Jos the hedgehog

hello everone iam kinda new to fan fic writeing so please comment and hope you enjoy)

((ok this fan fic is of one of my characters i made jos the hedgehog, aquar coloured hedgehog who weilds the sword he has a small history so you will get to know him a bit more he is mainly quiet and polite but still fun loveing, also iam not a spelling master so I might get a fair few words wrong))

jos runs through a jungleish place what wasnt to far from a suburban towns, it was a starry cool night so he didnt have to worrie about anyone finding him, he doesnt go full speed because he wants to admire the beautr of the planet he just landed on, he stops at a hill thats covered in flowers with a big tree danceing with the wind in the middle, he picks a flower up and sniffs it 'sweet this place is swee... havent been to a place that feels so welcomeing and free, best part is the good old...' he thinks as he sits under the tree and cross his legs 'relaxashon' he closes his eyes for about five minutes.

cream skips down the road holding her basket and stops and sits near the flowers "come on cheese we need to make mr, sonic, tails and mr. knuckles flower crowns for helping out in town" she says to her best chao buddy cheese.

jos befor being seen jumps up into the tree befor she could see him 'whats she doing up this late' he thinks as he watchs her.

"doctor eggman" boko (i think thats him) "WHAT! dont you know what time it is!" eggman yells "yes yess doctor but the little rabbit and her chao are on screen" boko say pointing to the screen, eggman strokes his mostash and gives an evil laugh "she could be a helpful steping stone for my egg empire, boko ready the sucko vac" he said as the droid left.

jos's ears twitched 'air ship... doesnt sould like any ive hear befor' he thought

"cream lets get some purple for mr. knuckles..." cream looks up at eggmans ship and drops her flowers "what do you want eggman!" she said in a annoyed voice, eggman didnt say anything, his vacume was over cream and she was to scared to move.

'grrr... that eggman might be with them...awww gotta help her' he jumps from the branch pulls his sword from its holder and slices the vacume and chucks a small marble into the end what started to suck, he lands and grabs her hand "come on better some where else then with this loser" he says politly and starts to run a safe speed for her.

"ahhh, what happened! boko report" he says all confused 'was that sonic nah! looks to young for him' he thinks as boko enters "welll" he says to boko as boko hands him the marble "ummm whats this" eggmans wonders "it was the only thing that got sucked up" boko says, eggman taps it twice then it explodes in his face "GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR AFTER THAT HEDGEHOG!" he screams turning red from anger.

cream feels a bit embarrised as both of them starts to slow "um thank you mr..." cream says still holding his hand "jos is my name and i gusse saveing princess is my game" he says with a little giggle, cream smiles "iam cream and this is my chao buddy cheese" she says "nice to meet you both...um but its getting late i better get you home...ummm what way is it?" he asks cream points right "that way" she says feling comfortabl with him.

"grrrrr THERE HE HIS FIRE!" eggman says hitting a button with a big x mark on it what sent out at lease 50 missiles.

jos looks up and holds his sword tight "cream" he says in a serious voice "hang on" he picks her up and takes off like a bullet evading all the missiles, he spots a cliff 'just perfect' he thinks and runs up it he then places cream at the top of the cliff then jumps off it to jump from missile to missile getting closer to eggmans ship, he pulls his sword out again.

"hey cream whos you new pal" sonic says helping her up "well mr. sonic he jos" sonic looks at jos as he gets closer to eggmans ship.

"FIRE! FIRE! FIRE!" eggman repeats, jos jumps the last missile and smashs through the hull ... it goes quite for awhile then cream and sonic start to hear small bangs and booms until eggmans ship becomes a ball of fire and pops like i zit sending eggman and his robots flying twords the sea and jos flying at sonic.

sonic side steps and grabs jos, jos opesn his eyes and cloes then and falls asleep.

TO BE CONTINUED

(comment and i did this at 11 pm so i might not realy be with it so please comment)