Review Responses
Dunsparce519:
So, the first OC got cut. He seemed similar to Leonard in a way, so I understand why he was eliminated. I liked that twist with Gerald with his electric collar preventing him from sabotaging others. Will the next episode bring up Amy and Sammy's conflict to its climax, or might there be an original episode due to the larger cast?
Response: It will be a mix of both. I am also willing to bring a Return of the Aftermaths, too. To make things more interesting and to include some continuity into some other things that I might create in future.
LaCuevademisgustos:
A very interesting changes here.
We have one of the Boy Twins recognizing Sammy. And thus, helping whit that case a bit.
We have Gerald apparently opting for Main Bad.
We have the first sparks of Skave and Shasmine.
And we loose one of the OCs. Hunter was ok for his short time.
Response: There's more to come eventually.
P.S: Not too sure if anyone is aware but I'm choosing to make Chris to be less Crazy for this since I am not sure it was necessarily and I also would be willing to involve Chef into more of challenges in future since He didn't have much screen-time in Canon
"Last time on Total Drama Pahkitew Island, the teams ran a super slippery race while holding some very rare pork. And Jasmine won it for the Kinosewak, while Team Maskwak had to say later to Hunter the Jungle Fighter, they did find a nice cave to sleep in. This challenge is treacherous, deadly, and unless you're doing it, hilarious. Who will survive to play another day, and who will be sent to giant cannon airlines, find out right here, right now on Total! Drama! Pahkitew Island!"
Jasmine, Sammy, Thomas, and Johnny were foraging for food. "It's amazing how much fruit this island has!" Jasmine exclaimed, picking some oranges. "I didn't even see these oranges yesterday!"
"Yeah, it's crazy…" Sammy mumbled. "Now where is that mulberry bush? I coulda sworn it was right here!" Sammy let out a depressed sigh. Jasmine turned to Sammy. The cheerleader was clearly very unhappy.
"Y'know, you don't have to help me every morning just 'cause Amy tells you to." Jasmine told her. "You- you don't want my help?" Sammy asked, grabbing her arm.
"That's not what I said!" said Jasmine. "I just want it to be your decision. Stop letting your sister treat you like a servant!"
"Servant…" Sammy muttered, her eyes to the ground. "That would be an improvement…"
"Well, do something about it!" Jasmine said. "How can I? She's everyone's favorite. She's the Pretty one." Sammy replied.
"You kidding me? You guys are pretty much the same! You guys look exactly the same! If anything, You're both the pretty one, if not you're more prettier than her!" Thomas said. "Yeah and WAY nicer than her, too. You deserve way more honestly, Sammy." Johnny added.
"Wow, You guys called me Sammy?" Sammy was mesmerized. "Well, That is your name, ain't it? Besides, Thomas has been the one convincing some of us that you're name is Sammy. Plus, Samey kinda sounds like a Stupid Name." Johnny remarked.
"Wait. You've done that...for me?" Sammy asked, looking at Thomas. "Of course! I think we got a lot of common and You seem like a pretty cool person. Figured, Its the least I can do for a Twin Buddy" Thomas said and left Sammy to Blush.
"Yeah, I figured you deserved to be called your actual name, sorry I didn't do so sooner." Jasmine said. "So, are we friends? If not, that's okay, I don't have many friends."
Jasmine puts her hand on Sammy's shoulder. "The way Amy treats you bothers me, so yeah I guess we're friends. I have trouble making friends too." Jasmine punched a tree causing some berries to fall into her sack. "People find me a bit intimidating."
Confessional: Sammy
"Maybe I have been letting Amy get away with too much, one time I let her shave my head so others could 'tell us apart'. Jasmine has a point, I gotta stand up for myself."
End Confessional
Shawn then shows up with a sack of berries. "Hey." Shawn greeted. "G'day Shawn." Jasmine and Shawn began smiling at each other so Sammy took this as her cue to leave. "I'm… gonna go over there." Sammy smiled as she left and , leaving Shawn and Jasmine to converse. "So Shawn, see any zombies around the area?" Jasmine joked.
Confessional: Shawn
Shawn: "Usually when I talk to girls, I'm the one who has to bring up the undead. Looks, survival skills, and a healthy fear of reanimated corpses, man this girl has everything."
End Confessional
"No zombies sighted. Yet. But they can walk underwater so they can be on this island right now." Shawn said. "Definitely. They could be anywhere."
"I better get this food back to the others, I'll uh see you around?" Shawn then ran off and soon Sammy walked back over with a confused look on her face. "Were you two talking about zombies?" Jasmine chuckled before speaking. "Yeah, it's just a little running joke between us."
Back to Dave and Sugar in the cave, Dave was using a makeshift broom to clean the cave when Shawn showed up. "Hey guys, I'm ba-" Sugar then tackled Shawn and smiled at the food. "I could eat the legs off a table, and we ain't even got one.""Hey!" cried Shawn, entering the cave with a sack full of fruit. "Who's hungry?"
Beardo got up and ran to Shawn. He got down on all fours and started panting excitedly. "Woof! Woof!" he barked. Shawn rolled his eyes in amusement. "Alright. Here ya go, boy!" Shawn took out a pear and tossed it at Beardo, who caught it in his mouth like a Labrador catching a tennis ball.
Shawn then looks to see Ella behind him. "Oh Shawn, as a special thank you, I'd like to do you a song. The fruit Shawn brought, brought joy to the…" Sugar then stuffed a Pear into Ella's Mouth. "Eat up Ella, you look skinny enough to run through a rainstorm without getting wet."
Sky then ran over to her the group with a pail of water. "I got fresh water from the stream, don't wanna get dehydrated." Sky announced. "Awesome, so great, you are so…"
"The water Sky brought, brought joy to the…"
"Thank you, but no song required." Dave said. "Ella, maybe you could go sing to the other team as a sign of… friendly competition." Shawn had suggested.
"That is a wonderful idea!" She then hums as she walks off. "Oh. I should probably go with her. Just in case" Elliot walks out to go with Ella.
Meanwhile, with the Floating Salmon...
"Look at all this!" Rodney exclaimed. Sitting on a picnic blanket before the team was a vast assortment of fruit. Bananas, oranges, different kinds of apples, a pineapple, a watermelon, a cantaloupe, some peppers, and handfuls of mulberries sat on the blanket. If the team lost today's challenge, they wouldn't go hungry anyway. "Thanks, Jasmine!"
"For sure, mate!" said Jasmine. "Thanks, Amy!"
"Oh, it was nothing!" said Amy. Jasmine looked at Sammy. The kind twin was struggling to hold her tongue. She looked so ready to go off on her sister, but past experiences had clearly taught her that this had more often than not backfired. Perhaps she had always picked the wrong time and the wrong place to confront her? "Um, Rodney?" said Jasmine as the team dug in. "It was actually Sammy here that helped me gather this. Amy didn't do a damn thing."
"What?" said Amy, looking as though she thought she misheard Jasmine. "Who?" said Rodney munching on an apple.
"Sammy." said Jasmine. "That's what Samey here prefers to be called."
"Oh. Well then, thanks, Sammy!" said Rodney. "Well, Hey! Me and Johnny helped, too." Thomas said. "Well thanks, Thomas." Timothy said.
Confessional: Amy
"Okay, since when does anyone take Samey's side? She's just a wannabe-me! A spare Amy! (Gasp!) Her name should be Spareamy! I am going to change her birth certificate as soon as we get home! Oh! And seriously, That Braindead Idiot Thomas has been falling for her and Its seriously getting on my nerves and so is that Stupid Country Boy, Johnny. They Both have to go, Now!"
End Confessional
"Good morning, other team!" Ella greeted in singsong. "Who'd like to hear a song?"
"Sorry, but there's no time for that, Ella! Chris barked over the loudspeakers. "IT'S CHALLENGE TIME! ALL BUTTS TO THE MEETING AREA IN FIVE!"
"I'm coming, Chris!" Topher called. He got up and ran to the meeting area. The rest of the team got up and walked, a slightly crestfallen Ella following.
"I'd like to hear a song one of these times, Ella." Sammy offered.
"Oh, that'd be wonderful!" said Ella, perking up. She then began to follow the Salmons to the meeting area. Johnny comes up to Rodney.
"Hey Big Fella. So, Anything going on with you and Amy?" Johnny asked as Rodney started stuttering. "U-uh...I-I don't know what you're talking about..." Johnny raised a brow and hummed.
He made sure that nobody watches him before he picked up a Rock and tossed near Jasmine to make her fall down.
Rodney helps pick her up before Rodney gazes at Jasmine with a Lovestruck look as Jasmine tried to Thank him but he wasn't listening. "Bingo." Johnny said to himself and grinning devilishly.
Confessional: Jasmine
"Poor Amy! She's gonna be crushed when I tell her it's over! But I can't deny what my heart is writing in the stars! It's writing… Jasmine!
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Confessional: Johnny
"Aha! I knew that something had to be up with him. He's been trying to get himself a girl...I think. I think that whoever slightly touches him, He quickly falls for them. I had an Uncle who was once like that but after 2 years of therapy, He was still lonely but at least knew how to be more social. Hmm, Maybe if I could try and help Rodney with his problem then we could make an alliance then Maybe I could get him to be a pretty strong asset. Can't guarantee on helping him get a Girl but I could at least teach him how he should go about getting one the right way. I just have to analyze some more and come up with solutions."
Johnny: After all, Its from one Farm Boy to Another. Gotta stick together, Ya know"
End Confessional
Meanwhile, Topher arrived at the meeting area. Chris was writing on a clipboard and standing next to a large crate filled with water balloons. "Morning, Chris!" Topher greeted. "I am so totally pumped for this challenge!"
"Oh, good!" Chris greeted. He turned away from Topher. "I can't tell you how that means to me!"
"You think that maybe I could explain the rules of this challenge?" Topher asked. "Appreciate it, but That's kind of the host's job, Topher. " Chris said.
"Right, sorry! Just excited!" Topher apologized. "It's just that you're such a great role model! I've always wanted to be like you! I mean, it's like we're all winners because we got to meet the Chris McLean!" Chris's expression lightened up.
"Well said, Topher!" said Chris. Just then, the teams arrived. Ella went over to her team. "Gather 'round, kiddies!" Chris announced. "Today's game is called Doom Balloons!"
"You had me at 'doom!'" said Max, softly. "Shhh!" Topher shushed. "Go on, Chris!"
"You'll have ten seconds to collect as many water balloons as you can! But these balloons are not actually filled with water! They're all filled with something slightly less pleasant than water."
"Which is?" Dave asked nervously.
"Who knows?" Chris shrugged. "Talc, paint, itching powder, bees, fire ants, spiders, bird poop, snot, ketchup, it's always a surprise!" Most of the campers' faces were etched with varying degrees of disgust and discomfort. Ella was the exception.
"Yay!" she cheered, clapping her hands. "Who doesn't love a surprise?"
"I know I will! If you get hit by any of the balloons' contents, you're out! It doesn't matter if the balloons are launched, thrown, kicked, dropped, sent by courier, or accidentally popped by yourself! So be careful, and be creative!" Chris blew his whistle."Get your balloons people!" he commanded. The campers crowded around the crate of balloons and aggressively grabbed as many as they could carry. Beardo managed to grab the most by stuffing a dozen or so in his afro and then grabbing another armful.
After the ten seconds were up, Chris blew his whistle again and the campers scampered off into the woods in random directions.
"The hunting doesn't start until you hear the air horn!" Chris shouted.
Confessional: Topher
"Chris and me are pretty tight! I wouldn't be surprised if he asked me to co-host or something-" HONK! "Oh! Gotta go!"
End Confessional
Topher burst out of the outhouse, only to find that the sound of the air horn had come from Beardo. The human soundboard snickered at Topher. "Really funny, man!" said Topher sarcastically. Topher ran off. A minute later, the air horn sounded for real.
Max walked along by himself. He came to a moderately-sized stone and looked around. Once he was certain he was alone, he put down his balloons and pushed the stone away, revealing a hole filled with miscellaneous junk. There was a wooden mallet, a gas mask, a bamboo shoot, a Halloween mask, a pair of pliers, some darts, and a remote control for a toy car. "Surely, there must be something I can build with these pieces. Something deadly and evil!" he muttered.
Confessional: Max
"I've hidden bits and pieces of pure evil all over this wretched island! Nya-ha-ha (cough)! My evil laugh is a work in progress. No matter! I shall win this challenge because of my abnormally large brain and super-advanced hearing! No one has ever, ever been able to sneak up on me!
End Confessional
Scarlett snuck up on Max and tapped him on the shoulder. Severely startled, Max dived headfirst into a nearby bush, his legs poking out comically. "What are you doing, Max?" Scarlett asked politely. "It's very technical." Max replied, despite his disposition. "You wouldn't understand."
"Okay." she shrugged and turned away to leave.
"Wait!" cried Max, expectedly. He pulled himself out of the bush and stood in front of Scarlett. He regained his composure. "Fine. If you must know, I'm going to tape everything I have into one long stick and attach my balloons to the end, thereby allowing me to hit people with said balloons from a safe distance."
"Wow! That's so evil!" Scarlett gushed, the temptation to roll her eyes killing her. Her acting was terrible but Max seemed to buy it.
"Yes, thank you!" said Max proudly.
"It's too bad there isn't a way to launch something… sharp!" Scarlett commented, trying to sound offhand. "You know, to pop their own balloons onto them?"
For a moment, Max looked as though he had been slapped in the face. He then gasped.
"I've got an even better idea! I'll build a rapid-fire balloon-busting device that fires projectiles and pops their balloon before they can throw them!" he declared.
"Wow! Your mind is so powerful!" Scarlett swooned insincerely.
Confessional: Max
"Scarlett is hopelessly in love with me, can't say I'm surprised. Girls love a bad boy! But I must stay focused on my work! Evil does not date! First I will control this island! Then this hemisphere, then the world! Haaa-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha! (Gasps) There it is! That was an evil laugh!"
End Confessional
Meanwhile, Sky was prowling through the woods on her own, looking for any Salmons to attack. She heard a twig snap behind her. She turned around quickly and prepared to strike. "Friendly!" Dave cried, throwing his hand up.
"Oh, hi, Dave!" said Sky, lightening up and smiling. "Hey, Sky! What say you and I team up? Watch each other's backs?" Dave suggested. Sky hesitated.
Confessional: Sky
"Dave's a nice guy, and I'd be lying if I said I didn't like him. But I have to keep my head in the game! I can't let myself be distracted by his eyes… (Blushes) or that hair… or his smile… Uh, what was I talking about? Oh, right! No distractions!"
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Confessional: Dave
"It's not like I'm falling for her. I mean, sure, she's really cute and freakin' awesome at everything she does! She has those deep eyes and silky hair… Oh, who am I kidding? I'm totally falling for her."
End Confessional
"Thanks, but I think I'll go it alone." said Sky. Disappointment popped onto Dave's face. "It's nothing personal, Dave! It's just easier to be silent when I'm by myself."
"You're saying you find me… distracting?" Dave asked slyly. Sky giggled. "You're… free to interpret it that way!" she replied.
"Wait, what was that?" Dave whispered loudly. He turned around, alarmed. "Get down!" He grabbed Sky by the arm and pushed her to the ground. He readied a balloon. Nearby, Max and Scarlett hid behind a bush. Max inserted a dart into his bamboo shoot. He blew into it, launching the dart into the balloon Dave was holding up.
"YARGH!" Dave screamed. "BEES!"
Upon popping, a cluster of killer bees emerged from Dave's balloon and swarmed him. Dave tried to run away but was stung at least a dozen times. "WE HAVE OUR FIRST CASUALTY!" Chris announced over the intercom. "DAVE HAS BEEN ELIMINATED MOST CLEVERLY BY MAX!"
"It worked!" Max boasted to Scarlett. "You should be taking notes on my genius!"
Confessional: Scarlett
"To set something straight, I'm just hanging around Max since He's about the most mildly entertaining teammate. Truth is, I don't get out much and He kinda reminds me of one of those Comedic 90s Villains. Its a bit Pathetic, but Enduring."
End Confessional
"Max is really enjoying the game!" Chris narrated. "Obviously, he doesn't know what kind of surprises are waiting in the rest of those balloons! Teehee! Stay tuned when we return to Total… Drama… Pahkitew Island!"
After the commercial break, we cut to Beardo stalking through the woods, casting suspicious looks everywhere. Rodney came up from behind a bush and spotted Beardo moving amongst the foliage. He grinned evilly.
"Sorry, Beardo! You should have gotten a haircut before ya came here!" He taunted quietly. He threw the balloon with all his might. The balloon landed softly in Beardo's afro and did not pop. Beardo whipped around and leered at Rodney, who smiled apologetically.
"AWOOOOOOOOOOOOOGA!" Beardo buzzed. Rodney let out a frightened yelp and tried to retreat, but Beardo pursued him, pulling balloons out of his afro and tossing them at the big guy.
After about six throws, which ending up littering the ground with cat vomit, boogers, fire ants, pink paint, snail slime, and crude oil, Gerald hits Rodney in the back of the head. Out popped a rattlesnake, which bit Rodney's forehead, right above his left eye.
"Bleh! Argh! Ow! Owie! Ow!" Rodney blubbered.
"AND GERALD TAKES OUT RODNEY!" Chris announced.
"Whoop! Whoop-whoop-whoop-whoop-whoop-whoop-whoop!" Beardo celebrated and gave Gerald a Thumbs-up. "Hehehe, Pop goes the Snake!" Gerald chuckled and then gets electrocuted by the Collar. "Worth it."
Confessional: Rodney
"You can't throw snakes at People! Unless the snakes are in a Balloon. Then it's okay."
End Confessional
Meanwhile, Dave was plucking stingers out of his arms and his back. "Dave! Are you okay?" Sky asked. "I'm fine!" said Dave painfully. "I've just been poisoned by bees, which I may be allergic to!"
"Are you sure?" Sky asked, concerned. "Well, I've been never been tested for it, but I've always suspected! It's better to air on the side of caution when dealing with dangerous insects." Dave said.
"Very true." said Sky. "You know, that was really chivalrous of you!" She complimented. "It was?" said Dave, the pain in his arms leaving his mind. "Yeah, that could have been me! Thanks for that!"
"Oh! Oh… You're welcome!" The two blushed for a moment. "Okay, I need to get back in the game!" said Sky seriously. "Dave, I need you to warn the others that Team Kinosewak are using our own balloons against us! We've lost two challenges already! We need to win this!"
"You got it, Sky!" said Dave, standing up. "I am on it! OW!"
Meanwhile, Chris was watching the action via television screen at the starting area, when Topher came up to him.
"Hey, Chris!" Topher called.
"Topher? You're in the middle of a challenge, dude!" said Chris.
"I know, but it's important!" said Topher urgently. "You need to call in the make-up department to do something about those crow's feet!" Chris looked nervous.
"Crow's… feet?" he uttered softly.
"Yeah, it looks like the crows were wearing cleats! What if kids start tweeting about how old you look and the network decides to replace you with a… younger host?"
"Replace? Me?!" Chris gasped in horror. "MAKEUP!" he screamed, running off. Topher smirked in satisfaction. A balloon flew over his head and he retreated.
Elsewhere…
Shawn was in the trees, following Jasmine. The tall girl weaved in and out of the trees effortlessly. She made no noise as she walked. "Even with all the branches and twigs on the ground, she moves so silently." said Shawn. "Wow!"
Confessional: Shawn
"Look, I don't wanna like her! Seventy-five percent of all men who die in zombie movies die because the girl they love becomes a zombie, and when the time comes to cut her head off, they get all sentimental about it and they hesitate! When there are zombies on your tail, thinking is the last thing you wanna be doing!"
End Confessional
Meanwhile, Ella was strolling carelessly through an open area in the forest, humming. A monarch butterfly flew to her, attracted by the sound of her voice.
"Hello, beautiful butterfly!" she greeted. She stuck out her hand and allowed the insect to land on it. "You're so delicate! You should hide until our game is done!"
She gently shooed the beautiful insect away. Before she knew what was coming, Elliot jumped out of the bush and was about to throw his balloons at her. "Wait, Elliot! It's me!" Ella screamed in fear before Elliot stopped. "Oh! Sorry about that! I thought you were someone from the other team." Elliot sets his balloons down for a minute before he looked to Ella. "So uhh...Is everything okay for you so far?" Elliot asked. "Why yes! Thank you for asking! Are you feeling alright?"
"Yeah. My back still kinda hurts but Its a little better. But umm, I kinda wanted to say that uhhh..." Elliot tried to say something but couldn't find what to say. Ella looked at him as she was wondering what He wanted to say. "I was wondering if you umm...uhhh...SOCIAL DISCOMFORT!" Elliot then runs away, Out of Nervousness.
Confessional: Elliot
"I have a hard time talking to many people but with Ella, She really is something else and I do like her quite a bit...because she's a good teammate! I just wish I had the courage to say something but its hard for me to talk to someone regularly sometimes."
End Confessional
Sky ran through the forest and stopped to rest by a nearby tree. "Psst!" cried a nearby voice. Sky looked around and saw one of the trees staring at her.
"This tree has eyeballs! Mutant tree!" Sky cried. "Whoa! Whoa! Whoa! It's me, Shawn!" said the tree. "I camouflaged myself with mud and moss!"
"Wow! That's pretty resourceful!" said Sky.
Confessional: Shawn
"Bakers have covered themselves in icing to hide in plain sight since the dawn of time. At least that's what my old boss at the bakery told me. Though mind you he also said the pyramids were built by pastry chefs so…"
End Confessional
"Shush! Here come Max and Scarlett!"
"You run!" Shawn commanded. "While they chase you, I'll hit 'em from behind!" Shawn hid behind the tree. Once Max and Scarlett spotted Sky, she ran off. Not fast enough to lose them, but that was the plan. As soon as the devious duo passed Shawn, he nailed them both in the back.
Scarlett was covered in green goop and Max in sneezing powder. "Revenge!" Max yelled, before falling into a sneezing fit. "Achoo! Achoo! Achoo!"
"Geez, Max!" said Scarlett angrily. "I thought you said no harm would come to me as long as I'm with you." Max ignored her. "AND SHAWN TAKES OUT MAX AND SCARLETT IN A DOUBLE-PLAY!"
"Awesome ambush, Shawn!" said Dave, just arriving. "Hey, not that it matters anymore, but Max burst my balloons while I holding them."
"Huh. That's pretty smart for Max!" Shawn commented. "Then again, it is the kind of dick move he would pull."
"Yeah, he's a real jerk, isn't he?"
"No kidding!" Neither boy had forgotten about Max stealing Chef's tennis ball blaster during the first challenge. And Dave knew Max was to blame for Pinky the pig splattering grease all over him in the second challenge.
Meanwhile, Rodney was looking for Amy. Having already been eliminated from the challenge, he figured it was time to sort out his love life.
"I have to just the right words to end my relationship with Amy, so isn't left shattered like a… cabbage… in a… cabbage shatterer thingy…." Rodney said to himself. Thanks to the snake bite, which was now swelling up, he was having trouble thinking. "Argh! Stupid snake bite!"
Johnny then came out from above him as he landed from the Ground. "Hey Big Guy, How's it going? Off to go tell, Amy that its over?" Johnny asked. "What!? Who told you that!?" Rodney asked in shock. "Oh, Don't pretend to not know. I've seeing how you've acted and I've got to say. What's the deal?"
"Uhh, I don't know what you're talking about..." Rodney said. "Look, I know you have some with Woman but The way of how you're going at it is all wrong and you're gonna get eliminated for being a Creep. I mean, Hasn't anyone ever called you out for this yet?" Johnny asked. "Not really. There was that one time when I tried to talk to a Girl at the Store...I think it was a girl? It could've been a Mannequin, but I know it had to be love! I had to have been!"
Johnny sighed and shook his head. "Listen Fella, From one Farm Boy to Another, You've got a LOT to learn about the Real World but don't forget that you're still in a Game. You came here because you want to win, Don't you? But you can't do that if you let Girls get in the way. That's just not the kind of thing that some girls will like. But listen, I think you and I could have some common ground so I'll tell you what, I could try giving the help you need and in Exchange, You and Me have an Alliance. No Chance that you'll score a Date with anyone but It will at least be helpful for you in Future. What do you say?"
Rodney stopped to think about it for a second before he nodded and shook hands with Johnny. "Deal!"
Confessional: Johnny
"In my case, This could be a Win-Win. If Rodney manages to change his ways, Not only do I have an Alliance but also have a Strong Player by my side, He fails then it's a Reason to Eliminate him either when we Lose this challenge or the Next...But I'm not doing this for Villainous intent. Just strategic. Hmmm, To be nice, I could try getting Thomas and Sammy into it but then again, Amy might be an Obstacle...Tough Call."
End Confessional
Timothy walked with Thomas as both of them were still in the game and looking for people to knock out. "So Tim, What do you think of our team so far? I think they're pretty great!" Thomas said. "Meh, They're okay I guess. Jasmine is a bit pushy, Scarlett and Max are...something, Topher is boring and Sammy and Amy are probably just okay. Nuff said." Timothy said, Indifferently. "What? I thought you'd like Sammy and Amy, They're both twins just like us! Perhaps, Maybe You would've liked Amy" Thomas said.
"What makes you think that I would like her?" Timothy questioned. "I mean, You guys are kinda similar, You guys make Mean Jokes, You insults your Twin Sibling a lot, and You both look like you don't let anyone push you around but instead that's your jobs!" Thomas points out. "Okay First of all, Yes. I do insult a lot but that doesn't imply that I HATE someone, not even you. It's sort of a Personality that I happen to possess but If I ever did Hate someone, I would make it clear and yet I haven't done that. Besides, She probably isn't my type since I feel like there's a reason for Amy to treat Sammy like that." Timothy explained.
"A reason? Like what?" Thomas said.
"I don't know. But I want to at least figure it out so that I could get it out of the way. I could careless if Ms. Ying and Yang get eliminated but at least want to get some closure" Timothy replied.
"Hmm, Then why don't we find out for ourselves! I can work on Sammy while you work on Amy! I can try getting some more Info from Sammy while you try to get some from Amy!" Thomas suggested.
"Thomas, Amy wouldn't give anyone the time out of her day to tell them her life story. I'd be lucky if she gives me a Minute."
"Oh! Let's see about it, They're they are!" Thomas sees The Girl Twins as they were arguing. "Way to make fools out of the both of us, Spareamy!" Amy scolded. She then proceeded to mock her sister. "Oh, I woulda been the first twin if you weren't so mean!"
"Aww, It's just like looking into a Mirror" Thomas said and Timothy rolled his eyes. "Oh brother."
"At least this time, if I go down, you're coming with me!" said Sammy.
"Good afternoon, Sammy!" said Thomas, approaching the twins. "Can Tim have a moment with Amy, please?"
"Thomas, Your Brother can have all of the moments with Amy!" said Sammy, before storming off in a huff. "Sammy! Wait for me!" Thomas called out to Sammy before running after her and leaving a Slightly frustrated Timothy with Amy. As soon as Sammy and Thomas left, Timothy began rubbing and squishing his face.
"What happened to you?" Amy asked. "Your face looks like a red pancake."
"Very informative. Sensitive skin makes it Red from Heat. Anyway, I kinda wonder what's the deal with You and Sammy? Why all the Tension?" Timothy asked. "Why the heck, Do you care? It's not even any of your business, anyway." Amy retorts.
"Well, I kinda think that there has to be a Reason behind it or is this your stupid way of Playing Jokes. Because I sure don't find it funny nor does anyone and I would know. Apparently, I'm the Comedic Twin in My Twin's Opinion." Timothy sarcastically said.
"And why should I care? You're stupid brother is all over my Sister and Thanks to him, He's convincing everyone to call her "Sammy", She's shouldn't even deserve that." Amy muttered. "You see? Only proves my point that you're just all Bark and No Bark. I mean, You do realize that if we lose this challenge, You'll be most likely to be sent home especially now that Most of our Team can tell you and your sister apart, even with the Show you both put on, It's simply an Inevitable Fate that will be brought onto you. Karma even."
Amy had thought about it as she does seem to think that He made a Good Point. She grunted and sighed. "Okay Fine. I'll hear you out and maybe tell you what you need to know, but You tell ANYONE about this, You go from "Four Eyes" to NO eyes! Clear!?" Amy Threatened.
"Crystal." Timothy calmly said.
Author: I am not planning on making Tim and/or Amy villains. While you may think it would be interesting, I choose to not go for that direction since I've already made up my mind for what I plan to do for Future Chapters but still am willing to listen to Suggestions at anytime. Thank you.
Meanwhile…
Chris had returned to the starting area with distinctly less noticeable crow's feet.
"Wow!" Topher gushed. "Nice makeup job! You look twenty years younger! It's like you're thirty again!"
"I am thirty!" Chris snapped, offended.
"Oh!" cried Topher, looking embarrassed. "Uh, yeah! I knew that! And now you look it! But you could use some moisturizer!"
Chris leered at Topher, who backed up nervously. Chris looked up, took a step back, and smiled.
Topher was hit in the back of the head by a doom balloon from Sky and was now covered in daddy longlegs.
"Thank you!" Chris called.
"ARGH! SPIDERS IN MY HAIR! SPIDERS IN MY HAIR!" Topher cried, running away and frantically trying to shake them off.
"Alright!" Sky cried. "Take that, floating salmon!"
"You're outta balloons, Sky." Chris pointed out. "You might wanna skedaddle!"
Realizing that Chris was right, Sky ran off into the woods to find Beardo.
"Beardo?! Beardo?!" she cried recklessly. She kept her eyes out for Jasmine, Amy, and Sammy, the three who were left.
She heard whistling noise. Determining that it was Beardo, Sky raced in the direction the sound was coming from, all the more cautious to be on the lookout for more of her opponents. Luckily, all she came across was Beardo.
"Beardo! You have any more balloons?" Sky asked desperately. Beardo smiled and nodded.
"Cha-ching!" Beardo imitated the sound of a cash register and inclined his head, causing four balloons to fall out of his afro. "Good thinking, Beardo!" said Sky, picking up the balloons.
"WEE-WOO! WEE-WOO! WEE-WOO!" Beardo urgently imitated the sound of police sirens, grabbed Sky, and dove into the bushes, narrowly avoiding being bombed by Jasmine, swinging in on a rope. "Whoa! That was close!" Sky gasped. "Beardo, you distract her, and I'll try to ambush her from the trees!"
Beardo gave a thumbs-up and hopped out of the bush.
Confessional: Beardo
"Nothing against Jasmine or anything, but I was kinda hoping for a rematch!"
End Confessional
"Ooh-ooh-ooh!" Beardo made gorilla noises. He spotted Jasmine in the trees. Jasmine threw a balloon at him and missed.
Confessional: Jasmine
"How is such a tubby bloke so agile?"
End Confessional
Beardo tossed two balloons at Jasmine, but neither of them reached their target. The first one failed to reach the required altitude to hit Jasmine and the second was blocked by a branch. Beardo, reached into his afro, only to find that he was out of balloons. Mimicking the sound of tires squealing, Beardo retreated. Jasmine pursued him through the treetops, skipping gracefully through the treetops like a spider monkey.
Jasmine nailed Beardo in the back of his neck, drenching him in bird poop. Beardo let out a fart noise in response.
"Yes!" Jasmine cried.
"No!" Jasmine cried.
While Jasmine was celebrating, Sky had gotten the upper hand on her and hit her with a doom balloon. Jasmine was covered in India ink.
"(Whomp-whomp-whomp-whoooooomp!)" Beardo teased.
"BEARDO HAS BEEN TAKEN OUT BY JASMINE! JOHNNY AND RODNEY HAVE ALSO BEEN TAKEN OUT ALONG WITH ELLIOT AND ELLA BY UNKNOWN REASONS!" Chris announced. "BUT IT LOOKS LIKE IT WAS A SACRIFICE THAT ALLOWED SKY TO TAKE OUT JASMINE! ONLY TWO PEOPLE LEFT ON EACH TEAM! IT'S NOW SHAWN, SKY AND GERALD VERSUS TIM, TOM, AMY AND SAMMY!"
Sky dropped to the ground and began running through the woods in an attempt to find the twins. She ran so fast that she eventually ended up tripping over a stone and dropping all of her remaining balloons. They all popped, but luckily none of the contents made contact with Sky's person.
Once Sky got to her feet, Thomas and Sammy popped out of the bushes with two balloons each. Thomas threw both of his, but Sky managed to barely avoid them. Sammy threw hers and…
"Argh! What the-?!" A white powder had been coated across Sky. An unbearable itch came across her arms and scalp. She started scratching violently. "ARRRRRRRRRGH!" she screamed in frustration as she tromped off.
"AND SKY IS TAKEN OUT BY AMY! OR SAMMY! I DUNNO, I CAN'T TELL!"
"Well done, Sammy!" Jasmine complimented. "You took out Sky!"
"Nice shot, Sammy! You got her!" Thomas Complimented.
"Alright, now Shawn is the only one left! I spotted his hiding spot a little while back! Follow me!"
Jasmine led the twins to the edge of a short cliff about forty feet high. Peeking over the edge, they could see Shawn hiding in a cluster of bushes, poking his head out. His camouflage had worn off a little bit.
"He's right below us!" Jasmine whispered.
"Oh boy…" Sammy mumbled. "That's a long drop! You take the shot, Jasmine! I don't wanna mess it up!"
"I can't, Sammy! I'm out!" Jasmine said. "Hell, I don't even know if I'm allowed to be doing this!"
"It's our last balloon!"
"You can do this, Sammy!" Jasmine encouraged.
Little did they know, Gerald has been hiding away from the Entire Challenge like a Tiger in the Jungle as He had sneaked up from behind them. Sammy was about to throw the Balloon before Gerald came out and spooked them. "BOO!" Gerald shouted which caused them to get startled and Sammy accidentally bursted the Balloon, Getting herself covered with Tree Sap along with Jasmine.
"NO!" Jasmine screamed, her and the twins now covered in tree sap. "Hehe Nice Try, Stephaine Irwin and Sammy-sulks a-lot! You almost had him!" Gerald laughed before he ran away.
Confessional: Gerald
"Yeah. I was hiding away for most of Challenge to gather some of the Balloons that nobody was using or Stupidly left around. I also took some of the things that came out of some of the Balloons that did burst for better use. Friendly Fired some of my Teammates without anyone knowing, too. I was hiding up in the Trees throughout most of the game and dropped them onto Kinosewaks' Members. Even made my team believe that some of them were hit by them. Now with Me and Gerald as the last to remain, Tim and Amy will be wiped out easily especially since I've got some Inventory. I did get Electrocuted by my Collar...a LOT but It was worth it!"
End Confessional
Gerald had soon caught up with Shawn as they had agreed to work together to take out Timothy and Amy. Amy and Timothy had popped out soon enough. Amy threw both hers, but Shawn managed to avoid them. Timothy threw his but was able to avoid them, easily. Gerald had then pulled something out from his Prison Jumpsuit and tossed it at them. It was a Piece of his Shirt ripped off that had Honey covered in it. It ended up with a Swarm of Bees coming at Amy and Timothy as they were surrounded by Bees.
"Now!" Gerald shouted. He and Shawn threw their last few Balloons and Managed to hit both of them and Knocking them out.
"GAME OVER!" Chris announced. "TEAM MASKWAK WINS!"
Gerald and Shawn cheered as they high-fives one another. Tim and Amy ran away screaming as the Bees were now chasing after them.Chris called the teams back to starting area.
"Tonight's winners get to enjoy dinner from Mary's Lamburger!" Chris announced, holding up the menu. "That's Mary's Lamburger & BBQ Emporium! Mary had a little lamb! Teehee! HAD!"
Chef snickered.
"AROOOOOOOOOOO!" Beardo howled like a wolf as Chris handed the menu and notepad to Sky.
Later that evening…
The Floating Salmons had retreated to their treehouse for the night. After taking baths, The Girl Twins underwent a bit of a wardrobe change. Amy and Sammy had changed into their Casual Clothes, which had Amy wearing Dark Purple Jeans with a Same Colored Shirt jacket with rolled up sleeves and a Red Shirt underneath while Sammy wore something different except she puts on Earring and her hair into a Ponytail with Bangs.
Currently, Amy and Sammy were out on the deck, having been excused so that the rest of the team could discuss elimination. They silently leered at each other. Both had given their cases to the team as to why the other should be voted off.
"I'm gonna vouch for Sammy!" said Jasmine. "I could tell for a fact that it was her who took out Sky! And she forages with me every morning!"
"Yes, but only because Amy makes her!" said Max. "Besides, Samey's way uglier!"
"They're identical twins!" Jasmine argued.
"Personally, I like the idea of keeping them both here!" said Topher. "The more drama, the better the ratings, am I right?"
"Who cares about the bloody ratings?!" Jasmine argued.
"Chris does!" said Topher. "After all, he's trying to put on a great show!"
"Yeah, well, I'm trying to win a competition! I don't care if the show's popular or not."
"PIMAPOTEW KINOSEWAK!" Chris called. "IT'S TIME TO BREAK UP THE FAMILY! PLEASE HEAD TO THE ELIMINATION AREA SO YOUR OPPONENTS CAN WATCH YOU KICK SOMEONE OUT WHILE EATING DINNER! TEEHEE!"
Confessional: Rodney
"Definitely not, Johnny. We made a Deal that if I joined an Alliance with him then He'd help me find my True love! No way can I passed that up!"
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Confessional: Topher
"So, obviously one of the twins is going home tonight. The question is, which one do I vote for? The one that'll cause more drama? Or the one that helps Jasmine in bring in breakfast?"
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Confessional: Johnny
"Most of us are choosing to vote for either Sammy or Amy. Hmmm, I don't remember seeing Topher that much since he's been sticking up to Chris most of the Time but Amy isn't very helpful as far as Morality and her constant bickering with Sammy might get old. Hard to pick.
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Confessional: Thomas
"Me and Sammy are thinking about Voting for Amy but then again, Maybe someone on our team could be a Threat in future. I wonder who?"
End Confessional
Outside, both twins stood up.
"Enjoy being cannon fodder, Spareamy!" Amy taunted.
"We'll see!" said Sammy.
Elimination Ceremony: Pimâpotew Kinosewak
This time, the Floating Salmons arrived to see the Confused Bears in the peanut gallery. Dave and Sky sat in the back, while Shawn, Beardo, and Ella sat in the front.
As though he was waiting for them to arrive, Chef came out and handed the Tigers their meals as soon as the Eagles arrived. Sky had ordered lamb chops. Dave and Shawn ordered lamb burgers. Beardo ordered a steak. Ella ordered a salad.
After the Eagles cast their votes, they sat down and waited for Chris.
"Alright, players!" said Chris, once he arrived. "If I hand you a marshmallow, you're safe! For now!"
"Jasmine!"
"Topher!"
"Scarlett!"
"Rodney!"
"Johnny!"
"Thomas!"
"Timothy!"
"And Max!"
Chris tossed marshmallows to the named campers. When Max's name was called, the Tigers let out groans of disappointment.
"Oh come on!" Shawn cried indignantly.
"Wow!" said Chris. "Looks like you're making yourself some enemies, Max!"
"'Tis the true measure of a villain. You simply count his enemies!" said Max, seemingly pleased.
"If you say so!" said Chris. He then turned to the twins. Amy had a relaxed, confident smile on her face and was folding her arms. Sammy had a worried frown and held her arms behind her back.
"Amy, Samey, one of you is going home tonight and can never come back!"
Confessional: Topher
"Yeah right, old man! Tell that to Eva, Izzy, Owen, Courtney, Duncan, and Dakota!"
End Confessional
"Amy, you seemed to be more concerned with bossing Samey around than you are with helping your team!" said Chris. "And Samey, you seem more concerned with making yourself out to be a victim of bullying. But here's the thing: You deserve it for being born second! Every older sibling should have the right to treat their younger sibling like a slave! And the sister heading home is…"
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"Neither!"
"WHAT!?"
"That's Right! I'm considering this challenge to be a Reward Challenge! The Head Producer of Total Drama had recently gave me a Call that He had came up with a Pretty fun idea for you! We're gonna be revisiting the once Boney Island but sending one of you into Exile, Just like in All-Stars! Except this time, Not only is there a Chris Mclean Immunity Idol, But instead, There is now a GOLDEN Chris Mclean Idol! The Idol will not only be save your team after they lost a Challenge but whoever finds it first, They will have the option to whether or not eliminate a Contestant from the Winning Team or Simply take their Last Minute Victory and claim the entire Challenge as a Reward Challenge!"
"So, If Someone were to find Both, They can't be tocuhed either way?" Gerald asked.
"Only one Teammate can have the Immunity Idol and only one Teammate can have the Golden Idol. Both Teams can NOT have both. Just to make things fair, so since Sammy and Amy have the most votes...Sammy will be sentenced to Exile on Boney Island!"
"WHAT!?" Sammy and Amy shrieked.
"The Boss figured the ones with the most votes against them will be either one to be exiled and I get to choose who that would be and so, Sammy it is! Unless...anyone might have any Objections?"
Thomas looks with a lot of worry as He was about to see Sammy getting sent to Boney Island before he stood up. "Wait! I'll go! Take me instead!"
Team Kinosewak gasped in shock. Sammy herself was possibly the most shocked of all. "Wait. You're choosing to go for me? Why?" Sammy asked, slightly saddened. "Sorry Sammy but I don't wanna watch such a great person like you get hurt out their. After what happened to those from All-Stars, I'd rather it'd be me who gets attacked by the Wildlife!"
"Ooooh, Then you're gonna love this next part! The Entire Boney Island is filled with all the Mutated Animals from Revenge of the Island, Including Larry! Its gonna be one Adventure for a One Night stay!" Chris chuckled.
Confessional: Johnny
"LUCKY! I used to watch Total Drama, Revenge of the Island and I LOVED it! Seeing all those Mutated Monsters everywhere was so cool and I even tried to Audition for the Season but My Audition Tape didn't make the Cut! Now we get a chance to go on an Island FILLED with them!? Man...I would choose to go but I guess I could give Thomas, a Pass. He is doing this for Sammy after all and I gotta respect the Homies. But still...Lucky."
End Confessional
"Thomas! You can't do that! You might get seriously hurt out there!" Sammy protested. "Don't worry about me, Sammy. At least you'll be safer here and I'll be fine! I might be Stupid and Not much for Paying attention to many things-"
"Heh. Now he's telling the Truth" Timothy whispers to Scarlett as she chuckled.
"But I'm willing to be up for the Challenge since Its in the name of helping My best friend! Besides, If I find either one, It'll Really benefit our team so I can handle this! Trust me!" Thomas said.
"Alright. If that's about all, Time to go" Chris said as the Helicopter picked up Thomas as It takes him to Boney Island. Sammy gave a Saddened expression while Amy took a deep breath and sigh of relief.
"Looks like the Brawn with no Brain is gonna be sleeping with the Mutated Fishes! Wonder if he might need some serious Medical Attention? 18 players remain! But only one goes home with a million dollars! Find out who lasts and who blasts! On the next Total… Drama… Pahkitew Island!"
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