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Chapter 4-Aftermath
She didn't see it coming until it hit her. All Stephanie Tanner felt was pain. She was hurt by what Gia did, but this was much worse. A small Ford truck hit her. She wasn't sure if they saw her coming or what. All she knew was that they drove away leaving Steph in the street, bleeding.
"Steph!" she heard Gia yell as she was running towards the street. "Oh my God! Can you hear me Steph? Are you alright?"
Steph wanted to answer, but the pain was incredibly strong. She could hear every thing that was being said. She wasn't dead—yet. Steph felt like dying. She still hated Gia. Steph felt like her life was going to be over.
"Omigosh," Gia exclaimed again. "Steph, you're bleeding a lot."
It was true. She was bleeding a lot. She realized that her head was bleeding. She tried getting up and touching her head, but she couldn't. It was like her body wouldn't let her move. Omigosh! Am I going to be paralyzed?
Steph was so scared. All she wanted was her family. Her dad, D.J., Michelle, Nicky, Alex, Joey, Aunt Becky….and Uncle Jesse. More then anyone, she wanted her mom. But she knew that was impossible. Her mother was dead. Nevertheless, she still wanted her.
"Steph," she heard Gia say again. "I'm going to call 911. Okay? I'm going to get help. Just don't move! What ever you do, don't move. Okay?"
Steph just starred at her. She couldn't reply. She just laid there. Gia understood so she ran towards Jordan Stern's house. Gia was really upset. She told every person she passed that Steph was hit by a car and they needed an ambulance. Jordan was pretty upset about this, because his parents didn't know about the party. Jordan's brother, however, called 911 for Gia. He understood that Steph needed help. As Jordan's brother was doing this, Gia and a few other party guests ran outside to help Steph. Some just went outside to see what was happening. Some went out just to make sure that she wasn't dead. Some didn't even care and continued to party. Chris Hammer was one of those people who didn't even care and stayed inside to party.
Everyone stood around Steph and starred at her. Some asked Gia questions. It was very exciting for them. But Steph was in so much pain at that point. She realized that she had cracked a rib and her spine was messed up. She went against Gia's orders and felt and moved around. She wanted to know what she was up against. She could move her arms now, but not her legs. She was in so much pain that she screamed out. She could hear the distant screams of the ambulance. Steph continued to cry out. She cried for everything from her mother to her dog, Comet. What had Steph done to deserve this? It hit her then. This was Karma coming back and biting her in the butt. She snuck out of her home and lied to her family. Steph was in such misery that she yelled out again. The ambulance was near, but she couldn't see it. She was feeling very woozy. She felt like she was going to pass out. She tried to look for Gia, but she couldn't see anything. She was just so tired. Steph slowly slipped into a deep sleep.
Short chapter, I know. I wanted to get some fluff in and explain the story. Thanks for all the reviews. I thought I uploaded this before I left for a trip to see my brother, but I guess I didn't. Oh well. Sorry to keep everyone waiting. Thanks to all the reviewers:
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I really do appreciate it. I know some people don't like criticism, but I think it can be really useful. Don't be afraid to criticize this story. I need all the help I can get if I want to become a writer. If I honestly have no talent, I'd like to know. I just want to make sure that I'm not putting in wasted effort on something I'm not good at. –Katie (wuteva4eva456)
