell you tomorow? You need rest more the any of us" He had to keep reminding me didn't he? The cursed ruby linked together with the chain would slowly make me into whatever he was, soon enough, I'd never be able to leave Geffen Dungeon.

"Can you tell me about the other 2 divisions then? If you don't I'll go find that spiteful Marionette and allow her to burn me. "Fine, Fine, no need to resort to idle threats...the second division consisted of 10 Sages,
40 Bards and Dancers, 20 Wizards, A crusader, 10 knights, and 40 priests, they too turned into monsters, nobody survived. I didn't go with them because I was filing paper work on the 1st divisions deaths.

He twitched in annoyance as Midori snorted at the picture of him doing paper work. "Anyway, they 3rd division was much like the first, only it had 10 more Sages, and 10 more Bards and Dancers, you can probably guess what happend. Fourth division same as the 1st only with 30 more priests, they all died, nobody went in there again, The End. Can we sleep now?"

Either he was thinking wrong thoughts or he hadnt slept in days, I shrugged and curled up with the Nightmare heard, hoping sleep would kill the ever-growing pain in her abdomen.

Atleast this might be better then boringness?