BE READY THAT THIS STORY WILL/MAY BE TAKEN DOWN. There will be a repost as soon as unlocks my account.
TO SUMMIT YOUR OWN OC, PLEASE EMAIL IT TO ME, AS OF 8/23/04, I WILL NOT ACCEPT ANYMORE OCs FROM REVIEWS.
Thank you to all who submitted an OC. For all of you who submitted an OC before 8/23/04,
(If you forgot if you did or not, it is the following people)
A really big sonic fan but I like shadow betta
#1PUNK(lol) – Jen can't be a friend of May, sorry. Well... maybe later, it would be possible...
Bns560
Brendan's Tuba
Shadow Tigress a.k.a KitMarichi
Of Fate And Destiny
56iam
Vokteren/Pikachu (Sorry for making you have to log out before you can send in your OC ::sweatdrops::)
Please add the following information to your OCs (remember to type your OC's name in as well!), sorry for the inconvenience
Academic: (Grades, A, B, C, etc... or percentages will do)
Classes: (What you take at school as in your OC, art, P.E., pokemon care, coordinating plus, tactics plus (Plus is for people who really want to learn that subject) etc... choose at least 3, Do not choose Math, Science, English, History/ Geography/Social Science, Pokemon Tactics, Co-coordinating)
If you can, please specify whom your OC wants to be friends with (especially if you own Nami or Diane Kim. Whoever owns Diane Kim, is that her first and last name or is it her first name?) Please do not say it is May though, it is not very likely that I will let your OC do this unless their personality really matches May.
WARNING: CONTAINS THE 'S' WORD (No, it's not the swear word, its what happens between September and June, where you learn!) But the faster you review, the faster I update! XD ajwoykhevipnwg
Note: [...] is Brendan talking and -...- is May (This is not for the story)
-Hey, everyone, I'm back!-
[YAY! ::does happy dance:: you're back! ::hugs May::]
Aww... that's so cute =D
-Did you torture Icy-chan?-
[Err...]
O.O Umm... let's answer the reviews! Yes, that's it... reviews... ::pulls on collar::
Marichi: Thanks for inspiring me to get my block away! Hmm...your description reminds me of Sailor Moon for some reason XD. If I ever go to a school where they make you wear uniforms, I want ties and those cute knee-high baggy socks, and I love them too! XD They're so cute! I want one! My friend gave me the score for 1000 no Kotoba. I haven't many heard .hack songs but I heard the theme once, it's really nice =D and thanks for the OCs. (I think you made a typo on the review you gave me on 8/21/04 does it say that you read this for the 9 th time? Anyways, I actually don't know what's going to happen, stupid writer's block . Thanks for the ideas though!)
Flamingkoorime: I don't watch the anime much (I lost interest when the 'fad' was over which was around the Jhoto and Orange Islands seasons) so I don't really know what really happens then or if Misty goes with Tracey. I personally don't 'dislike' Pokeshipping (Ash/Misty) I just prefer May with him, Pokeshipping is cute as long as May HAPPILY ends up with someone else like Drew or BRENDAN.
Vokteren: ::lol:: I see why you didn't get it! But do you think that May is the type of girl in the first prologue if I said that she was a 'good' girl? Thanks for the OC, you can add Marita if you like.
LH: . Ya, thanks for telling me (Let's just hope really hard that they won't kill my story and lock my account again...)
-So did you?-
X.x Umm... the note at the top is very important (that's why its there first, duh!) especially if you entered an OC before 8/23/04 ::nods:: READ IT!
-As I was asking, did...-
. Do the disclaimer, Brendan!
[OKAY! Disclaimer: Icy-chan does not own Pokemon]
-So di...-
::Brendan and I at the same time:: On to the story!
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May went to her locker and spun her combo. As she turned her last number, the lock clicked open. She neatly put her books on the shelf and searched for her wallet, pokemon and a book. No one waited for her at her locker to go down to the cafeteria together, she looked beside her and saw Crystal waiting for Misty.
"Hey, did you hear about that new student?" Crystal asked.
"Ya, he's sooo cute!" Misty answered, "Too bad I already have Ash, I would have asked him to be my boyfriend,"
Crystal giggled. "You're such a cheater!" She said as two girls walked away.
Not wanting to hear them, May took the other stairway down to the cafeteria.
With Brendan
"Great display in class you had there," Gold complimented.
"Thanks," Brendan smiled and shoved his books carelessly into his locker
"Why don't you come have lunch with us?" Ash asked.
"Ya, we'll introduce to some other of our friends," Gold added.
Brendan shrugged. "Sure, why not?" as he slammed his locker shut.
"Let's get lunch before I introduce you to our friends" Ash said.
Gold nodded. "There is A LOT of them,"
The two boys smiled and patted Brendan's back as they walked to the cafeteria.
With May
As usual, May stood in line to buy her lunch. She picked up a sandwich, a cup of yogurt and milk.
She took her tray and sat in the corner alone and started eating her sandwich.
With Brendan
"Guys, this is Brendan," Gold said.
Enthusiastic hey-s and hi-s was their response.
"Brendan, this is Gary, Blue, Yellow, Silver, Crystal, Fire Red, we call him Fire, Leaf Green, we call her Leaf, Drew, Steven, Tracy, Lance," Gold said as he pointed to a person. The person would greet Brendan with a nod, wave, etc... Gold stopped and took a deep breath. "Brock, Misty, Erika, Sabrina, Falkner, Bugsy, Whitney, Morty, Jasmine, Clair, Roxanne, Brawly, Flannery, Winora, Lisa and Tate, they're twins," Gold took another deep breath, "Jen, Kaori Hikaru, Michiru, Rayne, Ricko, Misa, and Michelle." Gold finished. "But some of them aren't here so there's more." His vision came across Ash and Misty. Ash had his arm around Misty. "Well, you can get that in your head today and I'll tell you who's with who later... but you probably tell right now," Gold said jerking his head towards Ash and Misty.
"Brendan, why don't you sit here?" Crystal asked as she and Blue made room for Brendan in between them.
"Thanks," He smiled.
"So, Brendan, do you like the school?" Crystal asked.
With May (After she finished her lunch)
May drank the last sip of her milk and threw away her garbage. It was a nice day outside so she decided to go outside to read. She walked to the back of the school to find a tree to lean on while she read. Finally she came across a shady oak tree near the battlefield. She sat down and released her torchic from the pokeball.
She pets the torchic and smiled. "Don't run too far now, Blaze," She said and began to fill her mind with the book.
With Brendan (After he finished his lunch)
"So, why do some of you have color names, no offense or anything," Brendan asked as the group walked outside.
"I actually don't really know but the most popular people," Yellow began.
"Like us," Blue added.
"Gets a name of a color," Crystal continued.
"Ya, what she said." Yellow finished.
"Okay," Brendan replied.
"But some don't want a color for a name," Blue started again.
"Like Drew, Steven, Tracy and Lance" Crystal listed.
"But others," Blue said.
"Like Ash," Crystal added
"He's Red," Yellow told him,
"Or Gary," Crystal said.
"He's Green," Yellow filled in.
"Don't want to be named colors," Blue said.
"Some of us," Crystal started.
"As in the people with colors," Yellow explained.
"Doesn't like our real names," Blue continued.
"So we are just the color," Crystal finished.
"Oh, I get it now, thanks, ladies," Brendan said.
"No problem," They smiled.
"Hey Brendan, wanna battle with us?" Fire asked holding a pokeball in his hand.
"Sure," Brendan answered.
The boys jogged to the battlefield. As they ran, they passed an oak tree. Under it, a girl sat there quietly reading with a torchic running around her.
Brendan stopped in front of the girl. "Maple!" he said.
Nothing was heard from the girl, yet his new friends turned around to see what was going on. A thought came to their heads. 'May?'
"What are you doing?" Tracey asked.
"I borrowed her pencil this morning, just gonna return it," Brendan explained. "Hey," He called again. "Hey, you there?" He asked.
Silence.
"Heellloooo?" He called and his hand hovered on top of the book she was reading. The response he got was that she swatted his hand away.
"Is she deaf?" Brendan asked the others.
"Nah," Steven said. "She's not and she can't be, you asked her to borrow a pencil with words, how could she have not heard you if she gave you a pencil?"
Brendan lightly tapped her on the shoulder. "Hey," he said gently. As soon as he tapped her, he had a feeling that this girl was so fragile that even a touch or a breeze could break her; she seemed more delicate than a glass vase.
The girl looked up with a cute innocent look.
"Here's your pencil," He returned her pencil.
She took it and nodded her head for thanks. Then, Brendan walked to the battlefield with his friends.
"She's a cute one," Fire said as the others nodded in agreement.
"Too bad she's so shy," Steven said. The other nodded again. For a moment there was silence. Everyone in the school knew that. Practically every single guy in the school had tried to break her barrier. Even seniors tried when she was a freshman but none of them.
"Com'on, let's battle!" Ash said.
With Brendan (End of lunch period)
Gary slammed his locker shut. His arms were filled with books.
He had a great time with his new friends. The guys battled while the girls gossiped. He won about half of his matches.
"So what do you have now?" Gary asked.
"English then art," Brendan replied.
"I guess I have English with you, but I don't have art. You don't really seem an arts person..." He said.
Brendan shrugged. "I just like it," he answered as the two walked to their English class.
Still With Brendan (End of English period)
"That was the most boring class ever," Gary said.
Brendan nodded in agreement. He had just sat through the class listening to the teacher ramble on and on about nothing.
"Well, I have D&T (Design and technology) next, see ya 'round," Gary said.
"Later," Brendan said as he walked away.
"Room 105..." ::thud:: "Oww..." He had just bumped into someone. "Sorry," he said as he looked up. "Misa?"
Misa pushed her glasses higher on the ridge of her nose. "Ya, it's me, sorry about that," She said as she bent over to pick up her abandoned books.
"Here, let me help you," Brendan said as he helped her retrieve her books. "So, what do you have now?" He asked.
"Thanks," She said. She looked at Brendan but he seemed to be waiting for something. "Oh, art," She answered.
"I have it too!"
"So does Blue, Yellow, Crystal, Leaf, Tracey and Drew!" She exclaimed.
"Can you show me where it is?" Brendan asked.
"Sure!" She said and led him to the art room.
Thanks to the accident, they were late. The teacher eyed Brendan and Misa but continued to explain their lesson. The room was full but luckily, the four girls had saved spots for the two.
"Today, I want you to draw 6 pictures of 6 different pokemon," She began. "You might think drawing pokemon is easy but..." The teacher kept on talking or so-called 'teaching'. 15 minutes later, they finally got to draw. Brendan was the first to finish. Though he didn't take a lot of time, his drawings were done nicely.
"I'm going to show the teacher," Brendan announced to his friends.
"I know they're good and all, but-" Tracey started.
"If it is good, there wouldn't be a but," Brendan said and began to walk.
"No, Brendan!" Crystal whispered.
"The teacher will make you help other students!" Blue said.
Knowing that Brendan hadn't heard what they said, they heard their expected "WHAT?!?!" from Brendan. And as they expected, Brendan stalked back grumpily.
"We warned you," Drew shrugged.
"Mr. Birch, did you hear what I said? I said START FROM THIS SIDE OF THE ROOM, NOT THAT SIDE!" Her voice boomed, pointing at the other side of the room.
"I heard you, I'm just putting my stuff away so it won't get into the way of 'helping' people," Brendan said using his fingers to quote helping.
"Good," She said and smiled.
Brendan rolled his eyes. "Is she always like that?" His friends nodded in response. Brendan sighed and walked to the other side of the room.
After helping a few of his fellow peers...
The next person he came across was a brunette girl. Maple.
-So di...-
[Icy-chan wants to say something!]
Sorry, I've never really read the manga, played Gold/Sliver and watch the anime too much so I don't know what some people's personalities are like and I might screw up the ages, the gym leaders here depended if they look young or old.
Do not worry if you OC is not mentioned, you need to tell me if they are friends with Brendan & co. or not. Vokteren, sorry to say this but Wally isn't in Brendan & co.'s crowd. (I was deciding that Wally might become May's friend so your OC might become May's friend too). Also, about the battling scene, I couldn't add the OCs that liked to battle because it wouldn't be nice to say that May is cute in front of girls. So maybe next time, I will add those OCs in.
Sorry for remind you guys of school, Marichi's Love Vanished Regrettably got me thinking about school and this is about school so I finally got this out of me.
Oh, and by the way, I'm using the Japanese color names if you don't know. Blue and Leaf Green will be different people and sorry if your favorite gym leader or whatever isn't in the color list. The people on the color list are mostly the main characters. Please don't be mad.
PLEASE FILL IN WHAT I TOLD YOU TO FILL IN AT THE TOP OF THE PAGE IF YOU HAVE ENTERED AN OC!!! Thank you.
-So...-
[Please review!]
At the beginning, in the warning, there is a word 'ajwoykhevipnwg' if you find out what it is, I'll... I dunno... XD update faster? I dunno...
