Hey!
I hope you like my story so far. I know that this has been a while but I think I got it up by the promised time. I might go back and redo this chappie but as of right now it is going to work.
I have had a lot going on so it took me a while. It still hasn't hit rated M yet but it will soon.
I will try to get the next chappie up as soon as possible but if you review it might encourage me. I really like reading reviews! But also please be honest and critique every little thing you find (besides spelling but you can mention it).
I hope you like it!
Neko Aoki
Dear Journal,
I am finally in Altamira. I am so tired after all the traveling, I am going to go to bed soon so I can catch up on my sleep and be more rested by the time that Colette gets here.
Presea Combatir
Presea unpacked all of her stuff. Her clothes lay scattered across the room and it was hard to believe she had only been there for one day.
Dear Journal,
I can't wait to see Colette! Only four days to go. I have to wear a really pretty outfit! What am I going to wear? I want it to be special and I want to give her necklace to her soon! I wonder what she will think of me? Will she like how I look now? Will she reject me if I tell her? Will she freak out? I can't wait for her to be here. I think that just being around her will be amazing! I think she wants to go to the amusement park first thing! The Ferris wheel would be a great place to tell her! Well I am going to go through all of my stuff now and try to find what to wear when she gets here!
Presea Combatir
Presea barely got any sleep those few nights and was freaking out by the time she only had one day left.
She HAD to find something to wear. She threw all of her stuff across the room and finally decided on a really low outfit that showed plenty of skin while remaining fairly modest.
She packed all of her stuff back into her bags. She
She finally lay down in her bed and wrote in her journal.
Dear Journal,
I get to see Colette tomorrow! I am so happy! I miss her so much! I can't wait to see her! I love her hair! Her eyes! The way she loves to help everyone! I am so excited.
I remember once I didn't feel anything but I finally decided to let myself feel when she came into our group. I remember saving her from someone and the reason I did that was I didn't know whether I could stay if she wasn't in the group. And then when the group broke up I really only missed Colette.
I really really want to see her. I guess I should just get some sleep so I don't look horrible tomorrow for Colette.
Presea Combatir
She got up at six in the morning and got dressed. She put on a lot of make-up and her clothes. She looked really pretty! She lined her eyes in eyeliner and mascara and put on a sheer glittery eye shadow.
Her clothes gracefully draped off of her curves and made her look very grown up. She was wearing a cream colored dress that went down really far in the back and was really low. The sleeves were sheer and had a slit in them. She looked graceful even though she had been living off being a lumberjack!
Her hair draped gracefully down to her shoulders and cascaded down her back. She fiddled with her hair because she usually wore it in pigtails or a ponytail so it didn't get in her face as she was working. It was slightly uncomfortable but was there as a reminder that she had to look her best and not slouch or anything that was unattractive.
She walked down to the lobby and waited even though she had about five hours till noon. She sat down and watched everyone wander around. She noticed how everyone moved so slowly and lazily but she seemed as if she was the only one without something to do at the moment.
She was off in her thoughts; all of a sudden she noticed that there was a guy (she guessed he was pretty attractive since the girls around were all staring) sitting right next to her and it was way in her personal space.
"What are you doing?" Presea asked. She moved slightly over trying to move away and show her uncomfort so he might move.
He moved over and put his arm around her. "How are you? My name is Yuki. What is yours?"
She scrunched up her nose in disgust and moved away. "My name is Presea. I am not interested."
"Why not?" he asked.
"Because I am a les- I mean I like someone else," she answered.
"A lesbian, eh? I think that is even hotter! You want to come up to my room? I can give you some sweet se-"
"Ewww! Ok, first thing. Lesbians don't ever want sex from guys. We aren't fucking attracted to them! It is disgusting! Eww!"
"Well my little ladies lady, why don't I give you my number and the number of my hotel room." Yuki got out a piece of paper and wrote down his number and his room number. Then he handed it to her and said, "Come up if you want to and maybe we can even have a good time."
She was disgusted and tried to hide it but didn't manage to. He noticed but sighed and went on to another girl.
She hated when guys hit on her and tried to avoid it by living out on her own but that was boring so every once in a while she went into town. And every time without fail a guy hit on her.
She didn't think of herself as that pretty but apparently guys liked her appearance. She had even once had a girl hit on her in a bar. That was the only one that she liked. She considered even going with her but decided against it because she felt it would be unfaithful to Colette even though they weren't going out.
All of her thoughts seemed to lead back to Colette now days. She could start out thinking about getting a new ax and somehow would end up back to thinking about Colette. She was looking forward to meeting Colette so much! She hoped Colette would be just as warm as usual. She also hoped Colette wouldn't freak out if she accidentally slipped to her.
She started to watch people after an hour or two. She saw married couples in bathing suits hoping to get romantic dinners and beautiful sunsets. She also saw young couples that were looking for any chance they could to get time to themselves. She also saw teenagers, some were being good and just enjoying surfing or tanning, but some were sneaking off anytime they could to get some "quality" time all alone and to have their dream first time in the sandy beaches. Then she saw families having picnics.
She saw no one alone though. Well except for the occasional teen whose guy or girl had snuck off with someone else. But other than that everyone was couples or families. She wondered whether she and Colette would be a couple or whether she and her would just stay friends. She pondered this for a while.
All of a sudden she felt a hug from someone behind her. She saw a gleam of red hair and a flashy smile.
"Finally my little one has grown up!" he said laughing, "I haven't seen you in ages!"
She gasped and said breathlessly, "Hello Zelos! I know it has been a long time. What are you doing here?"
"Well it is my last day on vacation and I was just going to wander around and maybe get some lurve. But then I saw you!"
"Well I ain't giving you any love but would you like to eat lunch with me?"
"Only if you answer what your doing here first! I mean I would never picture you out here!" Zelos said in his usual laid back voice hiding his excitement in seeing an old friend.
"Well I am here because I am meeting Colette, I haven't seen her in forever," she glanced out of the window and her face went blank and then a very small smile crept across the corner of her mouth.
He recognized that face all to well. He saw it every time after he had been with a girl and she thought she was completely in love with him and usually thought she would die without him. He knew that she loved her so much and he knew that it was real.
He always craved for that love but was scared off from it at first when he was popular only because of him being chosen. Then when he finally found it, it was forbidden. So he gave up but it didn't fill the place where he wanted that person.
So they got their food and ate their lunch. Zelos talked for most of the time about how he had been in the last five years. And it finally dawned on her that he was getting kind of old for being a playboy. Looks can only work for so long. She made a mental note to try and find someone for him. Someone who…well was pretty tough because otherwise she would be too submissive and would probably die of too much sex (if that was possible).
Then she started to think about Colette and her mind drifted for a while as Zelos blabbed on about nothing.
She finally snapped out of it when he said, "Well how are you going to tell Colette?"
She flipped out. How had he known? She had only said that she was her friend she never said she liked her! Had she? She thought through what she had said and decided she had not. Then how had he known?
He saw the panic on her face and just let her think for a minute. He was good at reading body language. It was one of his many talents though he usually ignored all of it. But he could see exactly what she was thinking.
"Don't worry I won't tell anyone but I was just wondering. I mean I just noticed you seemed to have affection towards her. Correct me if I am wrong."
"No your right. But I don't know how I will say it. I have tried but I don't know how to so I am just putting off thinking about it. I asked Sheena about it and she gave me a necklace."
"Well I could probably tell you how to talk her into fucking with you but I don't know if I can tell you how to get her to like you that way. But you just should tell her at a tender moment that you like her," Zelos said.
"I want a relationship though not a quick short fuck or two. I want her and her only." Presea said.
"Well best of luck! I don't really know how to help you but you know you can always have me. I mean you've grown up so much and well you're just so…voluptuous. You might have even surpassed Sheena!"
"Thank you, but I am not interested in people like you," she said but soon corrected herself, "I mean not like really flirty and perverted but I mean well…never mind."
"I think I get what you mean. You are a full lesbian! That is so hot! Call me if you ever want a threesome!"
"Umm no thank you. I am lesbian. L-E-S-B-I-A-N. Meaning that I like girls not guys!"
He stared at her for a moment then raised his eyebrow.
"Sorry I didn't mean to tell you that. Umm please just ignore that. I am sorry," Presea said.
"Well I am going to go now," Zelos said.
Presea gave him a hug, which surprised him. Then she went back to her couch. She glanced up at a clock and saw that Colette would be there in an hour!
She was so excited but was a little unnerved that Zelos noticed so easily. It was kind of scary but yet in a way kind of encouraged.
She reached in her pocket and felt the wings of the necklace that Sheena had given her.
Well what did you think! I hope you liked it! I will try to have the next one up by next Monday but no promises. (May 1st) Please Review!
