Snow in the Air
A week and a half later…
It was almost midnight. By that point, most of Arendelle castle is most likely asleep, save for a few guards. Princess Anna was not one of those sleeping. In fact, she was very much awake and fully dressed in her winter dress, mittens, and black boots.
Tonight was the night. After almost two weeks, Anna had finally decided to make her move. A day after the discovery of the secret passage in her room, she explored more of it. The supposed map was correct about the wall going all the way to the end, with the edge of the mountain range not too far away from it. It would seem that her prayers had been answered after all.
She would've done this much sooner, but with the events of her going missing in the woods still fresh on everyone minds, she didn't want to freak anyone out. So she waited for the heat to die down. Anna had taken that time to plan her trip. Night time she thought would be the best time to do this. If she had done this during the day and was gone for a long period of time, her parents would most likely notice.
All of this was risky, but Anna wasn't going to wait any longer. One way or another she was going to visit Elsa.
Once again, Anna looked over at the clock. By now, her parents should be in bed, or getting ready if they stayed up late working. She placed some extra pillows, along with a poorly crafted wig with her hair color on her bed before covering them up, leaving the wig poking out. It would look as she was still in bed to someone looking in. Once that was handled, Anna put on a dark colored cloak. Even though her usual cape was fixed up, its magenta color was too bright and Anna had to stay incognito. Anna had also carried her father's pocket watch so she could keep track of time
Grabbing the knife Elsa had gave her, Anna made her way to the wall and opened the passage door. In her other hand was a small lantern that was lit. The light help brings out the darkness of the passage. Before Anna entered, she stopped herself. There was a moment where she hesitated.
"No. I'm going to do this. I was born ready!"
Pushing all doubt aside, Anna crawled into the passage. She closed the door before continuing. The first half of the tunnel was somewhat difficult for her. It had involved a LOT of crawling around and then climbing down as well at one point. Thankfully, the second half had enough room for her to simply walk. Most of it was in the wall portion of the passage and was noticeably longer to get through. This passage looks as if no one had used it in many, many years judging by the cobwebs and cracks on the walls. It was also dark with the only other source of light beside the candle and the small rays coming from the cracks above.
A long period of walking later, Anna had made it to the end. She had been here before but struggle to remember the secret door that leads her to the outside world. Several moments of thinking later, she found it. This door Anna felt a bit heavier than on the one in her room. Yep, no one hasn't used this passage for a LONG time. After spending minutes prying the door it finally opened.
Slowly, Anna stepped into the open. Around the young teen were woodlands, still covered with snow. The month of March was not too far away but there was still some snow left. After closing the door, Anna looked around the area until she looked at something in the distance. Not too far away were the mountains. Taking another glance, she could see the castle and the fjord in the distance before she returns her glance at the range.
"Look at the mountains, so close, and I'm almost to it! Look at it all, so risky, do I even dare? Look at me, there at last! I just have to do it. Should I... No! Here I go."
Pulling up her hood to cover her head, Anna took a deep breath and stood in her spot. She looked over to the castle in the distance one more time while taking several slow backward steps. Each footstep speed had greatly increased. Finally, as she finally picked up speed, Anna turned and started to run.
And so on, that what she had done for what felt like minutes. Anna continues to run through the forest. The sound of her feet making contact with the snow-covered ground played along with the rhythm of her running. Not once did she ever stop running. As she had gotten closer to her destination, the ground started to elevate. Then they became steep hills. With the incline getting steeper, Anna had to reduce her running a bit.
After a while of walking up the steep hill, the incline had finally ceased. Taking this moment to catch her breath, Anna took a quick look around her surroundings. Near her were mountain tops. Turning the opposite way, she could see Arendelle. It was then she realized she had made it to the edge of the mountain range.
"I can't believe it...I did it! I can't believe I did this!" Anna had almost screamed excitedly before calming herself down. "I can't believe I did this...Stay focused Anna!"
With that, Anna entered the mountain range. Surely it wouldn't be too hard to find The North Mountain. Unfortunately, Anna was not an experienced mountain person. Of course, she knew to look north, but the entire range was all north. Also, all the mountains look pretty much alike, which didn't help matters.
Anna had brought a map with her in order to help. However, there wasn't any sign of the mountain on the location the map told her to go. She was in the fourth spot looking another small series of mountains. Like the previous times, none of which looked familiar. Sighing in defeat, she turned away and started wandering around a bit while putting the map in her dress and picked up her lantern. How hard was it to find a mountain with a giant palace made of ice?!
"I knew it, the universe hates me..." Anna mumbled. "Some people lose their pen or their shoe. No, not me, I manage to lose an entire MOUNTAIN!"
Anna whacked her hand on a branch from a nearby tree out of frustration. The branch hit her back in the eye. Its impact was strong enough to cause her to stumble back several feet as she covered her eye and grunt in pain.
"Damn, that hurt…"
As Anna took that moment to let the pain pass through, something in the corner of her eye brought her attention. Looking in the other direction, she saw a mountain, but that wasn't like the other mountains. This one was huge, towering over the others she had seen. And instead of having a triangular top, its top was curved. It took Anna a moment to realize that the mountain she was looking at was...
"The North Mountain. I found it! Ha Ha! Thank you universe!" Anna cheered while lifting her arms in the air, both hands balled into fists, before she calmed down. "Alright, how much time do I have?" Anna took out the pocket watch and looked at the time. It had been a little over forty-five minutes since she had started this journey. "I still have plenty of time." She put the watch away.
"Next stop: Elsa."
Surrounding her was the dark hallway. She had found herself once again in this place. It had been in the same state as it was the previous times beforehand. Like last time, she attempted to find her way out.
"Hello?" she called out again.
"Hello again, Elsa."
Turning around, Elsa saw the site of the hooded man who was referred to as Master. All she could do was scowled at him. She clearly doesn't want to deal with his trickery right now.
"You again?" Elsa snarled.
"The very same, darlin'," Master mocked, giving an equally fitting smile.
"I don't want to deal with you right now."
"Why so sour? Aren't you happy to see me?"
"I am NEVER happy to see you! Now go away!"
"What? Don't you want some company that isn't made of snow & ice for a change? Though I suppose that Anna girl would fit the bill. Speaking of which, how is she?"
Elsa didn't dare to say anything. She looked away while trying to hide her somber look. Those efforts didn't help much since Master seemed to take notice.
"She ditched you, didn't she? Why am I not surprised?" He said that rather sarcastically.
"She had to go back to her family," Elsa defended. "She said that she would see me again."
"And how long it been since you seen her? It's almost been 2 weeks. Frankly, I'm quite surprised that she didn't get an angry mob marching over to your little home by now." He then paused. "Then again, she probably doesn't want to remember you at all. Can't say I blame her."
"Would you just shut up?"
"Touchy, aren't we? Did you honestly think you could be friends with her? Why didn't she go back to her family sooner? She only stayed just so she can find a way to control you. Once she couldn't, she just left."
Elsa didn't say anything, but Master just continued on.
"Look at to yourself, Elsa. You're nothing without me. Nothing but a freak monster. People don't make friends with monsters. I was the closest thing you ever had as a friend. Probably family."
"You were never my family!" Elsa shouted out. "I much rather be alone than spent another moment with your 'family'!"
"Then why am I still here then?" The words from his mouth made Elsa silent. "If you hate me so much, how come I show up in your dreams occasionally?"
"Why does that matter? You're not the real thing!"
"But I'm the perfect figment of him. In a way, we're still the same person. I think I know why I'm still around. You don't want me to go."
"Shut up…"
"I know you hate being alone. You long for companionship with other people. But you and I both know why that'll never happen. So you stick with me. Even back then, I was the only person willing to even come near you."
"I said shut up," Elsa said again this time more angrily, clenching her teeth a bit and her fists.
"Maybe I haven't quite treated you...well. But at least I was willing to be to offer you companionship. Monsters are destined to be alone. And you, Elsa, will forever be alone."
"SHUT UP!"
That was the last thing Elsa said as she shot shards of ice all around.
"Elsa! Elsa, wake up!"
Elsa bolted up on her bed. She breathed heavily and a cold sweat covered her.
"Are you okay Elsa?"
She turned her head to see a concerned Olaf on her side. Not too far is the alarmed Marshmallow, and some frightened Snowgies. Elsa then took notice of some ice spikes that was around her room.
"I'm fine. Just a bad dream," Elsa replied.
"Are you sure? It sounded pretty bad…" Olaf mentioned.
"It's nothing. I'm fine, really," Elsa assured. "Let me get rid of those spikes."
Elsa spent the next few minutes clearing out her ice spikes. She knew what to do because this wasn't the first time she had nightmares extreme enough to cause ice spikes to grow. Normally they usually stick around her bed, but this time it had managed to spread out a bit in her room. Thankfully, Olaf, Marshmallow, and The Snowgies weren't hurt (Not that they could feel pain anyway).
Ever since her trip to Arendelle, Elsa hasn't had a moment of peace. On one hand, the nightmares were more common than before. On the other hand, she sometimes looked back to those images she saw in Arendelle. Did they mean something? Elsa had no clue and thought it was rather pointless to keep thinking about them.
"There! That's all of them." Elsa got rid of the final spike. "Now we can all go back to sle-" Elsa stopped as she noticed Olaf's expression looking...off. "Are you okay Olaf?"
"I...I feel something. Or rather someone," Olaf responded.
"What?" Elsa asked.
"I feel them too," Marshmallow responded.
"And they're...right outside of here," Olaf added.
At that moment, a loud thud was heard. Elsa was instantly afraid. This had never happened before with her creations. For the longest time, the only person they could only feel was her. How could her creations feel another person? That wasn't important for the moment. If there was an intruder in their home then Elsa has to be ready to defend herself. That won't be a problem.
"Everyone wait here. I'll go check it out. If you don't hear from me in fifteen minutes, look for me," Elsa said.
Elsa left the bedroom, leaving behind several fear stricken snow creatures. The only one that wasn't scared was Marshmallow, which Olaf took notice
"Why are you so calm? Usually, if you sense trouble, you get all scary and grow spikes."
"This isn't the first time I got this feeling. And I can guess who it is."
Elsa slowly made her way down the stairs leading away from her bedroom until she reached the bottom. Glancing out into the foyer, a figure in dark cloak was roaming in the foyer. Elsa was close to confronting the figure. Until they started talking.
"Elsa? Are you up?" The figure pulled down her hood, revealing her face. "It's me...Anna."
For a moment, Elsa thought she was dreaming again. There was no way Anna would come back here especially after going back home. At least that's what she thought. But this wasn't a dream, Anna was really here.
"Anna?" Elsa slowly walked onto the foyer platform.
At the mention of her name, Anna looked up to see Elsa.
"Elsa...Hi," Anna greeted and watched Elsa walk down the foyer stairs.
"What are you doing back here? Does your family know you're here?"
"They don't. I miiiigghht've snuck out the castle."
"Why?"
"I did it so I could see you."
To see her? No one had ever come back for her...ever. Not even her guardian had even to bothered looking for her when she escaped.
"You came all the way out here, alone, just to see me?"
"I did say that I would come back, didn't I? What kind of friend would I be if I didn't keep my promise?"
Those words made Elsa's heart stop, but in a good way.
"Did you say...friend?" she asked.
"Yeah," Anna answered.
"You see me as a friend?"
"Of course. Why would you ask that?"
"Before you left, I was about to ask you if we were friends…I never had a friend before. A friend that isn't made out of snow at least. No one ever wanted to be my friend."
"Well, then I'm glad to say this..." Anna grabbed both of Elsa's hands, holding them halfway between them. "I would love to be your friend."
"You really mean it?"
"I do. I would've come back way sooner, but everyone back home was still riled up from my disappearance. I hated waiting this long to come ba-"
Many types of emotions went through Elsa's head. It was a mixture of sad and happy. She didn't know whether to laugh or cry. Before either she or Anna knew, Elsa had suddenly wrapped her arms around the latter. It took a moment for Anna to comprehend the situation. Elsa, someone who didn't like to be touched, was actually touching her. For a moment, Anna didn't know whether or not to hug her back. Instinct told her to do so and so she did. Not once did Elsa objected.
"No one's ever come back for me before," Elsa muttered, not even caring about the small tears forming in her eyes. "I didn't think you would."
"Well...I'm here now." Anna had spent the next several moments still hugging Elsa before they finally pulled away. "Soooo...what do you want to do?"
"I...I'm not sure," Elsa confessed.
This had led the girls standing in awkward silence. Elsa honestly didn't know what to do. Anna, on the other hand, had several ideas going through her head. Until one came to her.
"Do you want to build a snowman?"
Elsa could only give a small smile. "Yes."
"Well then...do the magic."
Elsa didn't waste any time. With a twirl of her hands, she made several large snow mounds all throughout the foyer. Both girls quickly went to work. Elsa rolled up and large snowball, with Anna stacking a smaller one on top. Anna drooped over a bit, lifting up her foot as she added her ball to the stack, most likely from almost slipping on the ice. The way she was positioned made Elsa giggled a bit as she covered her mouth
One more huge snowball was add on the top. They both worked together to shape it to resemble a head. Elsa used her magic to make objects to resemble sticks and eyes and placed them on the snowman. Once they had finished, they sat in front of the snowman and admire their work.
"I think we did a great job," Anna looked over the snowman.
"Yeah...we did," Elsa responded before small paused had occurred. "It looks kinda like Olaf."
Anna gave a small smile. Memories of her days building snowman went through her head. Most were mostly herself, but some were with her parents.
"Where did you get the name 'Olaf' from?"
"I...I really don't know," Elsa answered. "When I first made him, I really didn't give him a name. The first time I saw him alive he just referred himself that and it just stuck on. Why do you want to know?"
"I used that name for the snowmen I built when I was a kid."
"Maybe Olaf is just a popular name?"
"What about me?" A new voice spoke before Anna could even respond.
Both girls looked to the directions of the voice. Olaf was walking across the foyer platform. He looked as if he was about to speak until he noticed Elsa wasn't alone.
"Anna?"
"Hi, Olaf."
"You came back!" Olaf faced the stairs. "Hey guys, Anna's here!"
A cluster of squeaks and large thumps quickly moving echoed through the palace. Soon Marshmallow and The Snowgies had entered on the foyer platform. Almost immediately after seeing Anna, all of the Snowgies went over to her and dogpile her to the point she fell down on her back.
"Easy guys! I'm happy to see you too!" Anna said happily, though she was a bit overwhelmed.
The Snowgies continued to crawl over Anna until Marshmallow gave a small roar at them. It wasn't very loud, but it was loud enough to get the Snowgies to stop crowding her. No longer in a dog pile, Anna stood up.
"Thanks, big guy." The giant snow creature gave a smile to the young girl. Marshmallow then lifted his big icy finger against her cheek. Just the tip of it was as big as her own head. "It's good to see you again." Anna nuzzled her head against his finger. "It's good to see all of you."
"What are you doing here?" Olaf asked.
"Visiting you guys." Anna went over to the snowman and gave him a hug, in which Olaf was happy to oblige.
"We thought we never see you again. What were you both doing?"
"We build a snowman," Elsa answered as she showed Olaf the newly built snowman. "It was Anna's idea."
"Wow!" Olaf whispered. "He looks like me!"
"Hey, since all of you guys are here now, what do you want to do?" Anna asked.
No one said anything. Elsa had a thoughtful look before her face suddenly brightened.
"Have you been in a snowball fight?" Elsa asked.
Anna gave a small laugh. "You're looking at Arendelle's top snowball fighter."
"That's a thing?" Olaf asked.
"I'm a princess, so I make it a thing."
"Then I guess you won't have a problem with this."
Elsa quickly formed a snowball in her hand and quickly threw at Anna's head. The ice wielder gave a small laugh as Anna wiped the snow off her face, along with spitting some that got in her mouth.
"Oh, it's on!" Anna declared.
More snow mounds were added throughout the foyer. Soon, the snowball fight was commerce. Two teams had been formed: Elsa & Marshmallow against Anna & Olaf, with some snowiges on their sides as well. For a while, it was just both sides throwing snowballs at each other. Excitement & laughter was filled through the air as a rain of snowballs filled the foyer.
The snowball fight died down after a while. A winner was never decided, but that didn't matter. After resting a bit, Olaf gave another idea.
"Ice skating?" Anna said.
"Yeah!"
"I think that's a good idea," Elsa said.
"Where though?" Anna asked.
"We can do it here. There's enough room."
"I don't have skates."
"Don't worry." Elsa flicked her hand and a gust of snow came out and swirled around Anna's boots. Under those boots formed skates.
Anna gave a small gasp as she watched the skates form. "Oh, Elsa."
"You like them?"
"They're beautiful...But I'm not really much of a ska-"
"Come on! Do it!"
Elsa suddenly pulled Anna's hands and they both started skating around the foyer. At first, Anna struggled a bit and almost fell down. Thankfully, with the help of Olaf, Elsa manage to pull her up each time.
"It's alright. I got you," Elsa would say almost every time.
"Sorry. I never was a good skater," Anna said.
"I can teach you what I know."
"Really?" Elsa nodded with a smile. "Okay. Show me what you know."
"Alright. First, you need bend your knees..."
From there, Elsa gave tips on ice skating to Anna. Olaf still skated on his own, with several Snowgies. Elsa had continued to hold on to Anna as she taught her basics. However, Anna keeps on falling.
"What did I tell ya? I'm bad at skating," Anna proclaimed.
"You'll get the hang of it," Elsa encouraged. "I know you will. You just have to keep trying and not give up. "
The way Elsa had spoken to Anna sounded soft and encouraging. Much like how one would speak to a younger child when they're having trouble learning something new. It had reminded Anna of the time when her father was teaching her to ride a bicycle when she was a child. She had issues keeping her balance and kept on falling off. It had come to the point where she wanted to give up. But her father was patient with her. He kept encouraging her because he believed in her. In the end, that encouragement paid off and the next thing she new, she was riding around in every part the castle.
So Anna decided to heed Elsa's words. She had actually improved from that point. Well, not professional skater good, but good enough to skate without Elsa's help. After a while, they stopped ice skating and they sat on the foyer stairs. The past few hours had worn out Anna.
"I don't know about you, but I'm dead tired," Anna said.
"But you're still alive…?" Elsa clearly didn't understand the meaning.
"It's another expression. It means I'm very tired."
"Oh. Is that bad?"
"No. I just had...A lot of fun tonight. I haven't this much fun since I was a kid."
"You still are a kid."
Anna chuckled. "You're probably right about that."
"I really did have a good time," Elsa said, a small smile forming on her face. "I haven't had this much fun in...years."
"I'm glad you did have a lot of fun."
No one said anything after that.
"Do you have to leave again?" A hint of glum was heard in Elsa's voice.
"Yes," Anna answered. "I enjoy spending time with you, but I have my family back home. They don't know about you."
"They don't?"
"Because I'm not sure if they would believe me if I told them about you." That answer was partially true on why she never told anyone. The real reason was because Anna was afraid her parents would kill Elsa for witchcraft, but she's sure as hell wasn't going to tell her that. She didn't want to make Elsa more scared of people then she already is. "Not many people believe in magic."
"I see…"
"Anyways, I do have to go back home. But I'll still visit."
"Visit?"
"I'll come over here to see you, now that I know how to get here. It'll probably be at night, and only several times a week. I hope that won't be a problem."
"It's not. I'm just happy to have you as a friend. When will you come back?"
"How do two nights sound?" Anna answered after a moment
"I would like that." Anna smiled at Elsa. That is until a yawn overtook her. "I think you should get home now."
"I probably should. How long was I gone anyway?" Anna pulled out the pocket watch. Her eyes widen a bit as she looked at it. "Wow. I have been away from home for quite a while. I better get going."
"Wait!" Elsa shouted as Anna started walking away. "Would you like Marshmallow to carry you back?"
"Is that alright with him?"
"He would like to. He'll take you as far as you want." Elsa looked over to Marshmallow. "Right?"
Marshmallow slowly nodded his head.
"Alright. How do I-woah!" Marshmallow picked Anna up with his hand. She was secured in a way to ensure her comfort and security. "Okay. I guess we're doing this."
"This is goodbye then?" Elsa asked. "Two nights, right?"
"Yes. I promise."
"Alright. Marshmallow lets go."
The big snow creation nodded his head and walked towards the large doors. He opened them and walked down the icy stairs.
"He maybe a little rough once he runs!" Elsa shouted from the door once they walked down the stairs.
"I'm sure I can handle it." Anna had shouted back. "How bad can he can he beeEEE!" The last part she said as Marshmallow started running.
Much like what Elsa said, Marshmallow was a bit rough. This was definitely different from riding on a horse, or reindeer. It was still comfortable enough, so there's at least that. Marshmallow kept running through the mountain range for a good while until he reached the edge of it. Just down below was Arendelle.
"I can go on from here."
"You...sure?" Marshmallow asked.
"I'll be fine," Anna assured as she patted him. "See ya in two nights, big guy."
Marshmallow and Anna smiled at each other before they both parted ways. As Anna walked through the trees, she can't help but think back to the events at the palace. It was something she had enjoyed. One thing still stuck to her mind. The look of joy on Elsa's face had always kept popping in Anna's head. It was the same kind one would see on a child when they would have high amounts of fun. The ice wielder did say she hasn't had that much fun in years. When was the last time did she had fun? Did she even experience that kind of fun before?
But there was one thing Anna did know. It won't be the last time Elsa will experience such a thing. She was her friend, and friends stick together. No one else will know of this friendship. Not her parents. Not Kai & Gerda. Kristoff...She'll have to think on that.
A secret friendship...That definitely sounds something straight out of a novel her mother would read. Only except this type of relationship isn't romance or technically forbidden. Maybe secret friendship just doesn't sit well for authors...? (Though forbidden friendship did have a nice ring to it). Of course, keeping secrets also meant possibly lying. Anna would definitely hate to further lie to those close to her, especially her parents & Kristoff. But if it had to keep Elsa safe for the time being, so be it. Maybe the time will come where it will no longer come to that. Until then, she may have to lie to protect.
Despite all that, she thinks about her next visit to Elsa. It made her feel happy. That thought stayed with her as she came back to the wall surrounding the town. It still didn't leave her as she went through the passage back to her room, prepping herself for bed, and then falling asleep.
Elsa watched until they were out of site. A part of her was worried, but she trusts Marshmallow that he would take care of Anna. He, along with Olaf, seemed to have some sort of connection with her, which Elsa still found odd.
Pushing that thought aside, Elsa retreated back into the palace. The snow mounds she had made earlier were still there. On one of them was Olaf sleeping soundly, along with The Snowgies. Elsa decided to leave them be and retreated back to her room alone.
Back in her room, Elsa closed the icy doors behind her. Instead of going to her bed, Elsa walked to her window and looked outside. It was very quiet all around her. Not the quietness of night time quiet. It was the loneliness type of quiet. The one Elsa had been familiar with for 10 years, and the same that had stuck around after Anna first left. She was saddened that Anna had, once again, left.
"Back to life up here in my icy home. Cooped up here all alone and I'm gazing out." Elsa pushed opened her window and looked out for several moments. "True I'm up here and far from those near. I'm safe and secured. And for sure, that's more than enough, no doubt."
A cold breeze came through, swaying strands of Elsa's hair as her eyes closed. Out in the sky, some clouds had moved, revealing the moon behind it. The moon's light shined into Elsa's room. Something in it had reflected back, which caught Elsa's eye. The light reflected off the ice figurine of Anna. Just looking at it, Elsa smiled as she remembered Anna's promise. She did come back and she still intends to continue coming back here. Because they were friends.
"But I have the snow in the air and a storm within, 'cause there's something beginning." In the heap of her excitement, Elsa made a small balcony near the window and danced around on it. Making several small snowflakes as she did. "I got something to look forward, and a new friend who cares!"
She stopped her dancing gazed upon the mountains. Around her were the snowflakes she had just made. "Those lovely snowflakes blowing through. I'm ready to follow them who knows where. And I'll get there, I swear, with the snow in the air."
Elsa stuck her arms out and more snowflakes came out. She watches them as they disappear into the mountains. Deep in her, she felt the sense of...Smugness. That feeling was directed towards someone Elsa had known long ago.
"Chew on that, Fritjof." Was the last thought Elsa had before she retreated back into her room and fell falling asleep on her bed. For the first time in days, she slept peacefully.
Not far from the North Mountain, the snowflakes that were created by Elsa had still flown in the breeze in the air. They had continued to float around through the wilderness, even picking up several leaves in the gust.
After a while, they had flown near a valley that wasn't covered by the winter's touch. The snowflakes & leaves had floated on top of a hill. Until a small hand, that came from a small, rounded figure with a moss cape had suddenly grabbed them. The figure unclaps his palm of his stone hand to examine his findings. Three leaves surrounding a snowflake.
The figure could only give a thoughtful 'Hmm…' before rolling away back into the valley.
I know this chapter probably isn't exciting. I'm not sure if I like how it turned out. But I hope you guys still like it.
At last, Anna & Elsa see each other again. And they're gonna have a forbi- I mean, secret friendship. Also, Tangled themes! Tangled themes everywhere!
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1. I'm considering revising some these chapters to add dates on them (mostly months and the year it takes place. The day will only be use for other specific stuff). Would that be okay, or should I just not add them at all?
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