Disclaimer: I do not own, nor did create Sly Cooper or other related characters. They are the property of Sucker Punch not me.

This will be the last chapter I'll be writing for a long time. If you like this story I'm updating it a week and some odd days from now. Readxreview. Please let me know what you thought of the story. I could use the feed back on my latest story.

Love At First Sight

Carmelita was a brave fox. She walked into her step mothers room. "What do you want? Who was at the door?" Clirtews shrewd voice spoke. Carmelita walked upto her side and handed her the letter. Mrs. Clirtew opened it. Carmelita saw the minks eyes widen. "Girls come here quick!" She called for her daughters.

"What is it mother?" Clara asked in a fake sweet voice.

Clirtew read the invotation aloud. "The three girls of the Clirtew house are invited to attend the third annual Cooper Halloween Party five days from today." The minks squelled.

"Wait a second, there are only two of us. The letter said the 'three' girls." Clara remarked. Carmelita was surprised she could count and realized that the mink was correct. Her step familys eyes fell upon Carmelita.

"The letter says I am invited too." Carmelita spoke up. Her sisters had a loook a digust on their faces.

"No mother! She should not be allowed to go. You forbid her from leaving this house." Clhoe outbursted.

Carmelitas heart sank. It was true, she wasn't allowed to go anywhere. "Well we should not disapoint the fine gentlemen who has sent this invotation. Can we." Clirtew spoke. Her little brats were about to protest when their mother continued. "Only if you finish all the chores, yard work, and have a suitable costume for this event may you go." Clirtew told the silent fox.

Carmelita jump out of her skin. She was invited to one of the biggest parties ever and was just allowed to go. This was one of the single greatest moments of her life. "Thank you step mother!" Carm squeked.

Mrs. Clirtew crossed her arms. "You are only allowed to go when you finish all your work and have a costume to meet the standards of a party such as this." Carmelita didn't care what she was saying. She was to excited to care. The fox left the room floating on air.

"Mother we can not be seen around the likes of her!" Clara was getting to throw a fit. Her mom put her hand up to silence the child.

"She will not be going, yooung ones." Clirterw confused the dim wits.

"But you just said..." Clirtew cut Clhoe off.

"Yes I said IF she finished all her work and had a costume." The girls understood what hteir mother was saying.

"Yah like she would be able to afford a costume." Clara understood.

"Yah she doesn't have any money at all." Clhoe was a little happy Carmelita was going to be shot down to her final peg.

"That is right my darlings. You have nothing to fear. She will not be going." Her daughters were happy. But Carmelita didn't know of what they planned. She was aleady in her dimly lit basement, as happy as can be.

Carmelita felt along the north wall of her room until her paw crossed a lose brick. "Ah ha." She pulled the brick out the wall and retrieved a small box that lay inside. Carmelita went over to her bed and sat down. She opened the box and took out a small wad of cash. "I should have enough here to buy a costume for the party." She counted the money she had been saving up. "Thirty-nine dollars. That should safice." She put the box back in the hidden place and fell onto her bed. There were only four days of school and one week end day till the party.

Sly Cooper instructed his hippo friend were he wanted the decorations to go. The raccoon only had three days to his party and was short fused. The stress was getting to him. Everyone had high expectations about the party and Sly had to go above that. Murry kept messing up Bentlys blue prints by placing stuff where it was not suposed to be.

"No Murry the pumpkins go on the left side of the enterance. No your left, my right." Bently began screming at Murry and Sly couldn't take it.

"Hay guys while you argue here I'm goin' out to find a costume." His friends weren't listening. Sly slipped out the mansion and headed for the best costume shop in town.

The fox was out running errands and her hands were full of bags. She had a hour before she had to be back at her prison. Something in a shop window caught her eyes. "Aw." It was the most amazing costume ever. The manicquin wore a piar of dark blue jeans, navy blue tank top, a khaki leather coat, a pair of knee high boots and a scarlet mask that only covered the eyes and tied in the back. She immediatly ran in the store. Carmelita just had to have it. She tried on three sizes before she found the one that fit just right. She picked up her bags and went to the cashier to pay.

"Forty-two seventy." The cashier told Carmelita.

"Oh no! I only have thirty-nine." Carmelita was on the verge of tears. Just as her voice started shaking a young raccoon walked into the store.

Sly looked around the shop. He spotted a beatiful vixen at the counter. He could tell some thing was wrong. "Are you alright?" Sly asked her.

Carmelita looked at the boy who had just tapped on the shoulder. She couldn't hold it in. "I'm short a few bucks." She said.

Sly stood silent. "How much?" He asked the cashier. Carmelita was confused.

"Forty-two seventy." He said again.

Carmelita looked at Sly as he pulled out his wallet. "No, no." She tried to tell him then she saw the load a cash in his wallet. By now Carmelita was wondering who this young kid was. Sly handed the cashier the money then gave Carmelita her bag. She didn't no what to say. "I can not accept this." She told him.

"Consider it a gift if you will come to my party." Sly suave voice said. "Sunday, its the third annual Cooper Halloween party." Carmelita thought the young man was joking but relized he was telling the truth.

'That would explain all the money he has.' Carmelita thought.

DING DING DING. The clock on the wall showed that it was ten mintutes till. "Ah, I have to go. Thank you." She picked up her bags and hurried out the store.

"Wait!" She didn't give Sly an answer and it left him standing infront of the store watching the fox run.

She swept the sweat off her head as she made it home in time. She placed her bag in her room the went to the kitchen to cook supper. Carmelita hummed while she cooked. She couldn't stop thinking about Sly. He was just to good to be real. Her step sisters and mother came into the room. They sat down at the table and waited to be served their meal.

"Why is she so happy?" Clhoe wispered to her sister as the watched Carmelta finish cooking.

Clara shrugged.

Sly had returned to his home. He had found the perfect costume ever made. Bently and Murry had finished their row and had put up almost all the decorations.

"Sly where did you... Go?" Bently and Murry didn't hear their friend leave and wonder where he could have went. "Whats with the never ending smile?" The turtle asked his friend.

Sly bounced on the couch. He turned to his friends. "Do you guys believe in love at first sight?"

So there you have it. I can get so carried away sometimes. I just absolutely love writing. Did you enjoy? An update won't be for some time now. Sorry : (