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As the car fell head first into the water ( which was frozen) it broke the ice and the front windshield. She felt the sting of the icey water as it filled her lungs and chilled her skin. Kori struggled to undo the seat belt ,but her efferts were obsolete. After a moment or so she blacked out.
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Kori woke up on a hard surface soaked in water, yet she felt no cold. She gave a few powerful coughs to release water from her throat before getting up off the concrete street.
" What happened?" she asked herself
She turned around to see police cars, an ambulance,fire fighters, and a large tow truck. then tow truck was lifting a car out the water on the side of the bridge.
" That's my car !" Kori said running toward a police officer.
" Excuse me sir that's my car. Perhaps you could tell me what's going on?"
The police man didn't turn to her or say anything. Like he completley ignored her.
" Excuse me ?" she said again. Still nothing.
" Excuse me !" This time she pulled his shoulder towards her, and screamed when her hand went right threw his shoulder.
" What the hell is going on!"
" They can't hear you." said a sweet kind voice out of no where.
Kori turned to see a young girl about seven dressed in a long white gown, she seemed to glow a bright white color.
" Do not be frightened. I am hear to rest your soul."
" Rest my soul ?" said Kori " Why?"
" You have not been a good person in life, so you have two options. Either spent the rest of eternity walking aimlessly on the earth or except and succed in my mission for you."
" Wait, what do you mean in life?"Kori said panicing
" You are dead. You died a dew moments ago in the crash." said the girl "Please choose quickly I have 27,849 more customers to visit tonight and I can't waste my whole time explaining death to you."
" Uh, what happens if I suceed this mission?"
" You will have another choice of going to heaven or send the angel brigade to make sure you never died in the first place."
" I guess that sounds good . What do I have to do?"
" There are these two people, Richard and Rachel , if they don't fix their relationship soon they'll break up... again then Rachel will commit suicide. She's one of the ones we worry about up here."
" O.k " said Kori " When do I start?'
" Right... about... now"
She was surrounded by a bright light and she couldn't breath for about a split second. Then the light was gone. It was now daylight andshe was standing in front of a large, posh looking building. In big bold letters the sign said Wanye Enterprises.
" O.k Richard is the only one you can make contact with. You can hear and see everyone but only talk to Richard. He is the only one who can hear and see you. You will findhim here." the girl handed Kori a scrap of paper.
" Good luck." the girl said before disappearing
" I'm gonna' help you Richard whoever you are." Kori said to her self before walking into the building.
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