Hiya! Yeah, I finally updated. Sry it took so long. I'm not exactly the fastest writer in the world and a magnet for ideas ya know. Also, all this heat and boredom is diving me insane! I positively CANNOT think straight! Even less write down my thoughts! Anyhoo, I'm so very happy that school is finally out, and also for so many reviews (well it's a lot to me! Lol!). Anyways, here are my responses to all you wonderful reviewers:
Lucibell: You think I did better? Great! Yeah, I think I should work on feelings/emotions. Not very good with that yet, hehe. Well thanx for the tips and reviews you've been giving me so far. They're very encouraging. Something an amateur needs!
Lumrian-Girl: I'm so happy you liked it! Thanx for the review. I hope that you'll continue to read.
sakume: Thank you! I love your stories too! Somehow (plz don't take this offensively) I don't know how someone with such a wonderful talent like you could possibly like something like this…but hey! I'm not complaining:)
Sapphire the wind wolf: wow! What an awesome response! I'm so happy you decided to read! And also happy that you like it as much as you do!
Serenity: I'm glad you liked it so much! And here's my update!
Ooo, almost forgot…Disclaimer: no, of course I do not own Zelda, or Link, or Ganondorf, or Hyrule, or-- yeah you get my drift. Anyways if I did I wouldn't be doing this. I'd be planning the next game in the series! But I do own Kitara and Gale.
Okies people, I added some more to chapter 4 which was going to be the beginning of chapter 5, but I thought it would be a good way to end my chapter and changed my mind. So go back and read if you think it will help from all this confusion.
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-Chapter 5-
"My deepest apologies my king, but the princess is nowhere to be found," the soldier as deep as possible without falling over.
"WHAT?" the king's outraged voice echoed in the thrown room making all the occupants cower ack in fear. They were all aware what power he held. "Find her! Find her! This kingdom cannot possibly go on without an heir! FIND HER!" The king calmly walked back to his thrown.
The soldier stood up straight and saluted him. "Y-yes, your Majesty, sir," he stuttered hoping the king did not decide to execute him. Turning to his men behind him, he ordered, "Go! You heard our king! Find the Princess! Search every village and home!" He turned to leave.
The king stopped him. "How long has she disappeared?"
"Almost three days now, dear King."
"Do you know who could have kidnapped her?"
"We suspect it was the man who attacked one of our eldest soldiers, Glen, Sir."
"So she is in the hands of a killer?"
"Y-yes, your Highness."
"Please…find her alive."
Again he saluted. "The Princess of Hyrule is in good hands."
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No! Go away! I looked at the ugly beast in the face. His evil smile sent pickles up my spine.
Leave, me, alone! My clenched my hands into fists and glowed with the power of light. I shot a beam of light at the creature making him stagger. The creature sent forth a dark bolt of energy at me making me fall backward. Its murderous glinted, yellow eyes bore right through me.
Princess you will be mine…it hissed as it drew closer. NO! Get away from me. Another beam of light was directed to him. Again he reeled backwards, but this time recovered quickly and lunged at me.
Ah! I turned and fled but was too slow. The creature held me in its grasp. His hideous head caressed itself against my cheek. AH! I wanted to scream from disgust. The creature hissed and whispered in my ear, "You will be mine Princess…you will be mine…"
No! Put me down, you ugly monster! You can't have me! I struggled in his grasp as he began to squeeze. I gasped for my breath, but it never seemed to come. Slowly my vision blurred and all went dark.
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Kitara's eyes shot open and shifted back and forth in panic. Confused thoughts flooded into her head. Where am I? How'd I get here? Why does my whole body hurt? Inwardly groaning the young princess slowly sat up in the rugged bed. Ugh…my head hurts too…Kitara rubbed her head trying to make the dizziness leave.
As she looked around the room she noticed that one eye only saw darkness. Gasping her hand flew over her eye and came in contact with some cloth and her wound. "Ow!" she exclaimed, jerking her hand away.
Again she glanced around the empty room. The wall was made of stone. And so was the bed by what she felt under her and shifted uncomfortably. What is this place? Memories of the attack flooded into her head, and Kitara's eyes widened. "Oh no…I'm in Gerudo Valley…" she whispered hoarsely.
Her teachers and instructors in Hyrule Castle always taught her that the Gerudo were ruthless and dangerous. They told her that this hostile band of women thieves stopped at nothing to get what they wanted and were merciless at those who got in there way. They told her of relatives and friends who crossed the path of the Gerudo and were never seen again. Kitara shuddered, remembering the words of her teachers.
At that moment a young Gerudo walked through the door causing Kitara jump and hug the thin sheets for the little protection she hoped they provided.
"Oh…" the Gerudo said lamely with a slight hint of surprise in her voice, "You're awake…" She exited, leaving a confused, wide eyed Kitara. She's…not going to kill me? As our young princess' thoughts ran through her head the room was entered by a male Gerudo. He smiled when he saw her.
"You're awake." He paused to wait for her reply.
Kitara only nodded her head, afraid to speak. I thought all Gerudos were women…
He chuckled as he walked closer to the bed causing her to grasp the sheets tighter. The boy looked at her concerned which confused her. "Umm…I'm not going to hurt you, if that's what you're thinking…uh…okay?"
This comment brought back Kitara's fiery rebellious spirit. She scoffed detecting pity in his voice. Her actions only made him smile. "I guess that means you're fine…I think."
"I'm fine," Kitara replied in a muffled voice. Then in a confused one she asked, "So…you're not going to kill me?"
"Why would I do that? After all, I just saved you. If I wanted you dead I would have left you to be eaten by that wolfoe."
"…But my tutors always said…never mind."
"I understand."
Kitara lips curled into a smile knowing she should thank him, but her stubborn attitude kept her mouth shut. Her smile quickly turned into a frown as she realized something. "Where is my dagger?" Kitara asked abruptly.
"Uh…"
"Where is it?" her voice getting panicky, "It's…very special to me." She finished quickly.
"It's right here." The boy reached for his belt but stopped midway. "It's gone…"
"One of you're friends stole it!" Kitara recalled the Gerudo's reputation. Thieves.
"I'm sure they didn't…"
"Well, I'm sure they did!"
"We'll look for it later…okay?" the boy instantly saw this girl would be hard to keep control of. "But first, what's your name?"
"Kit-ah!…uh…" Kitara stuttered not wanting to be found out and returned to the castle, "Umm…it's uh…Kiva…yeah, Kiva." She had no idea why she had chosen that name, but it seemed to fit.
"Okay, Kiva now that you're well…I have an offer to make…one that we Gerudo rarely give, if at all." His eyes seemed uneasy as if he was doing the right thing.
Kitara's eyes narrowed and her interest arose. "And what's that?"
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I'm sorry it was so short…but I simply can't think of anything to write. I'm so sorry. This chapter is really lame. Yeah and I have even more questions…please be patient with me, I still need to learn things and such so…
1: What on earth are 'hits'? I have so many and I don't even know what they are!
2: (if you're a sonic know it all)I'm confused with something…is Station Square on earth or in Mobius?(I know this has nothing to do with Zelda…)
3: Do you guys like it when I answer(reviews) in the beginning or would you rather have me do it after a chapter? Cause I notice that is what most of you do…
Oh yes and one last thing…I am putting this story on hold for about a month or two, so don't expect any updates soon. But who knows maybe I might update sooner than that… I think that's it. So please do review and tell me all yur helpful thoughts. Sincerely, Miya!
